Here is the prologue for 'The Phantom's Domain'. I reposted it because there was alot of errors in it and I wanted to change some things. So I hope you like it. PLEASE DO NOT FLAME
I do not own Phantom of the Opera but I own Caine, Anne, and Ben.
Prologue
They had finally arrived at there destination and got out of the carriage.
"Well, it is about time we got here, you idiot!" roared Caine at the driver who was cowering in fear in the front. Caine was a young man, the age of 19, his short jet black hair was combed back, and had a slender yet muscular figure. He usually wears a black vest, white collared shirt under the vest, black leather gloves, black dress-like pants, black leather boots, and a black cape that's blood red in the inside. His eyes are a golden-yellow color and he always wears a full balck mask that goes from his forehead to his upper lip.
"Caine, you should not yell at the driver, he was trying his best." calmly Anne said. Anne was a beautiful girl, the age of 12, brown wavy hair that goes a little past her shoulders, and had a slender figure. She wears a navy blue evening dress, white gloves, and black dress shoes. Her eyes are light blue color. The reply she got was mumbling.
"So, this is where we are going to live. If they it made it bigger you could probably see it from the moon." Ben said excitedly. Ben was a child, the age of 5, he had short brown hair that was all messed up and wild, and he was thin. He wore a blue shirt that had gold trim, brown pants, black shoes, and he almost always carries his favorite teddy bear, Mr. Brown. His eyes were blue like his sister's. "I don't care, come on we have to find out which room we stay in." Caine grunted. And with that they went into the giant building.
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