sup you peoples? heres a maxride fic to chew on! okay-

scene- after FANG

plot- well. youll just have to read and find out won't cha?

grab some unbarfed chocolate, and a seat, and get readin peeps!

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Chapter 1: How I found her

MAX

I stared out at the morning sunrise.

Once again, here I am, thinking about stupid freaking Fang.

Freaking Fang... grr.

I mean, why'd he have to go? He had reasons, yeah, but still- when has a statistic, or another person ever stopped us from doing ANYTHING?

Sigh.

I find myself flying out to the Hawk's Cliff all the time now, even though I know he won't be there yet, if ever...

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FANG

I punched Ryean. He landed a kick to my shin.

"Ah!" I hit the ground and kicked his legs out from under him.

Ryean landed on top of me.

"Crap!" He huffed, and I flipped him over and pinned him down.

"Ha!" I laughed.

He spit cuss words at me

Lissia walked outside, and saw me on top of Ryean.

"Aw, can you two keep the gayness to youreselves? I mean, come on!"

"Shut up!" Ryean yelled, "Get off me Fang!"

I laughed and rolled off, then stood and helped him up. " You're okay, kid. I mean- not FLOCK good. But okay."

"Yeah, well, we'll see." He grumbled, brushing off dirt.

Lissia rolled her eyes.

A bell rang at the dining pavilion across camp.

The two teens turned to go. " Ya comin' Fang?" They looked back at me with hopeful eyes.

" Nah, I'll... I'll pass today. But were fighting next week, Kay Ryean?" I raised my eyebrows.

"Yeah."

"Be prepared to lose, kid"

" Whatever, old man." He grinned.

Lissia rolled her eyes again. I should really warn her about them getting stuck. Just like looking at the sun makes you blind.

Okay.. I should explain this whole camp thing.

Camp Bird Kid was founded by Teresa, the bird girl we found back at the Institute in New York. I was on the run and we found each other. ( long story) she told me about her idea, that I was free to help, but I decided not to and left.

Sooner or later, I got tired of running and came back to find a huge camp in the Rocky Mountains.

I stayed. Lots of fun teens, people who were like me, the mountains, and... the Hawk's Cliff.

Sometimes I just like to sit out there and think about her.

It's been five years since I left. But I still love her.

I'm the most powerful Avian Hybrid at camp, because I'm part of the original flock. We're the oldest and genetically strongest ( and talented, might I add) that every other Avian Hybrid since is very low grade.

Some are healthy, but others... well, the ward is never a pretty place. Especially with all those expiration dates...

( still Fang)

That night, I was walking to the counselors cabin, when I heard voices.

"Yeah. He just showed up here one day, no explanation. They tested him in fighting, and no one could take him down. And he was still a scrawny kid. So they let him be the Defensive Arts teacher. Yeah... that guy's put up with a lot of crap being so young... but he's the best teach here. He gets the kids, you know? "

" Wow. A sixteen-year-old teacher..."

I turned back and put my ear to the cabin wall, under the window.

"Yeah."

" Fang... that was the missing flock members name wasn't it? The one that was in love with Max? He had the blog?"

" Yeah. Man, they were big when I was, like, 12. Then he left. And no one knows where he went."

" Maybe.. our Fang... "

" Ha! Like we haven't thought of that! They're the same age, they look the same. He never has a girlfriend, and he... there's times when you can't find him... "

"The Flocks Fang! right here at Camp Bird Kid!"

"Yeah, but... I don't know. If it were him, why would he be here? Huh? I mean- why leave Max in the first place?'

I walked away. I couldn't take hearing her name that much.

I sighed. They were right. Why was I here? Why not with Max? I... I missed her.

Her golden brown hair, Her eyes like unbarfed chocolate, Her laugh. Max.

I sighed. Time to take a trip.

I took a running start, and unfurled my huge wings.

I did a circle around camp, and saw Lissia walking alone to her cabin, so I swooped down and flapped straight above her, knocking her on her butt with a blast of air.

I laughed.

"UGH! Fang!" Her tiny 8 foot wingspan unfurled, and she flew under me, her body buffered by the blasts of air my 23 foot wingspan caused.

Come on. You know that's impressive.

She landed " Bye Fang!"

" Later!" I yelled back.

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MAX

Crap! I fell asleep on the cliff...

I gathered up all my stuff and looked around to see if I'd left anything.

That's when it happened.

"Hello, Max"

I looked over. A handsome blond model stood on the edge of the cliff.

" What the...?" But no. They were extinct...

"You know why I'm here, Max. " He looked over at me. " You can come with me. Or I can take you with me. What will you do?"

" Look here, freak. I don't know where you're sorry-"

He started to transform.

He became very.. Wolfy... I bet you know where this is going.

I gasped " Eraser!" I ducked as the wolf-mutant's body lunged at me, claws out.

It fell to the ground. I bolted to its side and pinned it down, kicking the loser ' where it counts' repeatedly.

"Agggh..." He groaned, claws trying to pry me off.

I raked my much duller nails across its face, but its jaws snapped, grabbing my wrist.

I screamed, and blood soaked my arm, splattering as jaws clamped and unclamped over and over. He was chowing down on my arm!

I kicked him in the face, and he let go, but flung me 10 feet away, right as I was unfurling my wings.

Ow.

I ruffled my feathers, checking the damage. Just some bruises.

I ran and shot up, but he did too, using his wings.

Great. He was one of the flying erasers.

He grabbed me by the ankle and pulled me down to earth, biting down on my right wing.

" Ah!" I gasped in pain as his teeth dug in.

I squirmed and flailed, but my punches wouldn't connect.

His jaws clamped down harder and harder until-

snap!

" Gahh! I shrieked. My wing. My wing was broken!

I screamed obscenities at the eraser, while he shook me around.

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FANG

I was peacefully flying in a sunset when I heard a girl's scream, then a roar.

I flew down to the cliff and saw a ... bloodied... feathered... girl, and an- an eraser (!) fighting.

The eraser clamped down on the wings, and the snap was audible 30 feet above.

...such beautiful, blood spattered wings...

The eraser threw her.

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MAX

" Ah!" The eraser threw me and I tumbled a few feet away.

It lumbered toward me, ready for the killing strike.

Then... something swooped down and hit the eraser, landing on it.

...An angel? No. A bird kid. A tall, strong, dark bird kid.

The winged man bent down next to the eraser, grabbed it by the collar, and flew up, up with it.

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FANG

I shoved my pocket knife into the eraser, cutting into the base of it's wings. It screeched in pain.

I dropped it.

It flapped, but the bleeding wings didn't do it squat.

Lets just say, when the thing landed, it wasn't in one piece.

I flew down to the girl.

Her head was hung, her hair hanging over her face and stained with blood.

I put a hand on her shoulder, and she looked up.

Our eyes grew wide, and we gasped.

"MAX? "

"FANG?"

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