A/N So technically this would be my second fanfic…but my first isn't working right xp That being said, I still have no earthly idea as to what I'm doing. So…bare with me and please, PLEASE review and tell me what I can do to make it better and such…criticism is probably what I need the most.
Another quick thing, this contains my own and my best friends Organization characters, Axsrah and Aralixonai. (Ara, for short.)
I teleported into the Grey Area; bloodied and cut up to a point that looked like I would surely die.
"Ara!"
I didn't bother to see who all was in there, I didn't have enough energy to. I couldn't even tell who called my name. I collapsed on the floor; the cold linoleum pressed against my cheek.
"Ara! Ara! Jesus Christ what happened to you?"
"..A-Axel?" I forced my eyes open to see the fiery haired man kneeling beside me.
"Ara! My god what happened?" He turned his head. "XEMNAS!" he boomed. "GET YOUR SUPERIOR ASS IN HERE NOW!"
"..H-he sent me…on a m-mission…" I started. "…It wasn't just Heartless…"
"Why is everybody shouting?" I fixed my gaze on the doors, where my sister, Axsrah, stood. "..Ara?"
"Axsrah, make sure Xemnas is getting down here." Axel ordered.
Axsrah just stood there, wide-eyed and frozen.
"Axel…" he turned back to me. "..th-there are others…like us…but-" I was cut off by blood flooding my throat.
"XEMNAS!"
*SLAP* "Do not call for me that way again, Axel. Keep your place." Xemnas growled.
I had lifted and held myself up by my arms while I was coughing, and I thought I had enough strength to try and stand up.
I heard Axsrah run over to help me, along with Axel.
Apparently the strength I thought I had, was non-existent. I fell almost immediately, and would've hit the floor if not for my sister and best friend.
They set me down gently and I shuddered from the pain.
"I see you made it back in one piece Aralixonai." He turned to walk away. "…Even if it is just barely."
I felt Axsrah tense beside me and start to get up, but Axel restrained her.
I coughed up more blood. "..Bastard..."
Xemnas stopped walking. "What was that?"
"I said…'you bastard.'" I spit blood in the direction of his shoes.
"Ara…" Axel warned me.
Next thing I knew, Xemnas was four feet away from the three of us; his Ethereal Blades in his hands, raised for attack. He swung, but the attack was stalled.
I looked up and saw…Axsrah? Stopping the blades with her bare hands. Her silver bangs covered her eyes, and a deadly smirk played on her face.
"You won't touch her…Superior."
Xemnas drew back. "You have the thought to order me about one of my members?" He questioned, sounding amused.
"No." My sister looked up with a sinister look in her eyes. "I have the initiative to tell you to not touch my sister. And that order, you will obey."
He smirked. "Is that so? And what would be the expense at not obeying your order…Axsrah?"
"Oh I think you'll find that consequences won't be necessary. If, however, you're desperate to know…Hmh. Well, you don't want to know."
"Very well. I'll abide by your precious order." He walked to the high arch of the entrance to the Grey Area, and paused. "However, I hope you realize that as long as you are here, I am still your superior. Meaning you will follow my way. No questions asked." And with that, he disappeared in the familiar cloud of wispy black smoke.
As soon as he was gone, every bit of energy in my body drained. My eyes rolled back and I collapsed.
A/N So I know my stories tend to be dark, so I apologize if you don't like it. This one should get better throughout. My wonderful sibling/best friend LoveThroughDeception has read the chapters I have written and 'loves them' in her words. So...again, review and tell me what you think. ...PLEASE! o.e
