Here we are, my first attempt at a One Piece story. I saw Soul Eater and got the idea for the Grim Reaper from that and I thought it might be cool to try to add it to One Piece.

I don't own One Piece.

"Eek! Pirates!"

A young woman cries out over the waltz music as the passenger ship she and the other wealthy were on was bombarded by cannon fire. Off the starboard side a very… feminine ship was unloading its cannons and sending its pirate onto the passenger ship. It's a wonder the guards didn't discover the pirate ship earlier; it was pink, had a swan for a figurehead, and a Jolly Roger with a heart on it.

Needless to say, the passengers and crew were scared beyond belief and were frantically searching for a way out. As the all the pirates began to converge on the dance hall, one lone fat figure stood out of all of them. She was large, portly, freckled, and currently in charge of the situation.

"Alright!" She thundered. "This ship is now under the boot of Captain Alvida and her beauty demands that every single one of you start donate all your valuables to us. Now!"

The hostages had no choice but to do what the pirate hag demanded, all except one. Hidden and now wearing her preferred blue and white shirt and an orange skirt with matching high-heeled boots instead of the weighty dress she subjected herself to wearing in hopes of doing a little pick pocketing with the gentlemen while dancing, an orange haired girl quickly darted to a rope that a pirate swung on to reach the ship and stealthily boarded Alvida's pink ship.

While Alvida was doing the usual pirate business a small, meek looking boy was roaming the halls of the passenger ship. With his square glasses and pink scruffy hair, Coby definitely didn't look like a pirate, yet he's the unfortunate cabin boy for Alvida.

"Stupid ugly Alvida, if only I can find a way to escape from her fat hands and reach a Marine base." Coby deeply sighed while in thought. As he reached the ship's kitchen he noticed a large barrel seemingly out of place. It was still dripping with seawater so Coby could only imagine that the crew of the ship only recently fished it out of the ocean.

Before he could inspect it however three men from Alvida's crew found Coby and made their way to him.

"Hey Coby, what's that you got there?" One of the men asked.

"A barrel that was just laying here. I don't know what's in it though."

"A barrel eh? Must have some booze in it." Another man said. "Let's crack it open and take some swigs."

"I don't think Alvida would like that." Coby warned.

"She's busy with those passengers. Besides, this little drink never leaves this room right?" All three pirates all look at Coby who was furiously nodding in agreement.

"Alright let's break the lid open." The burliest man of the bunch tried his best to pry open the lid but it was stuck. He tried again but still to no avail.

"Grr! this lid's stuck shut." The man complained as he gave the barrel a light kick in his frustration. The other men began discussing who would try next. Noises came from the barrel and Coby stopped in his tracks.

"Noises? Just what's in there?" Coby thought questioningly.

"Hey, Coby, unless you're going to try with those scrawny arms move over."

Coby quickly moved over as another man cracked his knuckles just before he grabbed the lid and pulled.

Suddenly a pillar of blackish-red mist exploded out of the barrel, flinging the pirate across the kitchen and knocking him out. As the dark mist stopped growing, it dissipated to reveal a young man.

He wore a black suit with a red undershirt and a black tie with black slacks and combat boots. He also wore black fingerless leather gloves on his hands. The only thing out of place was the straw hat on his head. His eyes were as black as the midnight sky as was his spiky dark hair. His face was marred by a stitch-like scar under his left eye.

Coby and the other two pirates were scared out of their minds and watched in awe as the new figure yawned and stretched as the dark mist around him finally disappeared.

"Ahh! That was a great nap. Too bad about my boat but at least I lived." The kid joked. He looked around confused as to why he was in a ship and looked at Coby and the two men.

"Hmm? Who are you?"

"THAT'S OUR LINE!" The three exclaimed.

"Oh! I'm Monkey D. Luffy. Nice to meet ya." Luffy introduced himself with a dramatic bow.

"I don't care who you are ya ass. You're dead." One pirate charged forward with his sword unsheathed.

"Look out Luffy!" Coby couldn't help but scream.

Luffy didn't even look fazed. Just as the man slashed at him, Luffy ducked, grabbed the man's arm, and swung him behind him into the wall. The resulting crash effectively knocked the guy out and made a huge hole in the wall.

The last pirate was already in mid-charge when Luffy was turned around to face him. Luffy dodged to his left and let loose a punch that sent the pirate into another wall.

Coby could only watch with his mouth agape. Here this unknown guy just beat three pirates so easily. He barely noticed when Luffy walked right in front of him and when he did he fell onto his back in shock.

"Ahh! Don't hurt me!" Coby pleaded with his eyes shut.

Luffy looked confused. "Why would I hurt you?"

"Y-you won't?"

"Well you didn't fight me. So no. Anyway is there any food here? I'm so hungry after that long nap I had." Luffy patted his stomach as it growled.

"Well I guess that pantry there has something you can eat." Coby pointed. Luffy smiled widely and grabbed Coby's arm and ran inside. Once inside Luffy instantly found a bag of apples and began to stuff himself, only stopping once in a while to spit cores out.

"So," Luffy said between mouthfuls. "Who are you by the way?"

Coby situated himself on the floor and watched Luffy eat. "My name's Coby."

"Oh. So what are you doing with those pirate guys? You don't look like one."

"Well, I always dreamed of becoming a Marine. But the boat I was on was attacked by Alvida and I was forced to become her cabin boy so she can spare me."

"Oh."

Coby suddenly grew wide-eyed. "Oh no! Alvida!"

"Hmm?" Luffy stopped to look at Coby who looked scared out of his mind.

"If she finds out what happened here we're dead." Coby explained. Luffy still looked on confused and slowly ate more apples.

"Then we'll just get out of here." Luffy said simply. Coby looked at him deadpanned.

"We can't just escape like that Luffy. She'll catch us and then beat us to death with that iron mace of hers."

"Then we'll fight."

"We can't win against her either. We're dead either way."

Luffy finally finished the sack of apples and burped and patted his stomach. "You're a weakling aren't you?"

Coby looked shocked. "W-well I-I umm."

"If you really want to become a Marine and fight pirates, you can't just hide away and run when you have to face them. I'll kick this Alvida's ass."

Coby managed a small smile at Luffy's enthusiasm. "W-well I still think the best way is to find a small boat and sail away without anyone watching. I think there might be one somewhere on this boat-"

"COBY!"

A large holler rang through the halls that shocked Coby. Luffy looked unfazed however and found another sack of apples and started eating those.

"Luffy." Coby shook Luffy. "We have to find a way out of here."

"Oh," Luffy finished his apples before stuffing some in his pockets. "I know. Follow me"

Before Coby could reply, Luffy kicked down the pantry door and found a very fat woman not too far from them.

"Ah! Alvida!" Coby yelled as he hid behind Luffy.

"Coby! Just who is this boy and why are you hiding behind him?" Alvida demanded as she gripped her studded iron mace and plopped it on her shoulder.

"This is Alvida?" Luffy asked while raising a brow. "I thought you called her a she."

"You little insolent pest!" Alvida roared. "Coby! Tell me, who is the most beautiful woman of all the seas and lands?"

Normally Coby would answer that Alvida was the most beautiful, fearing for his life, while Kami knows that's a flat out lie. In his eyes even a whale is more beautiful than her freckled fat face.

"N-not you! You ugly old sea hag!" Coby all but yelled, releasing all his pent of frustration. Alvida looked even more pissed while Luffy laughed.

"Hahahahaha. That's a good one Coby." The straw hat-wearing boy guffawed.

"I'm gonna kill both of ya!" Alvida roared. Before she could even lift her legs Luffy grabbed Coby and raced up the stairs, leaving an angry Alvida to slowly wobble up another flight.

Once Luffy and Coby ran up to the ship's top, Alvida's entire crew was waiting for them, all with their swords and guns ready.

"Ahhh! We're dead." Coby screamed.

Luffy grinned and waved to them. "Hi."

"Get them guys!"

The pirates charged forward with their weapons ready to devastate Luffy who was still grinning ear to ear.

"Stand back Coby." Luffy cracked his neck and got ready to fight. Coby could only nod and gulped as the pirate drew closer.

Luffy reached into his suit and grabbed two handles that appeared in his pockets. He yanked the items out and revealed them to be two pistols. They were unusual pistols that no one could describe, except that they looked like a cross between guns and blades.

(Two Velvet Nightmares like the ones from Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children.)

Luffy twirled his weapons as the pirates continued their charge. He suddenly vanished and appeared in the center of the crowd. He slashed the gunblades like they were knives, leaving several gashes along their torsos.

"What in the world was that?" Coby asked. Luffy smiled at him and twirled the gunblades before they vanished in a wisp of black smoke.

"Oh yeah. I forgot to tell you. My mother was my island's resident mad scientist. She got ahold of dozens of Devil Fruits and mixed some of their powers together into one. The end result was the Grim-Grim Fruit. I ate it and now I'm the Grim Reaper incarnated. The shadows are my toys. The darkness is my ally. The fires of hell and the lightning of heaven are mine to wield." Luffy declared with his eyes glowing a bloody red while the black-red mist surrounded his body like a miasma.

Coby actually looked scared at what Luffy was really capable of.

Luffy laughed. "You don't have to worry. My power is only to take down my enemies. Not friends." Coby looked relieved after hearing that.

"I'll give you a ticket to hell then!"

Coby barely scrambled away from Alvida's sweating form as she emerged from the deck below. As Luffy turned around she swung her mace right on his head.

Luffy smirked as the mace impacted with his head and sent his body through the floor.

"Luffy!" Coby yelled.

"Ahahahaha." Alvida laughed. "You little runt. Now who's laughing?" She cackled.

"I am." Luffy's voice said. Alvida and her conscious crew turned their heads and saw a black-red mist billow softly from the floor next to where Alvida's mace had struck. From the mist, emerged Luffy. He rose from below the ground like he was a ghost risen from his grave.

"What, what the hell?" Alvida shrieked.

"It'll take more than a big club to take me down. Shishishi." Luffy laughed. He held his arm up and the mist converged into his palm before it solidified. Luffy now wielded an obsidian black staff that was a foot longer than himself with a crescent, double-edged sickle on its end. The back of the sickle was curved so it was shaped like a hook.

It was a scythe, the weapon of the Grim Reaper himself.

Luffy gripped the handle with both hands and cocked his scythe back.

"Lady Alvida!" The pirates yelled.

Coby looked on wordlessly as Luffy unleashed his attack.

"Shadow Scythe!" Luffy slashed and the staff struck Alvida in the stomach with enough force that sent the woman flying into the sky.

"Ugh." Luffy patted his stomach as some sweat rolled down his face. "So hungry."

"Luffy, that was amazing!" Coby gleamed. By now all the pirates were frozen in their places and only watched the two boys talk.

"Hahaha. Well," Luffy turned to the pirates. "Anyone of you guys know where we can find a small boat?"

Before the pirates could respond a flurry of cannonballs flew into the ship, rocking the pink ship.

"What was that?" Luffy and Coby were hurrying to their feet and Coby's eyes lit up at the sight of a Marine ship.

"It's the Marines. Wow. I never saw as ship in action before!"

Luffy jumped onto a dinghy and yelled for Coby to hurry.

Coby jumped on and they released the ropes suspending it into the air as the boat dropped 40 feet, crashing into the water. As the boat landed onto the water, it surprised an orange-haired girl that was securing a large bag of gold to her own little boat. She let out a small yelp as she looked at the person who caused it. Their eyes met and time seemed to have stop for a couple seconds before everything went back to normal. However, the girl didn't notice a cannonball coming towards her, when she did notice however; it was about 30 feet from hitting her directly.

Luffy noticed this and narrowed his eyes as it approached the woman. He suddenly vanished in a burst of black-red smoke before re-appearing between the girl and the cannonball.

Luffy effortlessly cut the cannonball in two and sent the pieces back flying at the ships, one piece smashing through two ships and causing them to sink and the other completely obliterated the remaining ship.

"Marines firing at a defenseless girl? I hardly call that fair." Luffy said with his back still facing the girl.

The orange-haired girl just looked at the person standing in front of her and then the wreckage of the 3 massive marine ships.

"Did he just destroy 3 marine ships without even trying?" She thought. She just looked at the back of the boy standing in front of her, his broad shoulders making him look more intimidating, his raven hair all messy, the straw hat dangling from his neck with his massive and vicious-looking scythe in his hand. She kept staring at him admiringly until she remembered the situation she was just in.

"Th-thanks for saving me just then." She managed to muster out.

Luffy slowly turned around and gave a heart-warming smile to the girl. He looked at her and stared right into her eyes. He was just staring at them, lost in their gaze. He managed to gain back his senses and replied,

"Oh no problem, you should be more careful next time." He said while smiling at her again.

This caused the orange-haired girl to blush from both embarrassment and thinking that the boy who had just saved her was cute. She simply nodded and he smiled yet again which made her heart flutter. He teleported back to his boat.

"Well I'll see you later, bye." He said while walking to sit down in his boat and lowered the sail.

She managed to wave at the boy as she was still staring at him still amazed at his strength. "Get yourself together! You have to stay focused on your goal remember!?"She mentally slapped herself as she finished securing her treasure and began sailing off.

(With Luffy and Coby, many hours later)

Coby took in the sight of the new island. He knew there was a Marine base situated here and supposedly the bounty hunter Roranoa Zolo was being kept here.

"Well I think there's another person who could join your crew Luffy."

"Who's that Coby?"

"On this island there's a bounty hunter called Roranoa Zolo. He's a swordsman but he hunts pirates for a living so I don't think…"

"Cool!" Luffy exclaimed. "Let's find him and ask."

"Wait Luffy!" Coby yelled as Luffy ran off towards the town.

By the time Coby caught up to Luffy the straw hat-wearing boy had already absentmindedly asked some of the townsfolk if they know where Zolo was being held.

"Excuse me. Do you know where Zolo is?"

Before Luffy could finish, the people around him had run off. Luffy looked confused.

"What did I do wrong?"

"I guess they don't like talking about Zolo." Coby concluded.

"Oh well, let's see if we can find him ourselves."

Soon the two did find Zolo, just not in the state they expected. He was bloodied and tied on a cross to the left of the seaside Marine base. Luckily there was no one patrolling the area so Luffy and Coby jumped, or in Coby's case was thrown, over the fence so they could get a closer look at the bounty hunter.

Besides the blood and grit on his body, Zolo also looked famished and overall tired. He wore a dirty white shirt and black pants. On his head he wore a green bandana that sort of covered his mint colored hair and on his left ear were three gold earrings for some odd reason. His breaths were deep and he gave Luffy a glare as he approached him.

"Get out of here." Zolo heaved.

"Nope. You wanna join my crew?"

Coby nearly tripped at Luffy's bluntness while Zolo looked shocked.

"You kidding me, right? Do I look like that kind of person? Do you even know who I am?"

"Yep," answered Luffy. "And I don't really care. I want you on my crew."

Zolo looked down to Coby. "Hey kid, is this guy right in the head?"

Coby shrugged. "I don't really know. He's strong though."

"Aren't you supposed to be a swordsman? Where's your swords?" Luffy asked.

"If I had my swords I wouldn't be TIED HERE WOULD I?" Zolo exclaimed as Luffy's stupidity.

"Hahahaha," Luffy laughed. "You're pretty funny. You're definitely on my crew now."

"Umm excuse me?"

All three guys looked behind Luffy and Coby to find a little girl with pigtails holding some rice balls.

"Umm, these are for you Zolo. I made them for you and you looked really hungry." The little girl said meekly.

"Umm Luffy I think we should leave them for a minute." Coby proposed to a salivating Luffy.

"Aw why? Those rice balls look good." Luffy pouted before begrudgingly pulled aside by Coby

"You shouldn't be here Rika. If they find you here they'll kill you and me." Zolo said. Rika didn't back off though and offered one to Zolo's mouth.

"Hey, you little brat!"

The four of them looked over and saw a purple suit-wearing blonde stroll towards them with a few Marines behind him.

"Can't you read the sign outside the fence you little squirt? Anyone caught here will face the same punishment as the criminal here. Are you really going to risk your life to-Ooh rice balls."

The blond grabbed the one in front of Zolo's face and took a bite.

"Yeuck! Disgusting." The man threw it to the ground and stomped it flat and grinded it into the dirt just for good measure.

"Now just what should we do with you girlie?" The blond asked more to himself than the Marines behind him. "One of you, throw this girl over the fence."

"But Helmeppo, she's just a girl."

"I don't care! Father will get angry with you if I don't get what I want. And do you want my father angry?" Helmeppo said. That effectively shut the Marines up and one slowly walked up to the girl.

"Hey!"

Everyone turned to find Luffy walking towards them with Coby right behind him. Coby saw Luffy actually angry for the first time and opted to stay back as Luffy walked up to Helmeppo.

"It's not nice to make a little girl cry." Luffy said as a teary-eyed Rika watched on.

"And just who do you think you are, commoner?" Helmeppo asked.

"And it's not nice to make Marines do bad things." Coby piped up.

"Do you know who I am you fools? If my dad were here he would kill you right away!" Helmeppo exclaimed while looking furious though to everyone else he looked rather frightened. "I don't even know why he's still here. If were up to me he would be dead already."

That really ticked Luffy off and the Grim Reaper punched the blonde snob clear in the face, leaving a circular red mark.

"Ahhh! My face!" Helmeppo screamed as he rubbed his sore nose and cheeks. "Run! Get out of here!"

The Marines and Helmeppo made a beeline right to the Marine base as Zolo and the rest watched.

"Bastard." Luffy said as he turned to Zolo. "So, join my crew Zolo! "

"Just who are you anyways?"

"I'm Monkey D. Luffy and I'm gonna be the next King of the Pirates." Luffy bravely announced, not caring that the man he was talking to was a well-known pirate hunter.

"And just why do you think I want to join a pirate crew?" Zolo inquired.

"Hmm, well it's either you join me and go on fun adventures and fight strong guys or stay here and die." Luffy put it bluntly.

"Heh, you make a great point." Zolo joked. "Fine, if you can get my swords back, I'll join you. Deal Luffy?"

Luffy laughed and smiled. "Deal Zolo." He then ran off towards the Marine base, figuring that the swords should be in there.

"Wow, is that guy your friend?" Rika asked as she rubbed the tears off her eyes. Coby nodded.

"Yeah, anyways you should get out of here before something bad will happen?"

"What do you mean?"

"I just have a feeling."

(In the Marine Base)

"Who did this to you son?"

"Some stupid straw hat wearing kid. And he was with that Zolo guy outside too."

Helmeppo was still crying about the punch Luffy gave him and went right to his father for help. Not a bad choice considering his dad is the Marine Captain Morgan, the tall, large, bulky, burly, tan, and blonde captain who was ruthless on the battlefield with his ax that was actually a replacement for his hand.

"Roronoa eh? Wait here. Marines! Form up!" Morgan yelled and quickly a number of Marines formed behind him with weapons in tow. With Morgan in the lead, the group marched out towards where Zolo and Coby were.

"Hahaha, those idiots never stood a chance against father." Helmeppo quipped as he walked up several flights of stairs and to his room.

"I mean I almost feel sorry for those- WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING HERE?" Helmeppo yelped as he saw Luffy climbing through his open window.

"Whew, now where are those swords? Ah here they are?" Luffy smirked as he saw three swords lying next to Helmeppo's bed.

"I-I s-s-said, what are you d-d-doing h-here?" Helmeppo all but whimpered as Luffy scratched his chin, not noticing Helmeppo in the room.

"Umm, does he have two swords or are all three of these his? Ah who cares I'll take them all." Luffy grabbed all three and they vanished in a wisp of black smoke before he jumped out the open window.

Helmeppo was now in deeper shock after witnessing Luffy's power. He had snot dribbling down his upper lip and his eyes were as wide as saucers.

"Oh no! Father!"

The blond raced down the stairs and hurried to warn his father.

(Execution Courtyard)

"Hurry up Coby. They're coming now." Zolo urged. After exchanging formalities for a second Coby worked on trying to untie Zolo's ropes. Unfortunately he only managed to tie the ropes on tighter.

"What? Why didn't you tell me earlier?" Coby cried.

Unfortunately by then Morgan and his Marines had reached the two.

"What the hell do you think you're doing whelp?" Morgan asked a now shaking Coby. Zolo looked more pissed than scared as Morgan turned his gaze towards the swordsman.

"I should've killed you that day. But watching you starve was good while it was funny. Too bad this runt tried to help you cause you're both dead now. Marines!" Morgan pointed at the two.

"Shit! So close to escaping too!" Zolo thought.

"I should've known I would never become a Marine. Now I'm about to be killed by them," Coby thought.

"Fire!"

Just as the Marines unleashed a volley of bullets Morgan heard a voice from above.

"Whoa! I got your swords Zolo!"

Luffy was still in the air from jumping off the Marine base and landed in front of the bullets.

"Idiot!" Zolo yelled.

"Luffy!" Coby cried out.

"Hehe." Luffy chuckled. "Shadow Scythe"

Dark fog flowed out of Luffy's hands and formed into his scythe. He twirled the weapon and deflected the bullets back towards the Marines, wounding several and grazing Morgan's cheek.

"What the Hell!?" Everyone but Luffy screamed while Luffy laughed to himself.

"By the way, I didn't know which sword was yours so I grabbed them all." Luffy held out his free hand and the three swords Zolo had grown to love and use appeared in his grip.

"Just what the hell are you Luffy?" Zolo asked as Coby gathered his swords.

"I ate the Grim-Grim Fruit, a fruit made from dozens of other fruits by my mother." Luffy said.

"Is that so?" Morgan said. "If guns won't work. Then swords will. Men, charge!"

The Marines looked way too scared to fight the Reaper but one look at their ferocious leader was all the push they needed to charge, even if it was half-assed.

"Hmm?" Luffy said. "Oh you gotta be kidding me." Luffy sighed before he slashed with his scythe and sent nearly a dozen Marines flying. After some screaming the remaining men turned tail and either ran or jumped out of the way.

"Shishishi, no problem." Luffy joked. He slammed the butt of his scythe down only to find an angry Morgan hunched over him and his ax arm rose to strike Luffy down.

"Damn, Coby! Give me my swords!" Zolo shouted.

"But your hands-"

"Unsheathe one and but the hilt in my mouth sideways." Zolo demanded as Morgan's ax flew down.

Coby had no time to argue against Zolo's logic but once he did what he was told he realized he didn't need to. Immediately Zolo cut through his bindings and even got his other two swords unsheathed. And just as Morgan's ax was about to meet Luffy's head, Zolo rushed forward and blocked the weapon with his three swords.

"Nice moves, Zolo. Thanks." Luffy commented.

"No problem, Captain." Zolo said.

Morgan was not ready to give up yet and he threw his fist forward to punch Luffy.

"Nope. Not gonna work." Luffy dodged the punch and dove towards the captain's axe-hand.

The giant man's eyes widened when Luffy's hand went through his flesh and came out the other end with something that Morgan never thought he would see.

Luffy was currently wielding the axe that had been inserted into his arm that made him known as Axe-hand Morgan.

"YAAAAAHHHHHHHH!" Morgan screamed as blood burst from his now open stump. Luffy teleported behind him and slammed his heel into the back of Morgan's head, sending him into the bliss of unconsciousness.

"Wow, nice job Luffy." Zolo said while grabbing his sheathes off the ground and sheathing his swords. "We should leave now before more Marines dock here. No doubt someone in the base called a ship already."

"Okay, before we leave though." Luffy reached out and grabbed a random Marine. "Ahhh! W-what do you want?" He whimpered.

"When the next Marine ship gets here, you mind putting Coby on there as a new recruit or something? He really wants to join you guys." Luffy asked politely. The Marine furiously nodded and when Luffy dropped him the man fainted.

"Huh. Well Coby you can join the Marines now. When you get on the ship, say that you need to meet with Garp. Tell him I sent you and you'll get stronger in no time." Luffy said. Coby couldn't help but to cry a little at the great news.

"Thank you Luffy! I'll never forget this, ever." Coby said.

"This means we'll be enemies in the future though." Luffy said. Coby gasped but realized it was the truth.

"Yeah, but next time when we fight I'll be much stronger." Coby proudly said.

"Hahaha, I'll look forward to it. Good luck. And you should probably drag that guy back." Luffy pointed out. "Anyways, bye!"

Luffy raced off towards where the little boat was docked with Zolo right behind him. Coby watched them for a bit before walking over to the man and dragging him back to the base by his leg.

"Gosh he's heavy. I hope I won't have to lift weights when I start training."

As he reached the front door he opened it and dragged the man to what he assumed was the infirmary. After he was done putting the guy on a bed, he left and once he reached the stairs he tripped. Looking down he found a knocked out Helmeppo with a large comical bump on his head.

"Must have tripped running down these stairs." Coby guessed. Sighing, he grabbed Helmeppo's legs and retraced his steps back to the infirmary.

That's a wrap for chapter one, people. A few of my buddies at Army basic asked me to put this up when they read it from a notebook that I used. This is dedicated to them and all that they're doing for our freedom.

Please review and send me some constructive critisizm.