Disclaimer: I do not own Danny Phantom. I got this idea from MARY SUE MUST DIE: A MORALITY TALE OF BAD WRITING. By Skjaere. I am not trying to offend any one. Do what you guys want
Danny Sam and Tuck were walking down the street when the box ghost came
"I'm goin' ghost!" yelled Danny as he transformed only to have the ghost captured by a red haired green skinned girl in a blue and green jumpsuit with matching boots
"Hi I'm Martha Alexandria Rowla Sandra Uniss Elvinmyer. I'm half ghost and your twin from an alternat dimension. Ihave full control of my ghost powers and have super clear skin." Said Martha
"I know she seems prep but I like her." Said Sam
"Me too." Said Tucker
"I know that I should be suspisius and I was but not anymore!" said Danny
"I'm moving in next door."
"Cool!" said everybody
"I know that we shouldn't just transform in public but that's fine!" said Danny
"I love you now Danny!" said Sam
"I'm secretly in love with you Danny!" said Tucker
"Let's all kick ghost butt!" said Martha
"Cool!" said everybody
"I'm gonna go tell my parents my secret now!" said Danny
"Cool!" said everybody
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Why people don't like perfect charectors: because people aren't perfect. They want to see themselves in these charectors
Half ghost plotline: so over used it's been ground into dust. Seriously, at one point this might have been original but now it's dust. Probably literally by now
SamXDanny: She won't just say it out of the blue and you really should build up to tthat instead of just saying their going out
TuckerXDanny: he doesn't like him like that. It's been established that he likes girls
Alternate reality: again a twin and alternate realities have so been overused. Try something new
Suspisions: he will be suspicious of her and won't suddenly stop
Looks: again Ocs need flaws