Discalmer: I do not own Naruto
Okay this is my first fanfic. I already have the main plot figured out so I only need reviews and I will gladly continue. Im gonna try to stay faithfull to the Naruto world but I only started learning kanji, another thing this story will have character deaths and maybe bloody scenes. There will be NaruXHina, ShikaXTema, NejiXTen, InoXSai and maybe more, not sure but maybe lemon in the last chapter, I will add more chapters weekly if work wills it (I have a unstable job). And please review the story, but if you need to ask something, please pm me cause if your right then it may give the story away to other readers, thanks.So this is what happened until now
-All that happened until manga number 403 happened except a couple of things.
-Kabuto has disappeared from sight.
-Team Snake/Eagle and Madara led an assault against Konoha.
-Kisame and Zetsu was killed by Gai and Kakashi.
-Konan was killed by Jiraya before he died
-No one knows what happened to Orochimaru.
-Jugo disappeared
-Karin and Suigetsu was killed by Sai and Shikamaru
-Madara has taken control over the Sound village.
There could be some spelling errors.
Now this takes place in the last minutes of the Naruto and Sasuke fight.
Chapter 1: The Flames of Konoha. -
The black clouds of the fires has cloaked the starry skies of Konoha. Uchiha Madara, his swirling mask in his face and his akatsuki robe, watchedfrom the sidelines as his army of Sound ninjas brought destruction upon the city who has betrayed him.
"I would like to see your face right now Hashirama, heheheheHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!" He said as he continue his demonic laughter.
The battle of the two ninjas raged on on top of the Hokage mountain as waves of red and black chakra was spreading out of each blow. Naruto and Sasuke were panting heavily with blood stain everywhere.
Naruto heard a growling voice in his head, "USE MY POWER IF YOU WANT TO SURVIVE BRAT!" The kyuubi said with annoyance in his voice.
"NO, I promised myself that I will bring back Sasuke without your help!"Naruto said with determination. He looks at Sasuke with the fires of the Leaf in his eyes.
"SASUKE, I will make come to your senses even if I have to beat your ass to ground!"
Sasuke gave him a small smile.
"Naruto, youve gotten stronger, but your ignorence and stupidity didnt change at all." He said while readying his stance.His face suddenly changed toanger, "My brother and my clan has suffered because of Konoha, so I will avenge them and rebuild the Uchiha clan my own way." He suddenly stop, looking up at the dark clouds above,"I will burn everything." He slowly lower his head right at Naruto.
The blond shinobi looks in terror has the new patterns of the Mangekyou Sharingan began to form, as black flames surrounds the Uchiha.
Neji and Ten-Ten were busy handling the many sound ninja that was quickly surrounding them.
They were back to back, Neji with the Byakugen activated," Damn! I used too much chakra."
"The Sound army has gotten alot stronger, this may be our last battle." Ten-Ten replied.
"At least we fought to the very end." He replied with a defeated tone.
An explosion of dust surrounded the two as they covered their eyes. They look around after the dust settled to see that the Sound ninjas were all knoked out.
"This is getting rather complicated." the man in green said, "Neji, never thought you would give up so easily."
"S-Sorry, Hiashi-sama." He replied.
"Nows not the time, weve got a bunch coming are way." Gai said with a hint of excitement.
A red chakra explosion suprised the group as they lost focus of the approching shinobis and stared at the source on top of the Hokage mountain.
"No..." Hiashi said with fear and despair.
Near the Hyuuga Estate, Hinata, Kiba, Shino, and Kurenai were holding off the incoming ninjas.Kurenai fell down with a small grunt of pain as a kunai pierced its way in her left shoulder.
Kiba grabed her as she was falling, "Sensei, are you alright"
As she got up, she took out the kunai and threw it in the head of the thrower, "Its okay, its been awhile since I fought you know."
"Please dont strain yourself sensei,we can handle this on our own." Hinata said as she fought the Sound-nin.
"No, Konoha his my home, I will fight to protect it!" She replied while holding her wound.
"You should hide, you are not in a condition to fight, youre pregnant." With that said, Shinos bug devoured another shinobi.
A red chakra explosion took them by suprise. As they stood there the only thing that they could think of was...'What's going on up there.' Only Hinata was rushed by a bad feeling that made her faint, "Naruto-kun." was the only sound that came from her mouth as she hit the ground.
Outside the Hokage tower, Lee, Sakura, Ino, Shikamaru, Choji, Kakashi, Iruka and Tsunade fought the main army of the Sound.The Sound-nin couldnt keep up with Lees incredible speed and power now that he removed his weights.Shikamaru was using his shadow possession to hold his enemy whileSakura punched the living hell outta them. Ino was left to heal the party. Choji, Iruka, and Kakashi was disposing the enemy with ease with their great teamwork. Compared to the others Tsunade was not holding back, she gave her all in every punch as tears flowed like an endless river as she remembers what happened three days ago...
--FLASHBACK--
Tsunade was busy like always with all the documents all over her desk.She noticed a frog that was standing on the border of the window.
"You are one of Jirayas frog, right." She said with wondering eyes, normaly Jirayas always sent his frog to deliver message when he was in a bind or to far, and it was always important.
With a sad expression in the frogs eyes, his eyes narrowed down, looking at the Hokage with sadness. At that moment she feared the worse as her eyes widened.
"Hokage-sama, Jiraya asked me to deliver a message..." as he was about to continue he was suddenly cut off.
"Wheres Jiraya!?" She said with tears begining to form in her eyes.The frog looked down, nearly crying himself, "He fought Akatsukis leader with all he had...but in the process he found the enemys weakness, thats what he told me before...he..died..." The frog said still looking down, not being able to bear the face of Tsunade.
"Jiraya." She muttered as the flood of tears drowned her cheeks"You fool, you promised me you would come back, you promised me that you would make it back safe, only to be broken..." She said with a trembling voice. She slammed her fist on the desk, breaking it in two in the process.
"I cared about you, the only person I can call a true brother you dirty pervet." Thinking of all the good and bad memory, all the moment, all the words they shared together, she smiled a smile of regret before fainting from the emotions.
--FLASHBACK END--
As they heard a growl, an explosion of crimson color erupted above them on the mountain.
Kakashi and Iruka knew what it was."NARUTO!!" Iruka yelled as he quickly made his way ontop of the mountain.
Kakashi and Tsunade tried to follow him, but was blocked by Sound shinobis, "This is bad..." Kakashi said.
Back on Hokage mountain.
Sasuke was on one knee breathing heavily and blood was coming out of his many wounds. His eyes was back to normal. Naruto was barely standing as he too had many wounds.
"How!?" Sasuke breathed as fatigue overhelmed him, "How could you have seen trough the Mangekyou?" Sasuke stop to breathe again.
The Mangekyou was still new to him, so it drained almost all of his chakra. Still wanting to know how his eyes couldve been stop by Naruto, who knew close to none about the Sharingan.
Naruto took a deep breath, looking with a small grin on his face,"Itachi, he gave me some power that I didnt know what they were, but now I see, it was a mean to defeat your Sharingan!"
Sasukes eye widened as he heard. His brother had all under control in his plan. Even when he's dead, he still protects the village that pushed him to become a traitor, the village who forced him to kill his clan, his family. He was truly a hero of Konoha, even if everyone will think of him as a murderer.
In the woods behind Sasukes battle. Madara watched as Sasuke was having trouble handling his new power.
"Your plan seemes to be going well enough, sensei." As Madara heard this, he turned around to see seven dark cloaked figures
"Yes, only a matter of time while the Uchiha fool lose control of his power." Madara said as he laughed a bit.
One of the cloaked figure advanced beside Madara, "Madara-sama, why didnt you let us fight."
Madara looked up at the black clouds that hides the night sky, "Because I need Konoha for a little while, this is only a prelude to greater things to come."
Madara heard bodys falling, looking as Sasuke fell on one knee, he laught, "Now!"
As Naruto was getting closer, a kunai got him in his right arm, letting a scream of pain.When he looked where the kunai was shot, a figure was in front of the boy with a punch on the stomach.Naruto was thrown on the ground with the forced of the punch. In pain, he was able to get up, his legs shaken from the blow, he stares at the the figure with hatred as it retreated quickly to the side of Madara.
"You!" Naruto glanced at him with hatred as his eyes now became blood red and his pupils slit.
"Its been a while fox boy, I'm happy that you helped me, so I won't kill you this time." He said, Naruto couldn't see what expression he had under his orange mask, "Help you? I would never help you in my lifetime bastard!!" Naruto replied with anger in his voice.
"Ah, but you already helped me!" Madara said. In suprise, Naruto could only glance at the masked man. Two robed man took Sasuke force him up witch he responded with grunt of pain.
"Madara,you bastard, so that was your plan, how could I have been so blind!" Sasuke said in disgust. Naruto had is eyes widened in shock at the figure he fought was Tobi, who he realised with Sasuke's word that he was Madara, Uchiha Madara. He could only stand in shock at Madara.
"Fox got your tongue boy, you look stupider than before fool." Madara said as he reveal his face, wich didnt have the slightest look of old, he looked the same as the statue in the Valley of the End, except that his hair was shorter that Naruto, but spikier.
"I tooked enough time" He said as he turned to Sasuke where he could see an evil grin on Madara's face, "I thank you for defeating Itachi, and weakening yourself, my plan went perfectly because of your revenge, you never saw my intentions" He said as he was trying not to laught, knowing fully well that his plan to change this world has finaly begun. Thought Naruto and Sasuke doesn't know of his plan, it can't be good."Now look at this world, for it is the only thing you'll see" Madara said as he laughted a demonic laughter.Suddenly, his fingers plunged into Sasukes eyes, with a quick pull, his bloody eyes was now in the hands of Madara. Sasuke scream in pain as blood was gushing out is empty sockets, the place where his ultimate weapon was, now it's gone. One of the cloaked man took Sasuke's sword who was planted on the ground and with a quick movement, sliced Sasukes throat open.What was agonizing screams of pain was now sounds of someone drowning with his own blood.
All happened too quick in the eyes of Naruto who realized his best friend was now dead, "SSSSAAAAAAASSSSSSUUUUUUUKKKKKEEEEEEE!!" He screamed has he ran charging the three that made him suffer such pain.
Madara looked at the charging shinobi with an evil smile, "Now that one of the only person to know my past and the thruth is gone, I can continue my plan."As soon as he said that the seven figures and Madara vanished, letting Sasuke fall to the ground, lifeless.
Naruto was holding Sasukes head on his knees,"Sasuke,please say something, anything, I forgive you, don't leave me again." The boy cried out as he stared at the lifeless body of the one he called brother. His pants and shirt was stained with the bood of his best friend and rival. Naruto couldn't stop the tears from drowning his battered face.
A voice rang in his head,"SEE, I TOLD YOU TO USE MY POWER, YOU COULD'VE SAVED YOUR PATHETIC FRIEND FROM BEING SLAUGHTERED." Said the Kyuubi.
"SHUT UP!" Naruto responded in anger,"He was far from pathetic, you're as evil as Madara you beast bastard, Madara wil pay for this I swear."
But without realizing it, with the loss of his friend, the seal on his body weakened greatly.A red chakra began to swirl around his body, his hair began to straighten up to its maximum,"FINALY,YOUR BODY IS MINE" The Kyuubi said with pleasure. He began to scream for the pain he felt because of the transformation was to much, never had he felt such pain. His body began to double in size, orange fur began to spread all around him, his clothing fused with him, his hair now the same color as his fur, his nose extended, theeth and black claws began to grow, ears now tripled in lenght, eyes in a new level of crimson with his slit pupils, what was screams of pains are now growls of evil, nine tails began to spread out, he was Naruto no more, he was now the Kyuubi. With a last growl, a red chakra explosion unleashed in all is fury, destroying part of the mountain and razed the forest all around. As he set his evil sight on Konoha he heard someone calling out.
"NARUTO!!" The Kyuubi looked down to see Iruka on the edge of the cliff.
Thats it for the first chapter, hope you liked it, as for the Naruto Sasuke fight with the Mangekyou, I will let you imagine it, cause I was concentrating on the story in this chapter but I promise you that there will be more elaborate action and fight scenes.
As for the two cloaked figure, these seven was in previous Naruto manga, maybe youve guessed but I'm sure that one of them will caught you by suprise.
So please review, I want to know how many people liked it so far so that I am more inspired to continue. Thanks!