Smoke rings in the dark

he was blowing the pain

in rings of sorrow

the leather jacket of rebellion

the uncut hair

the unruly smirk gone from his features

a fag in his fingers

burning the calloused pads

a thumb stroking the strings

thin ones

thick ones

coiled strums

humming to his smoke rings

the cloud growing in his mouth

down his throat

into his lungs

whiskey laying empty on the table

bottles lying on the broken floor

clattering with the storm

the clouds of smoke rain

a heavy shower

the world dying in endless grey

with only cigarettes and fire whiskey for mates

abandoned glass jug at bare feet

crying from the clouds

smoke rings

of what used to be

see only the dark

the smoke rings hazy in numb

the strings slice

the coils unwound

the thunder hits

the lightning reigns

closer

closer to the storm

beating on the clear bottles

screaming in agony

the rising action

the curtains murdered

the floor boards blood-curdling

every fiber of being drenched of blood

the cymbals crash!

silence

a tear

drops off the stumble chin

mixes in the whiskey

and the rain falls

long over due

and the cloud of smoke rings

is free