Hello readers I'm new to writing but tell me what you think about and review the story as to the silver cloud and its incantation just something I thought of.
Everybody Has A Bad Day
It was a normal day in Soul Society with the captains meeting to discuss the budget for the 13 squad divisions. All the captains were arguing over how much money they needed until the Head Captain said "Will you all shut up now look we'll all get the same amount of money but if you have a problem with that then I'll show you some manners with Ryujin Jakka as my officer of enforcement do you understand," while releasing killing intent mixed with reiatsu that made everyone within a 1000-mile radius shake with fear.
After the captains had calmed down they noticed the air was thick with evil as they looked for the source Captain Yamamoto saw a flash of silver and said "Captains be ready we have a visitor among us. Please show your self we won't attack unless you do." Then a cloud of silver dust appeared and said "You soul reapers have become to conceited among your position we gave you for that we shall solve this problem by giving you a lessen in humility by giving you bad luck have a nice day." All the captain were shocked as they heard this as they were about to speak but were to slow as the dust shouted "THIS IS FINAL WE HAVE DECIDE YOU HAVE NO SAY," then saying "Rise against the conceited world let them see their errors CLAYMORE." A cloud of red mist appeared and settled on the captains while the silver dust took the shape of a young man smiling while saying "let's see if you soul reapers are worthy of your power we immortals gave you."
Who do you think should be the first captain to have bad luck and if you want give a suggestion as to what might happened to them while having bad luck. PEACE.