Hello! This is my introduction to my story, so you can have an idea of WHO ON EARTH I'm talking about!!! :) FYI: This story centers around a girl by the name of Elizabeth Turner, and if it's rather monotonous at times, please forgive me. Not only is this my first GW creation,
but originally it was created for my enjoyment only, so I didn't care much about monotony.
Also, it's not even CLOSE to finished! So, tell me what you think. I don't mind flames, just so it's constructive criticism. Something to the effect of, "It's dumb and stupid; what made you think you could be a writer anyway?" doesn't count. :)
Finally, I will alert you to the fact that in my story so far the only Gundam pilot that has appeared yet is Duo, and him not until the end of chapter 3! (This is meant to be a really long story and I have not even gotten past the 'early memories' section.) :)
Thanks,
Emmy J.
Disclaimer: I do not own Gundam Wing or any of its characters, although everything and everyone else in the story is a product of my design and my imagination. :)
LIZZIE'S STORY
INTRODUCTION
Hi! My name is Elizabeth Amanda Turner, and this is my story. Before I begin, I'm going to tell you a bit about my family.
My dad's name is Alexander, my Mom's name is Anna, and I have seven brothers.
Frederick, at 20, is the oldest (Mother's favorite).
Allen, at 18, is the second oldest (Father's favorite).
John is 16 and Earnest is 14. They're buddies and do EVERYTHING together.
Timothy is 12, Cameron is 10, Alexander (my buddy, my hero, & my model; I think that he is perfect and has never done a thing wrong in his life) is 8, and I am 6.
Also, this story begins in the year A.C. 186.
I guess that's just about everything! The rest you should probably figure out.
-Elizabeth Turner
but originally it was created for my enjoyment only, so I didn't care much about monotony.
Also, it's not even CLOSE to finished! So, tell me what you think. I don't mind flames, just so it's constructive criticism. Something to the effect of, "It's dumb and stupid; what made you think you could be a writer anyway?" doesn't count. :)
Finally, I will alert you to the fact that in my story so far the only Gundam pilot that has appeared yet is Duo, and him not until the end of chapter 3! (This is meant to be a really long story and I have not even gotten past the 'early memories' section.) :)
Thanks,
Emmy J.
Disclaimer: I do not own Gundam Wing or any of its characters, although everything and everyone else in the story is a product of my design and my imagination. :)
LIZZIE'S STORY
INTRODUCTION
Hi! My name is Elizabeth Amanda Turner, and this is my story. Before I begin, I'm going to tell you a bit about my family.
My dad's name is Alexander, my Mom's name is Anna, and I have seven brothers.
Frederick, at 20, is the oldest (Mother's favorite).
Allen, at 18, is the second oldest (Father's favorite).
John is 16 and Earnest is 14. They're buddies and do EVERYTHING together.
Timothy is 12, Cameron is 10, Alexander (my buddy, my hero, & my model; I think that he is perfect and has never done a thing wrong in his life) is 8, and I am 6.
Also, this story begins in the year A.C. 186.
I guess that's just about everything! The rest you should probably figure out.
-Elizabeth Turner