HELLO PEPS
THIS IS A NEW STORY THAT I JUST ALL OF A SUDDEN THOUGHT ABOUT WRITING.
SO YESTERDAY NIGHT 12-15-09 I SPENT FROM 9:00 P.M. TO 11:30 P.M. WORKING ON THIS.
SO IF IT SUCKS AGAIN LIKE I ALWAYS SAY IN INTRO'S I'M SORRY!!
SOOOOOO NOW THAT I WASTED YOUR TIME!!!!
ENJOY!!!
A Lost but Wandering Soul
Carlisle P.O.V
Thursday 2010* - 2:30 p.m.
"Be caleful alright Carlisle. Be back soon." Esme said following me as i walked out the front door. It has been a month since my last hunt and i didn't want to take any chances.
kissing my cheek one last time she smiled one last time and whispered
"i love you." and walked back into the house
"Love you too, see you Saturday." i replied then turned around to walk into the forest, i was going to colorado they have a mountain lion problem.
Edward was quite upset when i told the family that i was going to colorado, he has been craving some mountain lion blood, but hasn't had any luck when hunting around forks.
As soon as i entered the safety of the forest i started running.
When i passed a fox eating a rabbit, i oddly enough had a chill run down my spine. I wasn't superstitious, but as i entered idaho i still couldn't shake off the feeling. It didn't feel like doom but more like an unavoidable thing was going to happen, but i just don't know what it is.
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Just a little after 8 A.m. on Friday morning, the air was fresh and had a woodsy smell, but i preferred my woods better, I'm a little biased.
After jogging, i didn't feel like running i wanted to see some nature, i came to a spot that the family usually started from.
I looked around took a deep breath tasting the smells in the air, and opened my senses and focused on the sounds.
Then i ran.
=*o*=
i just finished my third lion when i caught the scent of blood, human blood. I was in control, but it just struck me odd that a human would be this deep in the forest, not many people would have either the confidence or patience to make it down here.
With my curiosity at it's peek, I followed the scent for about a mile before it was just a couple of 30 feet away from me, but the actual human was hidden from me, behind a thick fern that i could only see specks of what was behind it.
I quietly jumped over the fern and landed soundlessly on the other side.
What i saw there made my eyes hidden, here in this dangerous part of the forest, probably the deepest part of the forest was a...was a teenage girl about 15 or 16 from the looks of it, but that was only part of the reason for my reaction. As far as i could tell she was fine or at least some what ,but it was her posture, she was on the ground hugging her knees to her chest with her head tucked in the valley her knees created. I could tell she was a awake because of her heart beat but if it wasn't for my enhanced hearing i would have believed her to be asleep, her breathing pattern was very much alike the sleeping pattern a large percent of humans have during the night.
They where deep and evenly paced not a single breath faster than the last.
I silently cleared my throat and opened my mouth to speak but the girl beat me to it.
"Go away." Was all she whispered. I couldn't tell whether or not she was talking to me or just something she was thinking about.
"Are you hurt?" I asked softly, i didn't want to scare her and i didn't know if the sound of my voice would frighten her.
"Go Away." Was again all she whispered in that same broken voice but with more demand, so i knew that she was talking to me.
'How did she know i was here?' i thought to myself, still staring at the, i assumed, lost girl.
"I'm a doctor, i can help if your hurt, are you lost?" I pressed wanting to know the cause of this young girl's broken voice, it was full of obvious pain and hurt.
she sighed and said:
"Go away please, leave me alone." in a louder but still a sad and broken tone.
"Are you lost or hurt, What's your name?" I continued to ask even though i knew that the only thing the girl wanted from me was to leave, but i knew that if i left now..if i left her here in this forest, with the memory of her voice always broken, full of pain hurt and despair as if she was on the verge of crying ... i knew it would always haunt me.
I knew i simply had to help in anyway i could.
"I can help, I'm not going to hurt you, what's your name little thing." i said when she didn't answer me.
she swallowed loudly and said
"Please,please just leave me alone and go. Go away please!." she still was whispering but her voice had a new edge.
She was pleading, i quickly realized. I took a hesitant step forward
"At least tell me your name, little thing. That's all i ask of you, if you don't want to answer any of my other questions just please answer this one, what is your name?" i practically begged trying to get any information about this girl.
she took a deep ragged breath then let it out noisily. She then took another one but instead let it out slowly.
"My name is Isabella Marie Swan, but i prefer Bella." she said, lifting her head up from it's resting place.
when she was finished talking her head was all the way up now, but her eyes where still closed.
"Bella..Can i" was all i got out before i was interrpted.
"No..you can't help me. No one can! Can please just leave me alone!." she said her voice no longer a whisper but still fairly shushed.
I would have answered, I should have answered, but i couldn't...for the first time in my life as a vampire..i froze and not on my conscious like i would have, but i froze because i was shocked. Not just shocked but horrified but not for myself.
Isabella's eyes...are a dark brown, almost black, but that's it, their blank*...as if she had no...no soul.
No life.
'Who is this girl?' I thought to myself as i slowly regained ability to move and the shock was also slowly drifting away.
Isabella, her eyes never leaving mine, then stood up and faced me.
And waited for me to speak.
'Who..or What is this girl?' i thought once more.
okay i know i should have updated some of my other stories but, i needed to type this down. i read a vampire story where one of the main characters friend was an old soul and i was struck with an idea for a story.
I always try and write something that hasn't been done over and over again and I'm not sure if this kind of story line has.
So if you have read a story similar to this one (or the up coming chaps) could you tell me!!!
OKAY THE LITTLE star thinf yea that * after 2010 was there for me to tell you guys that i put 2010 because i thought it would be really stupid to put 2009 when it is over in (checks calendar) like 15 becuase the story will have chapter set back in time.
SOOO TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!! READ AND REVIEW!!!! p.s. if you find mistakes can you tell me