Hey everyone, I was rereading my Naruto starwars crossover and it just wasn't working so I decided to do a little rewriting on it, I hope you enjoy it
"Talking"
'Thinking'
"Bijuu/Summoning/Droids talking"
I do not own Naruto or Star Wars
It was a calm cool night in the village of Konohagakure no Sato, the village hidden in the leaf's, and all the civilians were sound asleep, despite the number of chunin and jonin running around the village.
Deep in a forest clearing, not far away from the village was a boy wearing a kill me orange jumpsuit reading out of a large scroll; the boy was about twelve years old with spiky blonde hair and bright cauldron blue eyes.
This boy was one Naruto Uzumaki, the Jinchurikki of the fearsome Kyubi no Kitsune, and he had just finished learning the shadow clone jutsu from the forbidden scroll of sealing and was currently looking for a new jutsu to learn.
"Let's see, the Edo Tensei, no sounds horrible, Chidori, save that for later," Naruto muttered to himself as he copied down the instructions for the jutsu. "Next is the Rasengan, save that for later, water dragon jutsu, save for later, what's this?"
Naruto paused as he came across a strange looking seal, which took up a good amount of the page before giving instructions on what it did.
"Uzumaki seal: the seal will send the one to activate it and a number of other's to another world for five year's worth of training, cool, five years of training, I'm in," Naruto said activating the seal.
The seal spread out underneath him, for a good few feet, before glowing a bright red, as three tendrils branched off from the seal, heading in different directions at blinding speeds.
"Naruto what are you doing?" Naruto looked up to see his academy teacher, Iruka, arrive in the clearing, before the seal, turned a bright gold, before a flash of light knocked Naruto and the three other's that had been chosen by the seal, to fall into unconsciousness.
Darth Sidious, or Supreme Chancellor Palpatine as he was known to the republic, let out a long and tired sigh as he sat back in his privet chambers; everything was starting to fall into place.
Young Skywalker had become a Jedi, padawan to one Obi-Wan Kenobi, and was growing in power every day; he only needed to wait another few years before he could fully enact his planes, divide the galaxy through war then rebuild it under his rule, with Skywalker, the Jedi's 'chosen one' acting as his loyal puppet.
With a satisfied smirk on his face he leaned back in his chair, glancing out over Coruscant, before sitting up and turning around, sensing a powerful disturbance in the force; slowly reaching for his lightsaber, Palpatine watched as a circle in strange writing appeared on the floor of his privet chambers before, in a flash of light the circle vanished leaving two teen's laying on the ground, unconscious.
The first teen was a boy with spiky blonde hair; he was wearing a hideous orange jumpsuit and had a rather large object next to him that resembled a scroll that a few of the worlds in the outer rim still used.
The second teen was a girl with long blonde hair; she was wearing a pair of purple cloths and a head band with a metal plate and some strange marking on it.
Palpatine stared at the two curiously, he had no clue where they had appeared from, but he could tell that both were very powerful in the force, they were both stronger than either himself or Master Yoda, hell they were probably stronger then both himself and Yoda combined.
As he observed the two a plane slowly started to form in his mind, if he could train these two get these two to swear their loyalty to him, he would have two very powerful servants, he could easily accelerate his plans by a number of years, but first he would have to train them both in the ways of the dark side.
Inside of a large throne like room stood two cloaked figures, a third was sitting on a throne watching the two as they stared at each other.
The figure on the throne was Palpatine, his Sith cloak hiding his face as a smirk played across his face as he stared at his two apprentices.
"Begin," with a snap and his two red lightsabers ignited, as the two rushed at each other, faster than any Jedi, meeting in the middle of the room as sparks flew from the two sabers colliding, the cloaks flying off to reveal his apprentices.
The first was a boy with bright blonde hair, three whisker like marks on each cheek and golden yellow eyes, which were the sigh of a true Sith; he was wearing a pair of black pants and a black sleeveless shirt which showed of the numerous makings on his arm; this was Naruto Uzumaki, who was by far the more destructive of the two.
The second was a girl with long blonde hair and golden yellow eyes, similar to Naruto's, showing she was also a true Sith; she was wearing a female version of the suit Naruto was wearing, her arms also being covered in markings; this was Yugito Nii.
It had been four years since the two had appeared in his office and their training in the dark side was progressing faster than he could have ever imagined; as it turned out both already had combat training, so moving to using the force was simple, they also had strange powers, that were not of the force, which made them both even more dangerous.
"Enough," Palpatine said after a few minutes of sparing, since if they continued they would start using their powers, which were very destructive. "Approach me my apprentices," deactivating their sabers the two moved over and kneeled before him.
"What do you desire from use master?" the two asked in sync, both wearing matching smirks.
"It is time for you both to go, my planes should start any day now and I need both of you to lead my armies against the Jedi," the two nodded their heads before leaving the room, headed for a small ship.
"So do you think your plan will actually work Naruto?" Yugito asked as they sat on a wall of one of the Geonosis colosseums, watching as the Jedi were being overrun by Droids, before a large transport ship appeared with a number of soldiers.
"Of course, we just have to buy that idiot Dooku," Naruto said as they began to move.
After waking up from their unconscious state, the two shinobi were greeted by Palpatine who had told offered them training and to teach them, which they accepted since they had no clue where they were.
After being given a room the two began to talk and over the following hours learnt what the seal had done; after talking it over and a lot of arguing on their part, the two had finally agreed to learn from Palpatine, but fain amnesia as to where they had learnt there shinobi abilities, which he seemed quit interested in after seeing Naruto preform the Shadow clone.
Two year after arriving, during which time both shinobi became close, close enough to tell the other about themselves, the two were told about Palpatine's plane and began planning themselves.
With their Sith training coming to an end Naruto had come up with a plan that both had agreed to; first they would lead Palpatine's droid army against the Jedi, splitting the galaxy like he wanted, after a few month of that, they would start collecting female Jedi whom they would place loyalty seals on, once their final year here was up, they would seal all of the female Jedi into a scroll in order to take them back to their own dimension, once they returned home they would bide their time before waging an all-out war against the five great nations.
"I hope you're right, otherwise it's going to be a long year," Yugito said as they reached a hanger where Dooku was fighting Anakin, Obi-Wan having been knocked out.
As silently as shadows the two appeared behind Anakin and, before he could do anything, knocked him unconscious.
Before they could do more than exchange a nod with Dooku, they turned towards the entrance of the hanger where Jedi Master Yoda hobbled in, followed by two other Jedi, both of whom got wide eyes from Naruto and Yugito.
"Ah, Master Yoda, how good of you to show up," Dooku said in a drawling voice. "Though I'm afraid you're too late," he turned and began heading towards a ship that was prepped to launch. "Kill him."
Activating their lightsabers and giving a slight nod, the two rushed at the tinny Jedi master, only to be intercepted by the two other Jedi.
The one who clashed with Naruto was male, he had short russet red hair and green eyes, he was wearing a standard Jedi robes as well as a headband with the symbol of Sunagakure.
The one who intercepted Yugito was a girl; she had bright green hair and orange eyes, she was also wearing standard Jedi robes though the headband she had on showed the symbol for Takigakure.
"Well, well, look at what we got here, looks like we weren't the only two to be brought to this dimension," Naruto smirked as he force pushed the two away from him while in the background Dooku fought with Yoda.
"So it seems, this could make our plans more difficult," Yugito said activating her second lightsaber.
"I take it you two are from our world, wherever that is," said the boy as he held a green lightsaber.
"Sure are, though that won't matter in a few months," Naruto smirked activating his own second lightsaber.
"Oh and why is that?" the girl asked holding a blue lightsaber in a reverse grip with her left hand and a purple lightsaber in right.
"Ever wonder about the numbers on your chest's that have been counting down, and are now on the number one?" the two raised an eyebrow, wondering where they were going with this. "Those are seals, counting down the amount of time we have before we return to our villages, the villages that see us as nothing but monsters or weapons."
"Is there a reason you're telling us this?" the boy asked tensing up.
"We just want to offer you both a proposition," Naruto smirked taking on a relaxed stance. "We want you both to join us when we return home, together, the four of us will be invincible and will take over the elemental nations."
"Not a chance, there's no way we'd join the dark side," the girl said seriously, before gaining a confused look as the two burst out laughing.
"You really think we care about sides, no what we care about is protecting our own, the ones we care about, using any means necessary," Yugito smirked getting stunned looks from the two.
"That doesn't matter, now, we won't let you two get away," with that the two Jedi charged, all four clashing, Naruto taking on the red head while Yugito engaged the girl.
"Your pretty good for a Jedi," Naruto complemented as he blocked a slash from the boy. "Mind telling me your name, that way I know who to keep an eye one in the future."
"I am Gaara no Sabaku, Jinchurikki of the Ichibi no Tanuki," the now named Gaara said getting a grin from Naruto.
"And you would you be?" Yugito asked as she force pushed the girl away from her.
"I am Fu the Jinchurikki of the Nanabi no Kabutomushi," the now named Fu smirked before it turned into a frown as their opponents shared a smirk.
"Well since you told us your names I guess it's only fair that we tell you ours," Yugito smirked sending a shiver down their spines. "I am Yugito Nii, the Jinchurikki of the Nibi no Bakeneko."
"And I am Naruto Uzumaki, the Jinchurikki of the Kyubi no Yoko," at this both Gaara and Fu gained wide eyes, surprised to be facing two other Jinchurikki.
Before they could do anything else the four of them shielded their eyes from the dust as Dooku's ship blasted off, providing a distraction for Naruto to grab Yugito before the two vanished in a flash of yellow light.
"Are you alright Naruto?" Yugito asked as the two of them reappeared aboard the ship they had orbiting the planet.
"Yeah, just a little winded, still haven't mastered the first step of that Jutsu," Naruto panted as a servant droid approached them; before Naruto had activated the seal to bring them to this dimension he had copied a few Jutsu from the forbidden scroll, the Chidori, the Edo Tensei, the Hiraishin, Senjutsu training and Elemental manipulation training; they had mastered the Elemental manipulation training, learning to use all five elements as well as combine them to form sub-elements, though it took a bit more chakra then it would have if they had the bloodline release; they had also learnt the Hiraishin, though they could only preform the first step, of flashing to a preset marker.
"We really need to master that Jutsu before we return home, it will save us a lot of time," the Nibi Jinchurikki said as she helped Naruto towards a chair, while they had both learnt the Jutsu, Naruto was better at it then her, seeing as she needed to concentrate on the marker before flashing to it while Naruto could just feel the nearest marker.
"Master Naruto, Mistress Yugito, Lady Asajj Ventress is here to see you both," said the servant droid as it arrived next to them.
"Must be about the list we asked for, send her in," the droid nodded before leaving to follow its orders.
"You think she got the names for us?" Yugito asked as their ship entered hyperspace, heading away from Geonosis.
"Of course I got the list you asked for, though I don't know why you want it," the two turned to see Ventress walking towards them followed by two battle droids. Ventress was a rather attractive woman, she had pale white skin, a common sight for Dathomir females, and blue eyes; she was wearing a long black dress with two lightsabers attached to her waist.
"That's for us to know," Yugito smirked as she took a chip that Ventress handed them before plugging it into the ships computer.
For a few moments the ships monitor flashed before showing a list of female Jedi and a picture, with their rank and species.
"Good, this should help us capture them faster than it would have otherwise," Naruto said as they scrolled through the list which was rather extensive.
"True, now we just need to find those planets and we'll be set for when we return home," Ventress raised an eyebrow at that before shrugging it off, the two had their secrets which they said she would learn in time.
Naruto sighed as he looked at a star map; it had been a few days since the start of this war, and while Yugito was of enacting their plan for capturing female Jedi, he was looking for a planet that he could feel had a strong pull on the force.
"How hard can it be to find a simple planet out here in the outer rim," he muttered as the ship sailed through space, the force guiding him on his journey; during their training both him and Yugito had had a vision of a beautiful woman with long green hair and brown eyes, in the vision the woman had smiled at them, telling them she was a powerful force user, meaning that she would be able to help them when they returned to the elemental nations.
After having the vision both sith lords had agreed to track her down and capture her in order to take her back home with them.
Taking a deep calming breath, Naruto allowed the force to guide him as he pushed the hyper drive button; as he exited hyperspace, Naruto's eyes widened as he found himself floating over a large planet where he could send the force basically circling around it.
"Looks like I found my destination," Naruto smirked as he directed his ship towards the planet, wondering what he would find.
Thanks for reading and please review
Pairings
NarutoxYugito
I plan to add at least three other female Jedi and four Naruto girls to his Harem.