Suffocated.

A/N: Hi, a new story, I know were im going with this so I hope to update more regularly then I do with Renesmee s I never update Renesmee s life. I am not very good at titles so could you suggest a better title? summary:
Life is like a prison. For bella Swan any way. Bella is an average, fun, popular girl. Until her older brothers get in the way. Bella has two brothers, emmett and jasper, and they don t let her date. But what will she do when she meets emmett and jasper s best friend the mysterious, elusive Edward Cullen. Who also happens to be bella s best friend, Alice and Rosalie, older brother. What will happen when they fall in love? Will they brush their love aside or tell the world?
~ I would just like to say;
I would appreciate constructive criticism;
However, I wouldn t like people just pointing out my mistakes all the time;
please review, it will make me update faster;
Im English so I will spell mum the English way but obviously it will be set in forks, Washington;
if I don t make something clear in my story then just say and I ll tell if it was meant to be like that if not I ll correct it.(I m not sure if that makes sense?)

Disclaimer:
unfortunately I do not own twilight. It all belongs to Stephenie Meyer. All I own is the situations I put them in. Although...... I wish I owned Edward and jasper though !

Ok...ok now for the story

Chapter one- brothers!

bella p.o.v I read the text again. And again. and again.

Err..... will you go out with me x.
Wow, max saxby just asked me out. I started to type the letters in on my phone. yes,x who are you texting? my brother emmett said and grabbed the phone out of my hand. "

Yes? yes to what?" emmett said.

"Give me my phone back now" he waved my phone above his head. "now" I demanded.
"No." and he started to go through my phone. Oh no. he's gonna see the text. He s going to go mad. he and jasper are going to kill max. "jaaaaaaaaspeer" emmett shouted. "Get down here now"

" What? "jasper said running down the stairs.
"Bella's got a boyfriend." emmett said full of annoyance and rage.
"WHAT" jasper shouted. "You re only 17 exactly I am seriously gonna mess this kid up" im 17. these guys really nead to get a life.
"Do you know where max saxby lives?" emmett asked jasper.
"No we ll get him at school tomorrow." Jasper said. Oh no. they re going to seriously muck him up. there was a knock at the door. I went to answer it.
"Oh my god, I soo totally like heard I mean max saxby he is like really gorgeous. I mean like really gorgeous" it was Alice. In super-hyper-talking -really-fast mode.
"al!" I moaned.
"She is not going out with anybody, we're really gonna sort him out" emmett and jasper said in unison. I pouted.
"Emmett dale swan and jasper lee swan I am NEVER EVER talking to you again." and with that i grabbed Alice s hand and dragged her to my car.

On the way to max s(I know, emmett and jasper are going to get real mad) I moaned to Alice about my brothers.
"I mean, seriously max is like really nice and I ve been waiting foreveeeeer for him to ask me. But they re just overreacting its like im being suffocated." I got out of my truck and knocked on max s door. Max answered.
"Listen max, if I were you I wouldn t come into school tomorrow, my brothers are going to kill you. oh and by the way, I would say yes but I don t want my brothers to kill you, so yes when this all dies down. does that make sense?" he nodded. I leaned in and kissed him. "Goodbye" I turned away and got into the car. When I was in the car I flipped my lid, figuratively any way!
"I can not believe my brothers! They are complete idiots! I just missed my chance with max saxby because of them! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh I just hate them."

as Alice drove, she didn t think I was stable enough to drive, I received a text from emmett.

Sorraaaaay, it s for the best. em,x

I just pressed delete.
"Al?" I asked.
"Yeah?" Alice asked. I bit my lip. "What is it?"

" y'know I said we would start to plan my brand new wardrobe, well can we just hang out I really really need that right now. Please. I am so sorry." Alice sighed.
"Ok. Do you want to stay over?" I smiled.
"Yeah thanks."

"We have some pyjamas that you left over last time you stayed. And I ve got a to die for outfit for you to wear tomorrow" I 's so alice.
"You're a lifesaver. I ll just ask" I called my mum.

"muuumy?" I said but it sounded more like a question.
"What do you want?" mum said.
"Can I stay at Alice and rose's?" I asked so sweetly I think I was about to bat my eyelashes.
"Ok. You don t have to ask! They re your best friends.!"

" Thanks mum." Alice laughed.

" Keep your eyes on the road!" just as I hung up we pulled into the cullens garage.
"Hello bella" esme and Carlisle said.
"Hi esme and Carlisle "I said.
"Bella's staying over tonight." Alice informed them.
"That s great!" esme said. Esme was so nice.

Alice grabbed my by the hand and dragged me by the hand and said "you said hang out lets go on msn" I love Alice to bits but she is just a bit weird sometimes, like the way she words things. Its creepy.
"Okaaay..." I said.

"Roooooseeeeee!" Alice called "bella's here! And she's gonna stay tonight"
"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!" rose screamed. She ran over and hugged me. I rolled my eyes.

A/N ;Just like to say....... well im not sure where I wanted to end this but please reveiw. Please. also, thanks to xxxpurplexxx1 for pointing out the error about the speech marks, thanks.

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