first poem ever

tell me what you think

plweeaseeeeee. :)

With legs of jelly

A huge pain in my belly

Ill find the strengh,

Ill go to huge lenghs

Tears of pain

Fall like rain.

Take your pick,

But you cant fight it with a stick?

You cant kill the pain

But you can hope to say sane.

You could kill the bringer,

And become a sinnier,

Fall into the hell hole.

But try hard not to lose your soul.