Sep-29-2013
Hi zerowolfx here with my very first fanfic so u know give me a chance to learn the ropes and u can also pm me on mistake and spelling or can just review, so all in all help me help you.
Chapter 1
Dancing around the busy and bustling streets of the Valley of Peace, was a mouth watering aroma tapping on the nose of the many passing villagers, almost pulling them closer to a well known noodle shop. As a loud "Order up" was heard, resulting in a family of six pigs to spin and look in awe as a large panda with three bowls laid out on each of his arms and one bowl of bean buns on his head walked out of the kitchen. Well, maybe it was not necessarily the amazing balancing act, nor the fact that he was a large panda. It was who was serving them, none other than Po, the Dragon Warrior himself!
Po was now setting down the bowl from on top of his head, as he was looking at the eyes that were stuck on him, with a small smile he thought to himself, "Must be travelers."
"Dragon warrior," greeted the two elder pigs as they began to bow , "No no no, its ok, I have a day off ...Today I am just Po, the noodle cook," Po said, quickly rising a hand with a smile. As much as he like being the Dragon Warrior, on his day off he would prefer to just be Po." Po!" called a goose with a odd noodle shape hat, "Tables five and seven need there orders, oh and some dumplings for table two." said , placing the bowls of noodles on the kitchen counter." Coming dad!" called Po, as he began to walk away saying to the family,"Come again."
Meanwhile not to far from the valley of peace ,in a bamboo Forrest sitting down on a rock near a small river was a white wolf with a black stripe running over his nose, between his eyes and down his back , wearing a black pants with a blue training vests. His name was Zero. He was looking at an old black bow staff with gold vines carving on it saying mostly to himself, "I'm lost dad... I should of reach the Valley by now." as he now looked up to the sky ,"I cant even travel to valley of peace...I was the wrong choice father," Zero said, as he was standing up. Saddly once he got up, Zero slipped, and fell right into the river face first.
Raising his head out of the water while shaking it furiously, *cough cough* " can my day get any worse?" That said, a loud rumble was coming from his stomach,"Great, lost, wet, cold and hungry... I should start moving."
As zero was now picking up his bow staff and a small green bag and began to walk deeper into the the bamboo forest. He looked up at the sky again, only to notice that the sun was now staring to set. He now looked forward only to continue to walk as he was hoping that he might be able to find an inn or maybe something to eat when he reached the the valley. He just hoped he could reach the valley at all after the day he had.
The sun was now setting as Po finished cleaning some tables. Looking back at his work, he nodded and called out "Okay Dad, it's getting late so Im going back to the palace." walking out of the kitchen was with a smile on his face saying, " Thanks again for coming and helping me out today on your day off. You know, you could of spent the day looking for a nice girl to bring home." "Dad!" said Po now rolling his eyes , with saying," I want grandkids Po." with that, Po hugged his dad and said," Goodbye Dad." and quickly ran straight for the door and down the street. only chuckled to himself as he walked back inside and started on some dishes.
Po came around a corner at full speed going as fast as his panda feet could carry him, taking another corner only to see Tigress walking. Po pulled out all stops, but with the speed and his body weight pulling him toward, he tripped and fell forward. But luckily Tigress noticed him at the right moment, and pulled off a flip over the falling panda. She landed safe and calm onto the ground with a smile, knowing that she didn't collided with the panda, " Oh...ouch, sorry Tigress. I was in a hurry to make it in time to cook dinner." Po said, now rubbing his head.
"It's ok Po, Master Shifu sent me to look for you so you can get to bed early and wake up on time tomorrow." Po started laughing while adding ," wake up late! me? Really!? stopping with cocked eyebrow looking at her."Come on," she called as they started to climbing the 1000 steps.
Ok is it to short , Im shaking up I want to know how I did, if I need to do better ,what can I do to make it better and Im asking for your help. You can pm me on some questions and ideas or you can just review and again its my first fanfic so not to be to hard on me please ok next time.
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