(Updated as necessary. This is the reviews response page, since I couldn't think of a better way to get back to the people that were nice enough to comment, if you want to get a hold of me more privately, just pm me.)
C - Brilliant Start. Can't wait to read more.
Thank you very much, I hope to not disappoint.
Stokley - Hmm Effy and Naomi? Interesting start... I like the fantasy vibe mixing with the modern a bit, not a lot to take away from the story but just enough to give it an updated feel. I can't wait to see where you're taking this!
It's going to take a little bit to really get the plot going, as there has to be a lot set up to make it work and make sense, but I hope it'll be worth the wait. And there won't be any Effy/Naomi if that's what you were asking, they just have a very close platonic friendship. The main paring will be Naomily, but how that happens won't be revealed until later.
WOW!! - I really enjoyed reading this. It's an interesting concept, and I'm excited to see where it's heading. On your writing; it's brilliant, complex without confusing the reader, and it delivers great imagery at the same time. This fic is great so far. Moarr!!: D xx
Thank you, on the writing front I often find it hard to balance between overly descriptive and overly simplistic, so it's nice to hear that I'm doing a good job. As for the concept, I think I may've made the plot a little over complicated, but it' all still being written, so I suppose I can adjust as necessary. I'm also trying to make more time to write, so it won't have to be months in-between updates (I'm working on getting it down to weekly maybe), but still have it be good-ish writing, looking over the first two chapter I can see some minor mistakes.