Daphne: "All right, this is my tribute to Christmas this year! I will
continue with my other stories, since I have most of this one written, but
I will update this one before and perhaps after Christmas, it I have any
more chapters to put up!
Now, most of the later chapters may seem familiar to you...and they should be! This is actually a revised, and greatly expanded version of one story I had up a long time ago, called 'THE RAVINE', a T+E romance fic. I have changed the title, and like I said, changed the story quite a bit. I highly recommend that you read it!
Summery:
Tomoyo and Eriol actually knew each other long before Sakura's adventure with the Clow Cards. In fact, they knew each other in Kindergarten. Tomoyo didn't like him, but Eriol seemed to like her. Their acquaintance, however, was broken when his family suddenly moved away.
Six years later, they meet each other again, during the time Sakura is changing the Clow Cards into Sakura Cards. Tomoyo manages to keep their old acquaintance a secret from her Sakura-chan, but Eriol does not make it easy. After she finds out who really is responsible for Sakura's dangerous situations during the changing of the cards, Tomoyo comes to hate Eriol with a vengeance, and is glad to see him go.
Seven years after that, Tomoyo's mother suggests a trip to England, for a business trip. Tomoyo is eager to go. The trip, however, becomes horrible when her mother is called back to Japan and leaves Tomoyo there. Hurt and upset, Tomoyo decides to hike up into the mountains a little, to get away from her problems. An avalanche traps her alone in a small valley, and she is left unconscious.
But someone is there to help. Someone that least expects to see her. And someone who's heart was broken once, and he is determined not to let it happen again. ~*~
Well, there you have it! I hope that you enjoy this, and that you review lots! I love reviews!
Disclaimer: Cardcaptor Sakura is not mine...just the story line. So sue me!
...actually, don't, because I wouldn't be able to pay anything! I'm broke from buying my family Christmas presents!
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Avalanche Kisses by: Daphne Li Chapter 1.
"Hey! Do you want to play a game?!"
This came from a tiny little girl with brown hair and sparkling brown eyes. She looked no more than five or six, and her hair was pulled into two pigtails. She was speaking to another girl her age, with long raven-violet locks and bright amethyst eyes.
"What sort of game?" The raven haired maiden asked innocently. They were both standing in a corner of the large school yard, and they were surrounded by several other eager-looking students.
"Tag! 'Cept the boys have to find the girls, and if they do, they have to kiss em'." The first girl stated. There was a round of 'ohh's!' and shy giggles. The girl who had spoken first was called Mihara Chiharu. The second was a sweet girl by the name of Daidouji Tomoyo. Tomoyo looked thoughtful, and then looked around at her other friends. They were all nodding and grinning mischievously. The little girl's grin joined them.
"K'." Was all she said.
"Fine. Now. We girls go and hide, you boys count to twenty, and then you find us!" Chiharu squealed, running off. Tomoyo giggled and followed her, her long hair billowing out behind her. Tomoyo hid next to the school building, behind some tall green bushes, and waited for someone to find her.
"Got you." A smug voice spoke out beside her. Tomoyo turned with a squeal and fell silent. Beside her stood a boy she had never seen. His midnight- blue eyes sparkled mischievously at her, and he pushed a strand of his midnight blue hair out of his eyes.
"Who are you?" She questioned softly, seeing that the boy was a little taller than her and making her feel intimidated.
"I am Hiiragizawa Eriol, and I believe that I owe you something." He said in a grown-up voice. Tomoyo gasped when she realized what this all meant; but these were the rules of the game. Tomoyo squeezed her eyes shut, and waited for the inevitable. All at once, a soft, warm pair of lips pressed gently against her own plum ones. The kiss was gentle and sweet and lasted for ten seconds before he pulled away and grinned cheekily at her.
"I found you!" He laughed, dodging out of the bush and running back to join his friends. Since this had been her very first kiss, Tomoyo was still a bit in shock. She had had many of her other perverted male class mates try to kiss her, but none had ever succeeded, and she had not intended for one to this time...except maybe on the cheek, since a kiss was the rule...but he had kissed her full on the lips! Still not so sure how she felt about this, Tomoyo thoughtfully made her way back to her friends as the recess bell rang for them all to come in.
~*~*~*~
"Tomoyo, what do you want to play today?" Chiharu asked, ten months later. It was the week of Kindergarten, and the teacher had allowed them to get out of school a bit early, to play. Tomoyo grinned at her friend.
"Tag and kiss!" She squealed, much to the joy of her friends. This had become a regular game to them, and they had been playing it ever since that very first game.
"Girls hide, boys seek!" Chiharu called, eyeing her other friend, Yamazaki Takashi, who was presently trying to follow her. His shoulders slumped and her went back over to stand with his friend Eriol. Tomoyo waited a moment to make sure all the boys had their eyes closed, then she bolted out of sight, choosing as her hiding place, a space behind two giant garbage cans. She waited several minutes, and lo-and-behold, her 'seeker' came.
"Hello." He teased. Tomoyo turned, trying to hide her frown. Ever since that first game, Hiiragizawa Eriol always managed to find her first, no matter where she hid. All her kisses had been delivered by him, but luckily, ever since that first one, he had chosen to kiss her cheek. Blue eyes met with amethyst, and held.
"Tomoyo...I..." He paused, looking at his feet. Tomoyo frowned at his upset look. Sure, she didn't like him that much, but the look on his face made her feel unhappy.
"What?" She asked. His eyes riveted back to hers, and he attempted a smile. Before she could even blink, his lips had descended to her face, but instead of hitting their usual target, they landed once more on her own lips. Again, Tomoyo felt the his warm lips gently press onto hers, and she felt something mixed with indignation enter her chest. He pulled back, and turned away, not letting her see his face.
"Goodbye, Tomoyo." He whispered, causing her to frown. Before she could say anything more, the final bell rang, signaling the end of school, and he ran off.
~*~*~*~
"Chiharu, Yamazaki, Rika, Naoko, Sean, Orion, Tomoyo..." The teacher called out on the final day of school as she took role call. Then she put the name- list down and began to move towards the board.
"Sensei, Eriol's missing. Where is he?" Yamazaki asked, raising his hand. Tomoyo saw that indeed, Yamazaki was right. In fact, Eriol had been missing for the past three days. Yesterday, when they had played 'tag and kiss', some strange boy had found Tomoyo and tried to kiss her. So astonished was the little girl, that she had slapped him and ran to her class room, crying. Eriol had ALWAYS found her, every day, without fail. How was it possible that he suddenly missed that one recess?
"I am afraid that Hiiragizawa Eriol has moved away with his family. He will not be returning." The teacher stated. Tomoyo sat in shock. Of course, she had never liked the boy, but he had always been polite and courteous to her, unlike the other boys in her class. And now, he was gone!
"I'm going to miss him." Said a sniffling Yamazaki, who was being hugged by Chiharu. Tomoyo frowned.
"I won't." She stated. And for most of her grade-school days, she didn't.
Until one day...
~*~*~*~
Now, most of the later chapters may seem familiar to you...and they should be! This is actually a revised, and greatly expanded version of one story I had up a long time ago, called 'THE RAVINE', a T+E romance fic. I have changed the title, and like I said, changed the story quite a bit. I highly recommend that you read it!
Summery:
Tomoyo and Eriol actually knew each other long before Sakura's adventure with the Clow Cards. In fact, they knew each other in Kindergarten. Tomoyo didn't like him, but Eriol seemed to like her. Their acquaintance, however, was broken when his family suddenly moved away.
Six years later, they meet each other again, during the time Sakura is changing the Clow Cards into Sakura Cards. Tomoyo manages to keep their old acquaintance a secret from her Sakura-chan, but Eriol does not make it easy. After she finds out who really is responsible for Sakura's dangerous situations during the changing of the cards, Tomoyo comes to hate Eriol with a vengeance, and is glad to see him go.
Seven years after that, Tomoyo's mother suggests a trip to England, for a business trip. Tomoyo is eager to go. The trip, however, becomes horrible when her mother is called back to Japan and leaves Tomoyo there. Hurt and upset, Tomoyo decides to hike up into the mountains a little, to get away from her problems. An avalanche traps her alone in a small valley, and she is left unconscious.
But someone is there to help. Someone that least expects to see her. And someone who's heart was broken once, and he is determined not to let it happen again. ~*~
Well, there you have it! I hope that you enjoy this, and that you review lots! I love reviews!
Disclaimer: Cardcaptor Sakura is not mine...just the story line. So sue me!
...actually, don't, because I wouldn't be able to pay anything! I'm broke from buying my family Christmas presents!
~*~*~*~
Avalanche Kisses by: Daphne Li Chapter 1.
"Hey! Do you want to play a game?!"
This came from a tiny little girl with brown hair and sparkling brown eyes. She looked no more than five or six, and her hair was pulled into two pigtails. She was speaking to another girl her age, with long raven-violet locks and bright amethyst eyes.
"What sort of game?" The raven haired maiden asked innocently. They were both standing in a corner of the large school yard, and they were surrounded by several other eager-looking students.
"Tag! 'Cept the boys have to find the girls, and if they do, they have to kiss em'." The first girl stated. There was a round of 'ohh's!' and shy giggles. The girl who had spoken first was called Mihara Chiharu. The second was a sweet girl by the name of Daidouji Tomoyo. Tomoyo looked thoughtful, and then looked around at her other friends. They were all nodding and grinning mischievously. The little girl's grin joined them.
"K'." Was all she said.
"Fine. Now. We girls go and hide, you boys count to twenty, and then you find us!" Chiharu squealed, running off. Tomoyo giggled and followed her, her long hair billowing out behind her. Tomoyo hid next to the school building, behind some tall green bushes, and waited for someone to find her.
"Got you." A smug voice spoke out beside her. Tomoyo turned with a squeal and fell silent. Beside her stood a boy she had never seen. His midnight- blue eyes sparkled mischievously at her, and he pushed a strand of his midnight blue hair out of his eyes.
"Who are you?" She questioned softly, seeing that the boy was a little taller than her and making her feel intimidated.
"I am Hiiragizawa Eriol, and I believe that I owe you something." He said in a grown-up voice. Tomoyo gasped when she realized what this all meant; but these were the rules of the game. Tomoyo squeezed her eyes shut, and waited for the inevitable. All at once, a soft, warm pair of lips pressed gently against her own plum ones. The kiss was gentle and sweet and lasted for ten seconds before he pulled away and grinned cheekily at her.
"I found you!" He laughed, dodging out of the bush and running back to join his friends. Since this had been her very first kiss, Tomoyo was still a bit in shock. She had had many of her other perverted male class mates try to kiss her, but none had ever succeeded, and she had not intended for one to this time...except maybe on the cheek, since a kiss was the rule...but he had kissed her full on the lips! Still not so sure how she felt about this, Tomoyo thoughtfully made her way back to her friends as the recess bell rang for them all to come in.
~*~*~*~
"Tomoyo, what do you want to play today?" Chiharu asked, ten months later. It was the week of Kindergarten, and the teacher had allowed them to get out of school a bit early, to play. Tomoyo grinned at her friend.
"Tag and kiss!" She squealed, much to the joy of her friends. This had become a regular game to them, and they had been playing it ever since that very first game.
"Girls hide, boys seek!" Chiharu called, eyeing her other friend, Yamazaki Takashi, who was presently trying to follow her. His shoulders slumped and her went back over to stand with his friend Eriol. Tomoyo waited a moment to make sure all the boys had their eyes closed, then she bolted out of sight, choosing as her hiding place, a space behind two giant garbage cans. She waited several minutes, and lo-and-behold, her 'seeker' came.
"Hello." He teased. Tomoyo turned, trying to hide her frown. Ever since that first game, Hiiragizawa Eriol always managed to find her first, no matter where she hid. All her kisses had been delivered by him, but luckily, ever since that first one, he had chosen to kiss her cheek. Blue eyes met with amethyst, and held.
"Tomoyo...I..." He paused, looking at his feet. Tomoyo frowned at his upset look. Sure, she didn't like him that much, but the look on his face made her feel unhappy.
"What?" She asked. His eyes riveted back to hers, and he attempted a smile. Before she could even blink, his lips had descended to her face, but instead of hitting their usual target, they landed once more on her own lips. Again, Tomoyo felt the his warm lips gently press onto hers, and she felt something mixed with indignation enter her chest. He pulled back, and turned away, not letting her see his face.
"Goodbye, Tomoyo." He whispered, causing her to frown. Before she could say anything more, the final bell rang, signaling the end of school, and he ran off.
~*~*~*~
"Chiharu, Yamazaki, Rika, Naoko, Sean, Orion, Tomoyo..." The teacher called out on the final day of school as she took role call. Then she put the name- list down and began to move towards the board.
"Sensei, Eriol's missing. Where is he?" Yamazaki asked, raising his hand. Tomoyo saw that indeed, Yamazaki was right. In fact, Eriol had been missing for the past three days. Yesterday, when they had played 'tag and kiss', some strange boy had found Tomoyo and tried to kiss her. So astonished was the little girl, that she had slapped him and ran to her class room, crying. Eriol had ALWAYS found her, every day, without fail. How was it possible that he suddenly missed that one recess?
"I am afraid that Hiiragizawa Eriol has moved away with his family. He will not be returning." The teacher stated. Tomoyo sat in shock. Of course, she had never liked the boy, but he had always been polite and courteous to her, unlike the other boys in her class. And now, he was gone!
"I'm going to miss him." Said a sniffling Yamazaki, who was being hugged by Chiharu. Tomoyo frowned.
"I won't." She stated. And for most of her grade-school days, she didn't.
Until one day...
~*~*~*~