Angelica Eagle Fate Chapter 1 REWRITE (Chapter one revised and edited without songs! And I added some extra parts, you could say, deleted scenes?)
Now onto the story!
~GMUSA~
Angelica Fate finished the morning ham sandwhich she made for herself as she reached the gate to her school. She was wearing a green vest with polkadot pink and yellow puffed sleeves underneath, and a babypink skirt with black hightops. her earphones blast the music into her ears as she grabbed the school registration forms her mother filled out for her, and headed to the princable's office.
'Why can't we be friends?'
A new schoolyear was starting and being late would not be good for the dark brown-haired girl. Her tanned, carbourd colored skin practically shimmered as she entered the school.
'Cuz you're all alone,'
"Hey guys, it's Angelica!"
'Zat why we ain't friends?'
One of Angelica's fanboys screamed. everyone at school thought she was perfect. The only reason she was good at everything was because she knew her father would hit her and her mother if she wasn't.
'And you're accident prone!'
Angelica tried her best to walk past the crowd of people tht were building their way up, calling themselves 'The Angelica Eagle Fate Fanclub', made up of boys', girls', and the occasional cross-dresser.
'Don't blame me for those things!'
It was funny, though. When Angelica had arrived there, 1 year earlier, she had no friends, lockermates, or fanboys. But now, only 1 year and a month later, she now had friends, tons of 'em, 2 lockermates, the effect of a bad economy, and just about a thousand fanboys.
'I'm alot of fun,'
The AEF Fanclub, when it was first created, was searching for a purpose. So it started gathering around Angelica's house, meeting her outside and walking her to-and-from school.
'On the inside,'
But even the-oh-so-great Angelica could get annoyed, so she started briging her I-pod, keeping it on full blast to tune out the talking. She even went to the great lengths of changing her address and taking a different route to school.
'So just give me a chance,'
Angelica knew the rule about electronic devices in school, but she really loved the song! She herself was a great music fan, she needed it to stay focused, to think, and even to sleep!
'I promise you won't have to hi-i-i-i-de!'
But the song was over, so she turned off her I-pod and began to hear the conversationions around her, almost forgetting about her destination.
~GMUSA~
Reaching the princables office was a chore for Angelica, but when she arrived she walked over to front desk and handed the woman sitting on the other side the papers.
The woman was old with curly gray hair and eyeglasses. she was wearing a polkadot purple dress with a gurtle (that no one could see but everyone could tell she was wearing). The woman adjusted her eyeglasses.
"You Angelica Eagle Fate?" Angelica blushed at the sound of her middle name, and nodded.
"You'll be going to class on the A sector for this schoolyear."
"Why?"
"Because," The womon stopped to take a breath of air, "It's a waist of time and money to teach a student who already knows what they're learning."
Angelica paused to think of a good answer. The same thing happened last year at the South sector. "How and who's money am I waisting?"
"You're waisting the school's money because the board takes it into their hands to make sure we have the money to supply each student with textbooks. Now, if you already know the lesson, we're waisting money buying textbooks that could be going to better cause -say, I don't know - going into repairs."
Angelica bit her lip - she knew what was coming next.
"You have thirty minutes to clear out your locker and be out of North sector,"
~GMUSA~
Angelica was in an empty hallway, dumping her things out of used-to-be her locker into her bookbag.
She noticed something that wasn't there that morning. A white sheet of paper, folded in half. She frowned, and picked it up. She was about to read it when-
"Sharing notes, are we?" Angelica looked up.
The hall moniter. Suzie Flanks. A redhead with back length hair braided into two ponytails. She wore big glasses, and a this red turtleneck tucked into blue jeans that were pulled up to her stomach. Her orange shoes really clashed with her outfit.
"No, I was-"
"Give it to me."
"It isn-"
"Now."
Angelica handed Suzie the note, watching carefully as she opened it and began to read:
Adore what I do,
No more time for you.
Goodbye to you
End is near.
Long
I have awaited
Come to me fool,
And all shall be over soon.
Even though you don't belive,
All is not well
Girls like you must pay
Like she did,
Ever so long ago.
Funny isn't it?
All victoms don't belive
Til' it is too late
Everyone does.
Kids must not worry
Idols have suffered for them.
Like many fools,
Like many aldult's
Even like many elderly.
Don't forget this.
You must remember
Or else,
Underworld is near.
"What is this? You could scare little-" Suzie said looking up from the note, only to find-
Angelica was gone.
~GMUSA~
The room was dark. It weas cold and dark. Stone floors and tight walls alighned the room while carndles lit the room. A large staircase was on the right side of the room, leading upwards.
"Did you deliver the note?" A male voice said. It was more of a demand. Angelica translated the question into: "That note better be delivered or else."
Angelica was at the A Sector. Sure it had taken her a while to get there, but following the fact that North Sector and A Sector were both on the same property, it had only taken about nine minutes.
"Yes Hawk-sama," She said with a nod, "Suzie Flanks has recived and read the 'warning'."
This Hawk man smirked, and slowly walked to Angelica, "I'm going to love having you going to A Sector."
This time, Angelica smiled. "Yes Hawk-sama."
GMUSA~
"My life is a movie scene
That's what I know
Since I was young
I didn't grow.
And now I'm fourteen
Living by myself
It's hard to adjust to life
with no one else."
Angelica stopped singing. She was at the A Sector. Sure it had taken her a while to get there, but following the fact that North Sector and A Sector were both on the same property, it had only taken about nine minutes.
'This school is big.' Angelica thought. She was panting after ditching the scene of THE HALL MONITER EXTERMINATING PROGRAM: WE EXTERMINATE NUISINCES. She was a part of the club, infact the founder.
'Now just to go to the Principle's Office-' Angelica's thoughts stopped when she realized that she had absolutley so idea where the Principle's Office was. 'Oh shit.'
"But I'm a mini-aldult
so I know
even a Butterfly needs room to grow."
~GMUSA~
Sorry guys! I bet you were expecting a new chapter, not a remake! But I read chapter one, and it sucks! I already finished chapter two, I just need to make an introduction to Naruto. Now, here's a deleted scene:
Angelica sighed. Only a month in this school and she was working her ass off.
'North sector. Psh-NOT!'
Now she was sitting in her bedroom, doing homework.
"I hate algebra..." She mumbled to herself. "Too much damn work!"
Knock, knock, knock.
Angelica stared at her door.
Knock, knock, knock.
It came again.
"Go away, I'm doing homework!" She shouted at the door.
Creack, creack, creack.
"Good. Now to get some damned work done." Angelica mumbled.
Angelica had just been transfered to North Sector for her first year of high school. She didn't expect the work to be like middle school, but this was just ridiculous!
Now, she sat at her desk after a bath, in a long grey sweatshirt reading 'Got Milk?', which was funny considering she was drinking milk. She had her hair loosley braided in one big plait.
"The first five answers are wrong!" Her mother's voice sang from behind her door.
'There's no way...' Angelica thought looking over work.
"NOOO!" She screamed. The answers were wrong!