This is my first fanfic, and I would really appreciate input and thoughts! The idea for this came to me one day and wouldn't leave...so here I am! It starts out with some of Richelle Mead's work, which I put in quotes, the rest is mine. Oh, and I don't own anything. So, here it is.

"While heading out to practice later, I stopped in the dorm's kitchen to grab a granola bar. As I did, I passed a couple of novice guys, Miles and Anthony. Miles whistled when he saw me.

'How's it been going, Rose? You getting lonely? Want some company?'

Anthony laughed. 'I can't bite you, but I can give you something else you want.'

I had to pass through the doorway they stood in to get outside. Glaring, I pushed past, but Miles caught me around the waist, his hand sliding down to my butt.

'Get your hands off my ass before I break your face,' I told him, jerking away. In doing so, I only bumped into Anthony.

'Come on,' Anthony said, 'I thought you didn't have a problem taking on two guys at the same time.' "

"I don't recall offering to be with either one of you," I replied, trying to shove my way past them, but not succeeding.

Miles chuckled when he realized I was stuck. "It doesn't look like you've got much of a choice, Rose," he sneered.

That was when they started in on me. Anthony swung at my face. I wasnt quick enough to block it. The force disoriented me, allowing Miles to kick my legs out from underneath me. They laughed as I hit the ground. Anthony, being the leader of the two, stradled my waist and tore at my shirt. I struggled, but it was futile. There was no way for me to escape this. I closed my eyes, trying to block it out, though I wasn't very succesful, and prayed someone would show up to help me.

I struggled to stand as pain coursed through my body. I stumbled out of the building and to the gym, glad I hadn't run into anyone. I sighed before pushing open the door to the gym, knowing I was late for my training with Dimitri.

"Rose! You're late! 10 extra laps no-" he stopped talking, more like yelling, the second he turned and saw me. "Rose, what happened?" He was at my side in seconds.

I flinched away, and cursed inwardly, reminding myself it was just Dimitri and he wouldn't hurt me. "Nothing, I got into a fight on the way over. I obviously lost."

"No," he shook his head then returned to staring at me. I averted my eyes to the floor. "You clothes are torn and you've got bruises on your arms."

"That happens when you get in a fight," I argued, but it was half-hearted. I didn't have it in my to really fight him.

"They are hand shaped, Rose," he observed. Dimitri reached out and put a hand on my shoulder. I gasped and pulled away.

"Please," I whispered, my eyes filling with tears.

"What happened?" He all but demanded.

"I'm sorry," I told him, "I know I promised to keep out of compromising situations, but I didn't know they would be there! I swear I didn't mean to. I'm so sorry, Dimitri!" I collapsed into his arms.

"Whoa, hey, slow down. Rose what happened?"

"Dimitri," I said between sobs. "I was attacked. And raped." I let out another sob, and burried my face into his shoulder as he wrapped his arms around me.

Sooo, what do you think so far? Should I continue? Review with your thoughts, pleaseeee! :)