(A/N): So... here goes. Let's hope I can finish the story XD Oh, and... hope my beginning is good enough. I have the plot written down, but actually starting to write is what gets me XD I apologize if the action is moving too quickly at the beginning, I promise it'll get better... in later chapters.
Double Danny Chapter 1: Another Promise Broken
It was a relatively warm autumn day. A breeze was blowing to make the weather just a little cool, but comfortable nonetheless.
Danny Fenton, Sam Manson and Tucker Foley were visiting the new amusement park in town, and having a really good time. They rode the rides, played the games, ate the food, won the prizes and so on.
Now the three friends were almost ready to go back to their homes, but had agreed to ride the Tornado just one more time. When they arrived at the ride, there wasn't really any line to speak of, so the teens wouldn't have to wait long.
"Wow! Talk about good luck," exclaimed Tucker, seeing the line's shortness. "We'll get through here in no time." A second later, the boy was rushing ahead of his friends to get in line.
"Hey!" Danny said, "Wait for us, Tuck!" The other boy ran after Tucker, Sam close behind him.
"You promise this is the last thing we're doing here before leaving?" asked the Goth girl.
"Promise, Sam," Tucker said, meaning his words.
It was almost the teens' time to get on the Tornado when a blue, mist-like substance escaped Danny's mouth. "Another promise broken, guys. We've got trouble," he said grimly, seeing three ghosts. The ghosts had to be up to something, Danny just knew it! "Don't bother saving my place, this could take a while."
Sam sighed as her friend ran off to go ghost someplace. She and Tucker stood in line, silent. Finally, Tucker spoke.
"So, think we could ride the Tornado without him?" the boy motioned his thumb back toward the ride.
Sam shook her head. "No, let's just see how the battle goes. It just wouldn't be right for us to get on without him, this was his idea, after all."
The techno-geek looked thoughtful. "You may be right. I'm gonna go buy a corn dog." He walked off in the direction of a snack stand.
Sam glanced in the direction Danny had gone. She saw the halfa, now in ghost form, battling three individuals. It looked like an ordinary fight for him, throwing witty banters and ectoplasmic rays back and forth. But there was something...wrong...
Sam stepped out of the line to move in for a closer look. "Tucker, look at this!" she yelled, not removing her eyes from the battle.
The boy sensed the slight urgency in his friend's voice. He took his corn dog and jogged to where the girl was standing. His eyes, too, widened in shock.
"What the...?"
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Danny went ghost and flew to where the three ghosts were. They were trying to harm an innocent little kid with a balloon.
One ghost was tall, black haired, green-skinned, crimson-eyed and wore a black leather jacket and white t-shirt. Another, a female, had her white-and-purple streaked hair tied in a loose ponytail and wore a black midriff and pants. The third ghost, another male, was gray-skinned and gaunt, with messy jet-black hair nearly covering his yellow-green eyes. He wore bright green pants and a black hoodie with a green X on the front of it. They all apeared to be in their teen years.
"Hey, big guy!" Danny shouted, firing a ghost-ray at the tall one. "Whatever happened to 'pick on someone your own size'?"
The beam hit the big ghost on the back, causing him to stumble and nearly fall, regaining his balance just in time.
"Who're you, punk?" he growled. "Back off before you get hurt!" The tall ghost held up a fist, as if to threaten Danny.
"Ha! You're obviously a new guy, not to know who you're talking to," Danny said, laughing slightly.
"Tryin' to be cocky, huh? Lemme knock some sense into that white-haired head of yours!" The ghost hurled himself into the air at Danny, fist out. The half-ghost manuvered skillfully to the left, efficiently dodging the blow. Just as quickly, Danny fired an ectoblast at him, knocking him to the ground.
"What were you saying about getting hurt?" Danny asked, raising an eyebrow and crossing his arms.
The little boy had been watching the two ghosts fight, and he took this as an opportunity to evacuate the area, and had started to run as fast as he could, but the girl ghost held out her foot and tripped him. She then lifted him by his left arm, and he began to scream.
"Someone's gonna pay for that! Spike is never beaten! I, Rayne, will make sure of that!" Rayne threw the screaming kid at the ghost in the hoodie.
Danny rushed for the flying boy and caught him in the nick of time. The black-haired ghost growled in anger, flashing fanged teeth. The halfa flew the boy to safety and put him down.
"Go find your parents, now," Danny said urgently before turning to look back at the three ghosts. Rayne was forming some kind of glowing blue energy ball above her head, a scowl on her face.
"X needed that for energy, you know!" the girl hissed.
"That! You're calling a little kid a that?" Danny shouted, clearly ticked off. "Do you have no respect for humanity?"
Rayne threw her attack at Danny, who avoided it just before it hit the ground with a splat. "To answer your question, yes! We have no respect for your kind!" the girl ghost launched another blue energy-ball, which Danny also managed to avoid.
The ghost-boy flew toward Rayne, and with a simple blast, she was down. "Now, for your other friend... wait... where'd he go?" Danny looked around for the ghost Rayne had called "X". The lime-eyed boy was nowhere to be found. The halfa sighed. "Oh, well. I'll just get these two in the thermos."
Danny aimed his thermos at the ghost called Spike. When he turned it on, however, the ghost did not go in!
"What in the world?" Danny turned the thermos back off. He looked at his friends, who he realized had been watching the whole battle. They were staring at the two individuals on the ground with wide eyes. Sam appeared to be in a state of shock and confusion. Tucker had the same freaked-out expression, and dropped the corndog which was in his hand.
Confused, Danny looked back at the two on the ground. He gasped, seeing not two ghosts... but two humans! They looked similar to the two he had just fought, but with more human coloring. Spike's skin was a natural color, and Rayne's hair was now brown and streaked with blonde.
Danny held his breath and backed away, his eyes moving to the unconscious teens to his bewildered friends. Not sure what he was thinking at the time, the ghost-boy flew away, spectral tail streaming behind him. He flew straight home, still lost in his thoughts.
Er... hope you enjoyed ^^; I hope I didn't make Danny too out of character (I hate OOC stuff).
First fanfic published... Yay! :D So glad to finally finish this chapter... More wierd stuff in chapter 2. IF I can finish writing this thing... XD
Review, share your thoughts, ANYTHING to help me write a little further without losing interest! :D