So, this is my first OS in English. I wrote this two or three years ago. I found it last week, made some modifications and decide to publish it!
English isn't my mother tongue, it was a challenge for me to write this. I hope you'll understand what i've wrote... Please leave a review to tell what you've think. ^^
And tell me my mistakes!
The Gryffindor's common room was empty and quiet.
The clock rang. Immediately, the students started to wake up. All of them ? No. In the last dormitory, three boys were still sleeping. The fourth got out of the bathroom and watched his best friends. He sighed desperately and went back to his bed. With an evil smile, he took his pillow and threw it at the head of his friend at his left.
« Wake up Prongs. It's 7.00 am ! »
Prongs threw back the pillow to his owner.
« Shut up Moony ! »
Moony laughed and prepared himself for class. Prongs sat and looked around the room. He smiled at the fat boy in front of him.
« -'Morning Wormtail.
-'Morning James. Is Sirius still sleeping ?
-Yep. As usual. »
James threw his pillow at Sirius' face. This one screamed with rage !
« -I gonna kill you James ! I swear I'll kill you James Potter !
-I love you too Padfoot. » James said while he was going to the bathroom.
Two pillows hit his legs and made him fall. It was the signal. A few seconds later, a ''no-pity-war'' began. The four Marauders played like kids for a long time. They stopped only when the door opened.
« Peter no ! »
Too late. The pillow hit the red-haired girl right in her face. She stayed quiet. She looked the room and sighed. Remus waved his wand and everything became normal again.
« -Lily, we're sorry. Please don't…
-It's ok, Remus. I'm tired of yelled.
-Thanks Lily. »
Lily Evans turned her head towards James and Sirius.
« Potter, Black, detention. »
She left.
« -I hate that girl !
-We know Prongs. You're totally in love with her.
-Shut up Padfoot ! I prefer to die than have a date with Lily Evans ! »