First I would like to say Hello to you. This is the first story about H2O I am writing and english is not my main language. I decided to write in english so that a lot of person could read it but it is really hard for me. If you want to correct me for somes things I will be happy be helped, just send me a message. I hope you will like it.

CONTEXT:

After saving the world from the comet, Cleo, Rikki and Bella went to the school graduation. Lewis came back to surprise Cleo and all of them are at the party at Rikki's café.

CHAPTER 1

Bella had left her boyfriend Will, to go singing with her band on scene. Cleo and Lewis have been flirting at a table, whereas Rikki was quietly listening to Bella on stage. Zane saw her; it has been a while since she didn't came to the café after they broke up. He approached her.

Zane: It's good to have you back in here. It feels right somehow.

Rikki: Ok don't get hopes, I'm just visiting.

Zane: Well comeback anytime… Whenever you want.

Rikki: I have a feeling I'll be spending my entire summer at…

Zane: Let me guess… Mako? You know if you ever need any company out there…

Rikki: I'll be sure to ask anyone except you.

She left, letting Zane alone.

Zane: That was a joke right.

Rikki smile at him while leaving the café.

Bella was singing on stage when she suddenly felt dizzy, Will quickly gather around her so she don't fall. On their side, Lewis related his adventures in United-Stated to his girl, but noticed that Cleo wasn't listing to what he was saying, she has fallen asleep. He looked the hustle around the scene to see that Bella was in the same condition. Zane has been following Rikki outside the café, wanted to know if she was actually joking or not.

Zane: Rikki wait.

Rikki: Goodbye Zane.

She told him, without looking back at him, when her body just broke. She faint like the other girls. Zane brought her back to the café to see that the other boys were in the same situation. They went to the office, laid down the girls on the floor and locked the door.

Zane: What's happening?

Will: Do you think it's because of last night?

Lewis: What happened last night?

Zane and Will quickly told the story to Lewis so they can find what happened. But at this moment Cleo, Rikki and Bella transform into mermaids. The three guys were shocked by what just happened and didn't understand anything that was going on.

Lewis: Did they get wet?

Will: No, they were totally dry.

Zane: It doesn't make sense.

Someone knocked at the door

Sophie: Everything's ok in there?

Zane: Yes! Can you please close the café, and go back home too.

Sophie wanted to know what was happening in this office. But since the event that happened in Mako she knew she has to stop bothering them if she wanted to stay working here. She just closed the café as the boss said, and left without trying to know what was happening.

Zane: What if they just stay like this forever?

Will: When they were trying to understand the story of the comet they were talking about a legend. In the past a mermaid named Eva saved the world from the same comet and nobody ever saw her again.

Lewis: So, you think after saving the world, this mermaid Eva turns definitively into a mermaid and that's why nobody saw her again?

Zane: I don't want to believe that. Nothing was proved. Girls were just normal all day, why would it happen now?

Will: Maybe we should put them in water? They might wake up?

Lewis: No, we're not doing anything till we don't know what's happening. Things could just get worst.

About twenty minutes after the transformation girls were back to normal but still sleeping. The three boys felt lightly relieved; at least they wouldn't stay mermaids for the rest of their continue trying to understand what was happening, when Lewis noticedthe water containerwas heat of the room was rising faster and faster and everything became out of boys looked back to the girls knowing it was their went to see the main room of the café,luckily everybody has already left. You could feel the high heat all over, blenders and juices went crazy and we could hear thunderclap above the café. A magic storm was coming. He gets back to the office in panic.

Zane: We have to get them out of here. They are too powerful, it's becoming too dangerous.

Will: How do we know they're not going to turn into mermaids while we're outside?

Zane: We have to try; we don't have any other choice.

Lewis brought Cleo back at her home trying to be as quiet as possible so he didn't wakes up anyone, laid her down on her bed and locked the door. Zane took Rikki to his house even if they weren't together anymore. It was the only way he could take care of her. Willy couldn't go to his house because of Sophie and to Bella's house either because of her parents, so they stayed at the café. As soon as the girls were split up, the Rikki's café got back to normal.

Zane quickly arrived at his home, went up to his bedroom and put Rikki on his bed. He took care to put her at ease by changing her evening outfits to one of his tee-shirt. He barely rested for ten minutes that problems were already back. Rikki's body was literally boiling, her temperature was raising so much and so fast that it was becoming dangerous for the girl. With panic, he opened the window, removed the duvet from her and turned on the fan. Her temperature needed to get down before it become worse. The temperature stopped rising but still hasn't get down; he needed to find something else. He thought at a cold shower or ice cubes but remembered she shouldn't transform. He called Samantha, the house governor and asked her to bring him every ice pack she could find in the house.

Samantha: Here, I've got everything I could find. Why do you need that?

She moved into the room to see Rikki on the bed. Zane quickly explain to her.

Zane: She's really sick and has fever; I need to cool it down.

Samantha: You should take her to a cold bath; it will be good for her.

Zane: Hmm…No…The water would become hot, it wouldn't help.

Samantha: As you want, I bring you a glass of water and a medicine.

Zane: Thanks!

Zane gave the medicine to Rikki and installed every dry ice pack underneath her body. Lewis and Will called to know if everything was okay with the girls. Will assure everyone that Bella was totally fine, Lewis told that Cleo was still sleeping and aside from a flying aquarium, everything was under control. Zane told them about Rikki's condition, which was the worst of the three girls. The three boys stayed half asleep all night to keep eyes on the girls if anything else happened.

So here it is for the chapter 1. What did you think about it? Are the girls gonna be okay? Tell me what you think.

Is the lenght of th chaper is okay or you would prefer to be shorter or longer ?