Letting the hate out

(Hey I added a little twist to it and I REALLY hope you're fine with it. If not, I'm really sorry.)


Smokesky groaned as Jessy walked across the clearing, a mouse in her jaws, her perfect fur waved through the wind as she sat down in the warriors den. "What right do you have to sit in the den for warriors. Not kittypets who think they're so great in every single way, just because they know how to hunt!"

Thrashing his tail, he walked out of the camp entrance, and padded towards the lake. "Why couldn't she just die!"

The black and white tomb closed his eyes, and smiled at the thought of Jessy being dead. "I'm sure Squirrelflight wouldn't mind."

At the thought of that, he felt as if the wind was knocked out of him. "Only Bramblestar would kill me if I laid one claw on her!"

I would first trick her into going out for a hunt, and then lead her to an area where no one would here her scream when I scrape my claws into the side of her fat kitty pet pelt and watch her bleed to death in slow agony!

A mad grin appeared on his face. I WILL kill her, and anyone who gets in my way!


As Smokesky padded back to the camp, he herd rustling in the leaves behind him. He slowly crouched to the ground and got into hunters pose. No one gets away with spying on me!

Smokesky leaped into the bushes and landed on top of a gray cat with yellow eyes. "Dovewing? What were you spying on me for!?"

"I-I herd muttering come from the shore and I wanted to check it out!" The she cat stammered. "I didn't here anything I promise!"

Smokesky grinned as he unsheathed his claws. "I bet you didn't ever since you lost you're powers." He said in a mocking tone.

"Don't say that you fox heart!" Dovewing whimpered while struggling to get Smokesky off her.

"Or since you lost any chance of having a love triangle!" he continued on. "So Dovewing, even if you did, here me, you won't ever be able to tell anyone."

"Wait, what?" Dovewing said in a weak and confused tone before watching Smokesky's claws slowly digging into her exposed belly, and then the same with her neck.

Smokesky sighed. "If you just minded you're own business." Smokesky slowly walked away from the dead body of Dovewing, who lied dead behind him. A single claw was missing from his paw.

No one, will get in my way...


As Smokesky walked back to camp, he herd another shriek behind him.

"Dovewings dead!"

Smokesky rushed to the warriors den, and then pretended to be asleep. "I'm so sorry Ivypool." Smokesky whispered, knowing they were siblings.

Ivypool ran back to camp, dragging the body of Dovewing behind her.

Smokesky put a concerned look on his face and rushed over to Ivypool. "What happened?!" He asked innocently.

"I was going out for a walk, when I saw the body and..." Ivypool couldn't finish her sentence as she broke down into tears.

Bramblestar raced out of the leaders den and stared at the body. "What happend?!"

"Dovewing was murdered!" Smokesky explained, still trying to act innocent.

Bramblestar looked at Smokesky suspiciously. "How did you know she was murdered?"

"No reason, I just think that's what most likely happened since she has ThunderClan scent on her and no other."

"Oh." Bramblestar said, his head now full of thoughts as he looked at Smokesky's paw, wich was missing a claw. "I'm going to take this body to Jayfeather and Leafpool's den to examine the body." He explained before dragging the body over to the medicine cat's den.

"What happened?!" Both Jayfeather and Leafpool said at the same time.

"She was murdered." Explained Bramblestar. "There is only ThunderClan sent on Dovewings fur."

The two medicine cats talked to eachother for a brief moment before turning back to Bramblestar. "We must go to the moon pool and ask StarClan for help."

Brambkestar nodded as he watched the two walk out of the den before turning his attention back to the body and noticed a claw stuck in Dovewing's throat. He gasped as he remembered Smokesky's paw which was missing a claw. "Smokesky murdered Dovewing!" He whispered to himself.

"Indeed I did." Said a voice behind him.

"Smokesky?!" Bramble star exclaimed. "But why?"

Smokesky just smiled and lashed his claws out at Bramblestar's neck, ripping his throat out. I don't tell anyone my secrets.


Smokesky was quickly laping up the blood on his paws when he herd a voice from outside the den.

"Jayfeather? I got a thorn in my paw, can you get it out?" Came a voice from the one cat he thought he would never be able to see.

"No it's just me Jessy, come in, I think I can get it out." Replied Smokesky, but let's do it in the forest, so you don't scare the kits when you shriek, uh, because It will really hurt when it comes out."

Jessy nodded dumbly as she followed Smokesky out of the den before she could see the body of Bramblestar. "My paws really hurting right now, can you just pull it out?" She complained.

I'll make more than just you're paw hurt!

With that, he sunk his teeth into Jessy's neck. "This is what you get for making me kill my leader! This is what you get for making me kill my clan mate! This is for you eating food that we caught for ourselves!" Yoweled Smokesky, his mouth frothing, and his eye twitching. He slowly dug his claw up Jessy's stomach and stopped at her throat.

"It's finished..."