This story was originally JAConsonant, but I decided I didn't like the title and I was rereading the first chapter and realized I made a lot of stupid typos. I'll warn you, I'm not very good when it comes to grammar, and this story is written by just writing what I'm thinking, and as I go on it will mold into something more of a plot I'm hoping. Bee tends to go off in random directions and relate to extremely random things, but that's just who she is, and you either love her or you don't.
Hope you enjoy!!!
Disclaimer:
I DO NOT own Harry Potter or any characters, places, spells, etc that you may recognize.
"Barbra, hey! Wait up!" I turned around at the sound of the familiar voice as I was swooped up into a giant hug and dropped my red trunk with a thunk on platform 9 and ¾.
"James! How was your summer! It's so good to see you again! Did you have a good time at quidditch camp? From your letters it sounded amazing!"
James hazel orbs were twinkling away as they always did, accompanied with his lopsided grin.
"It was great. I can't wait to play again this year. I learned so many new moves that will lead the Gryffindor team to a sure victory. Glad to be going back to school? I know you missed me so much!"
"Haha Potter, you wish." I joked, and playfully stuck out my tongue. James threw his head back and let out his adoring laugh.
"My my my Bee, sure didn't change a lot did we? Still the same silly little girl back in June." I playfully slapped him across his muscled biceps. Wait- did I just say muscled? Merlin, very muscled biceps. I looked over James. Boy, did he ever change, for the better too. The James I knew was gangly. Tall, average guy. But now standing before me I realized that he definitely had grown a couple inches. His face had become more defined somehow, setting his eyes off all the more. He must have worked like hell over the summer. I don't think I ever saw even a bump on his arms before, but now there were defined muscles sculpturing his body and his skin was a shimmering bronze. But then his jungle of black hair was still as messy as ever.
"Wow James, you look- well amazing! Merlin, are you like taking wizard steroids?" My jaw was practically on the floor and I quickly snapped it shut.
"Are those like those crazy muggle muscle enhancers? No way babe, this is the all natural James Potter, kissing each of his biceps in a joking matter. I was still standing there floored as he threw one of his winks that every girl in the school would die for. I'm pretty sure if looks could kill I'd be in heaven right now because of those girls glaring at me walking bye at that moment.
Suddenly a loud whistle blew. "Oh we better get on the train, I gotta find the guys too. Say hi to everyone for me." Potter levitated his trunk and climbed into the first car on the train where the Marauders had claimed their compartment first year. It had their name on it. Literally. One of the many ideas of Sirius Black. On the door to the compartment was in red and gold letters 'The Marauders' with a permanent sticking charm so that it wouldn't come off till all four of them graduated. It will probably be on there forever with Peter barely passing all his classes last year, and taking this year completely different classes than the other three boys he'll be lucky to earn a 'dreadful' and never graduate.
"Bee! I've got a seat for you! You coming?" A mass of deep red hair was hanging her head out of the window, her slight curls looking like a waterfall of auburn.
"Chill Lils, I'm coming!" I ran into the compartment Lily was in and pounced on her with a big hug. "Lily I missed you so much! How was your summer? You wouldn't believe it but I had so much fun working like crazy at my uncles farm. I feel inlove with this one black horse that's gorgeous but it's going to the states because it can be like a triple crown winner which is like a set of three races that are some of the biggest races in the world and only like a couple other horses have won all three. But this horse is going too. I broke him too. It was so weird. It takes forever too. Took me all summer in fact. First you have to get them used to the saddle and having stuff on their back and then eventually lead up to putting pressure on their back of a rider and like 3 days ago I finally got to ride him. It was so cool! And one of the stable hands was so amazingly hot. Almost as hot as James is. Merlin Lily wait till you see James. He looks amazing! You're gonna see him and forget how he called you immature and all and start to like worship him like he's a queen-"
"a queen, Bee? You're blonder than ever this year!" Lily raised her eyebrows and let out a small laugh.
"I did not say queen I said- ooooohhh- my bad." Lily was cracking up. "Hey! Lily Evans, I am so not blonde anymore! I am brunette. See this." I waved my newly colored hair in her face. "Brunette. B-R-U-N-E-T-T-E."
"Yeah, just keep thinking that. We'll see your blonde roots soon enough."
"Oh shut up." Lily got up and pulled a charms book out of her bag sat down and opened it up. She pulled out her favorite quill and started to do the summer homework. "Lily?"
Emerald eyes looked up at me. "Hold on Bee, let me finish this homework so it's done."
"Are you okay?" There was something wrong with her. I knew it. This was so not Lily Evans.
"I'm fine. See, I'm smiling. I just haven't started my nonsense chatter like you've already done. I want to finish my charms first. Then I got a load to tell you."
"Lily Evans, I demand you tell me what the hell is going on. I may have blonde roots but I know Lily Evans never waits till last minute to do homework."
"Well technically it's not last minute, it's more like last million hours since we don't arrive till the end of the century." Lily was writing away, way more than she had to. She always did though. Like the question would be 'What is the color of the oblivinator potion?' and Lily's answer would be along the lines of 'blueish green with an almost red tint if you look hard enough. This is because the gillyweed added making having a chemical reaction with the frog breath gas which is all because of when you look at the magical components in the ingredients and how they act in nature you'll see that…' I mean she writes an essay for the simplest things.
"Don't get all technical on me. And you can't say technically and then speak in such non technical terms. I totally won this. Last minute is soo much closer to our Hogwarts arrival than last millionth hour."
"Hold on, I'm almost done. Than I'll tell you why I didn't do it during the summer. Just shut up for a second and I can tell you."
Not only did our dear Lily write novels, but she wrote novels very very fast. Trust me too, I was as quiet as a tree. Not like the Wizard of Oz trees in the movie. I love that movie. I love my movie obsessed parents. It's funny. We're one of the few pureblood families left and my parents are huge muggle movie freaks. Especially the muggle fantasy. Those are just funny. My favorite is Cinderella, where the fairy godmother's spell is "bipity bopity boo!" it's just so out there. But anyway, I wasn't like the trees in the wizard of oz movie that start like yelling at Dorothy for picking an apple and then throwing apples at her. I was being like your everyday tree, sitting there, silent.
"Okay, done. So anyway, I spent the summer at my aunts house which is like about four hours away. She had this one guy that was the son of her really good friend or something. Oh Bee, he's so cute, really sweet too. Anyway, he actually is a wizard. He went to a wizarding school in Sweden, but actually is from here. He graduated just last June so he's only a year older than us. He's going to get an apartment in Hogsmeade and he's going to work at Zonkos. But we're going out." Lily had this huge goofy grin on her face.
"Oh Lily that's so cool! Yay! So you guys can like meet up there! What does he look like?"
"Like a dream. He's really well muscled because he's a big quidditch player. He wants to make brooms one day. He's working on a business plan and should have his company started in the next year or so. He's got dark brown hair. It's so dark it's almost black. And he has amazing eyes. They're like brown, blue and green-"
"Black hair and hazel eyes, likes quidditch, works at a joke shop. Hmm, who does that remind you of?" I started coughing, mumbling "James Potter" in the middle of my coughing burst.
"My boyfriend does not look like James Potter, Bee." Lily was staring me down.
"Uh huh, sure. So what is this guys name anyway?"
"Jared Nimbus."
"The name even sounds the same! You so like James, Lils. I can sense it with my amazing senses. My 6th sense."
"You have 6 senses. Hearing, smelling, touching, feeling, seeing, and magic." Lily's eyes were shining away. She was definitely enjoying our bickering. Just more reason to know she liked James.
"7th sense then. I can sense it with my 7th sense. Not only does your boyfriend look like James,"
"He does not!"
"-and like the same things,"
"He likes more things too, like star gazing and reading,"
"but his name sounds the same too!"
"What are you talking about Bee. They aren't the same at all."
"Yes they are. They both start with a J."
"There's a million names with J. Jared, Jimmy, Justin,"
"There's J-A"
"That's just merely coincidence."
"J-A- consonant! Oh Lils, beat that!"
"You're so weird." Lily stood up giving me a quizzical look (yes Lils, I can use big words) and went to the door.
"It's true, you've got the hotts for James and don't want to admit it so you're going out with someone like him instead."
"Whatever. I'm just gonna choose to ignore you. I gotta run to the head meeting so I can meet my co-head and talk to the prefects for like 20 minutes. Then I'll be back. Danny and Jade should be here shortly to keep you company. I think they went to go track down the sweets cart right before you came. They should be back soon with plenty of sugar. I'm leaving you with sugar and Danny. I'm an idiot I swear. I'll just pretend I didn't realize the dire consequences this could lead to. Yeah. I'm gonna go."
"J-A-consonant!"
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