This is my very first story ever. Please be easy on it and give me your thoughts on it. It is rated R for rape, violence, and langue.
Intro:
5 heroes, each seeking their own path. A female human mage seeking revenge by the name of Jessica, an Orc Blademaster by the name of Powerblade seeking a secure future for his race, a Night Elf Warden by the name of Sylvanas trying to save her homeland, and a Dreadlord by the name of Soulrender trying to stop the fall of everything that he has created. What drove all these heros to battle? A new race created by a mage, angry at the world.
Jessica wandered through the snowy wasteland thinking of her family and friends. Thinking of how they were mercilessly ripped and torn into shreds. How that hooded man led the attack on her town and killed every living thing, but left her alive. How that army of creatures looked like a cross between Night Elves, Orcs, Humans, and the Undead. A slight sound of someone or something circling Jessica brought her back to the present. Jessica spook in a strong voice,
" Come out right now, or else I will be forced to harm you."
A sudden shower of knives pelted everything around and at Jessica. The mage immediately cast a shield like spell in front of her. She knew it was not going to ask. Then a voice hissed,
"You scum. Killing my race without mercy, well FUCK YOU!"
Jessica replied,
"I do not know what you are talking about. I mean you no harm. I am just looking for someone in this icy waste land."
Silence. Jessica decided to summon a waterelemental to be on the safe side, and so she did. Without warning, a Night Elf woman teleported right in front of Jessica. The water elemental almost immediately attacked the Night Elf. Jessica retreated to a safe distance and shouted,
"God damnit, I do not know who you are or why you are attacking me. Let us talk and if we have reason to fight, then we shall."
The Night Elf answered,
"I will agree to your so call 'talk', but please get your fucking water beast away from me!"
The water elemental was gone as soon as the Night Elf was finished talking. Jessica moved closer to the Night Elf.
"My name is Sylvanas, I am a…" She was cut short by an arrow flying at her head. He blocked it with her combat ring. Creatures that had the appearance of an Orc, blue skin like Night Elves, decaying flesh like the undead, and strangest of all, a human head. Jessica sighed,
"You fucking bastards again? Come to finish off the job?"
"You know these creatures? They are the ones attack my race. I hope your spells can keep me cover human."
And with that, Sylvanas charged at her enemies hacking and slashing with her spiked battle ring.
How do you like my first chapter? Please tell me your thoughts. I know, its short, but other chapters will be much longer. Thx for reading.
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