a Poem about Riku. i dont usually write poetry so... be nice. lol.
enjoy. read and review please.
Way To Dawn
The darkness runs deep
It swallows me whole
I can't break free.
I realize my mistakes
I know what I've done
It's too much for me to take.
I try to start over one more time
Try to erase the things I've done
But is it all in vain?
I find myself alone again
The darkness calling me out
The light rejecting me
Where do I go?
Take the path to light?
Or the path to darkness?
I'll take my own path
I'll make my own way
My way to Dawn.
review please! my first poem and i need some feedback. and be honest, please.