Jim and I

I don't own Treasure Planet but I do know the name of the man who does own it and it is Mr. Robert Stevenson. By the way this will go like the movie except a few changes will be in it. I got the idea from another writer but it's not going to be the same.

Chapter 1: Part 1: Introduction

James is Six years old at start

On the clearest of nights, when the winds of the Etherium were calm and peaceful, the great merchant ship with their cargoes of Arcturian Sora Crystals, felt safe and secure. Little did they suspect that they were perused by…pirates! And the most fear of all these pirates was the notorious Captain Nathaniel Flint. Like a Candarian Zap-wing overtaking its prey,

"James Pleiades Hawkins, I thought you were asleep over an hour ago," walks in his mother.

"Mom I was just getting to the best part … please" James says as he hugs the book to his chest.

"Ooh can those eyes get any bigger" she walks up to him, "Scootch over" she climbs onto the bed.

James opens the book:

Candarian Zap-wing overtaking its prey, Flint and his band of renegades swooped in, out of nowhere. And then, gathering up their spoils ... vanished ... without a trace.

"Ooh" says both of them.

Flint's secret trove was never found, but stories have persisted, that it remains hidden, somewhere, at the farthest reaches of the galaxy. Stowed with riches beyond the imagination... The loot, of a thousand worlds: Treasure Planet.

"Ok" says Sarah as James closes the book "blow your nose".

"How do you think Captain Flint did it mom" he says as he climbs on his headboard "how'd he swoop in out of nowhere" he says as he jumps onto his bed, his mother tries to catch him "and vanish without a trace" he says as he crawls under part of his blanket.

"I have no idea" she says as she inches closer to him "come here you . . . you . . . li" she grabs him pulling up his shin she says "I'm gonna get it I'm gonna" she blows on his stomach as he laughs. "Ok now it's time for this little spacer to go to sleep" she says as she places him in bed under his blankets.

"You think someone will ever find Treasure Planet?" he asks as she digs under his pillow for a toy.

"Sweetheart I think it's more like a legend" she answers as she looks at the toy.

Leaning down to put it on the night stand he says "I know it's real".

"You win its real" she says as she kisses him on the forehead.

"Nighty Night mom" he says as he curls up.

"Nighty Night Sweetheart" she says as she walks to the door "I love you".

"Love you too" he whispers as his mom shuts the door.

"There are nights, when the winds of the Etherium so inviting in their promise of flight and freedom made one spirit soar."

12 years later

Jim soars up into the clouds above a canyon, as he gets high enough he steps back pressing a button that pulls his sails in. He goes a little higher, before dosing his eyes and he starts to fall doing all kinds of flips until he almost reaches the ground. The sail comes back up, he yells out in excitement as he goes toward a restricted zone. Knocking down the yellow bar he flies right in, doing a grinder before he jumps off and heads for a dirt grinder that's spinning.

"Come on."

He heads for it putting his sail down, he dives in spinning himself. Coming oat his sail comes back up and rides into the air. Only to hear police sirens as two cops come up.

He rolls his eyes sighing "oh great".

Benbow Inn

"Mrs. Hawkins" comes a customer's voice as Sarah picks up a tray full of food.

"I know refill on the purp juice coming right op Mrs. Dunwitty. There we go that's four powdered spheroids, two lunar eclipses and it's a big bowl of zorellian jelly worms for the big boy" Sarah says as she places down some food for her customers.

"Awesome" says the boy as he starts to eat.

"Enjoy" Sarah says walking over to Delbert.

"Sorry Delbert it's been a mad house here all morning" Sarah sighs as she places his food in front of him

"No problem Sarah. Ah my Alpoian chowder with the extra solara seed Mmm yum" he says as he places down his book to eat.

He takes up his napkin tucking it in as a little girl peers up at him.

"Hello, what brings yon here, curious little … one" he picks op a spoon to pick up some food to eat

"Go away, are your parents around what's the matter cat got your tongue yaah" the little one had stuck out her tongue and ate his food.

"Oh it's so adorable at that age" sighs Sarah.

"Ah yes deplorable ... ah ... adorable, speaking of which how's Jim doing?" he asks as he places his spoon down.

"Much better" starts Sarah as she places some plates down and to pick up some more. "I know he had some rough spots earlier this year, but 1 really think he's starting to turn the corner"

The door bangs open, showing two police robots and Jim. "Mrs. Hawkins."

"Jim" she gasps dropping the plates she had in her hands.

"Ooh wrong turn" states Delbert covering his lace.

"Ok thanks for me lifts guys" Jim says as he starts to walk away.

"Not so fast, we apprehended your son operating a solar vehicle under a restricted area. Moving violation 904 section 1 5 paragraph urn" states the police.

"Six" says Jim

"Thank you" states the police.

"Don't mention it" sighs Jim rubbing his check.

"Jim" gasps Sarah.

"As you're aware ma'am this constitutes a violation of his probation" state the police.

"Yes, yes ... No I understand ... urn ... but ... am ... could just" stutters out Sarah.

"Pardon me officers um if I might interject I'm the noted astrophysicist, Dr. Delbert Doppler perhaps you've heard of me ... no... I have a clipping" says Delbert.

"Are you the boy's father?" asks the officer's.

"No, good heavens no," stutters out Delbert and Sarah at the same time.

"Ewe he's just an old friend of the family" laughs Sarah nervously.

"Back off sir" intrudes the officers into Delbert's face.

"Thank you Delbert I will take it from here" States Sarah pushing Delbert the other way.

"Well Sarah if you insist, don't ever let me do mat again" he says walking back to his seat.

"Do to repealed violation of statue 15 C we have impounded his vehicle, anymore slip ups will result in to a one way ticket tojuvenile hall, a kiddies hoosegow, the slammo that's final" states the officer letting go of Jim.

"Thank you Officer's, it won't happen again" Sarah says the last part to Jim.

"We see tins kind all the time ma'am wrong choices, dead aiders, losers, you take care now, let's motor" the officers say the last part as they leave.

Sarah turns to look at her customers who go back to what they had been doing.

"Jim I have had it, do you want to go to juvenile hall is that it" she says to Jim as he starts to pick up some left over plates. "Jim, Jim look at me. It's hard enough keeping this place afloat by myself with you" she says to him.

"Mom it's no big deal, there was nobody around, those cops just won't get off my" Jim starts to say but Sarah gives him a stern look that cuts him off "forget it" he finishes turning around.

"Mrs. Hawkins my juice" comes out Dunwitty's voice.

"Yes, I'll be right there Mrs. Dunwitty. Jim I just don't want to see you throw away your entire future" Sarah says as she walks away.

"Yeah what future" says Jim as he goes into the kitchen.

Later that evening Jim is on the roof, tossing some small pebbles off, as it thunders and lightening out. He over hears Sarah and Delbert talking for a little while and this is what he over hears:

"I don't know how you manage it Sarah, trying to run a business while raising a felon like … felon … fellow … fellow like Jim" says Delbert.

"Managing it, I'm at the end of my rope, ever since his father left, well Jim's just never recovered. And you know how smart he is, he built his first solar surfer when he was eight. And yet he's failing at school, he is constantly in trouble and when I talk to him, he's like a stranger to me. I don't know Delbert, I've tried everything" says Sarah to Delbert.

A noise comes out of nowhere as a ship comes for a crash landing. Jim jumps off of the roof, running up to the ship. As he runs down he yells out "Hey mister, Mister your ok in there, right?"

WEEEEE Well that took a lot of patience to get that down, now for part two of introductions to come. Review this for me; it's my first fic in Treasure Planet at least.

Dark Angel From Mercury.