Whenever I have a line going across the screen that means it is a scene change.
"Blah" talking "Blah" Kyubbi/demon Naruto talking "Blah" thinkingDisclaimer: I do not own Naruto (goes for all chapters)
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A six-year-old Uzumaki Naruto was walking down a street in Konohagakure. Today was the day of the great festival. Today was also one of the worst days of Naruto's life. Today was October 10th, the day the Kyubbi no Kitsune attacked.
Every year on this day, there was always a great festival to celebrate the downfall of the demon. Naruto would always try to go to the festival, but a mob always seemed to form outside of Naruto's apartment. These mobs always tried to kill naruto just because he housed the Kyuubi. For the past 5 years the Sandaime hokage always showed up before the mob could harm Naruto.
Something was off this year though, this year, was a different story. When the mob showed up, something was different this time. Whereas the mobs usually had makeshift weapons that they made themselves or just pieces of stuff on the ground, this time they didn't. What the mobs had this time were real weapons these weapons were the kind that ninjas used to kill their targets, these were not supposed to be used to kill little kids.
When Naruto tried to come out of the house, the mob just pushed him back in. He then heard a sound of a window breaking and saw a rock with an exploding tag on it. Naruto then ran to his room and ducked into a trap door that he always hid in to escape the mobs. When he got outside, he saw that the mob was waiting for him anyway. They chased him into the dead-end of an ally where he couldn't escape. Naruto turned around to see who was chasing him this time. What he saw was probably a fourth of the village waiting outside that ally. Naruto was scared when the mob started yelling "DEMON!" "Get out of our village demon!" "Repent for what you have done!" Naruto was scared out of his mind, he then asked, "Why? Why do you do these things to me! What have I done wrong!"
The villagers didn't respond by answering him, they just attacked. Naruto did not fight back because he didn't want to be hurt more than he already was. When he tried to run, someone threw a kunai at Naruto and it pierced his foot pinning him to the ground and making him trip. After all of the beatings the mobs in the past had given Naruto, this was by far the worst. When the mob stopped attacking him for a minute, he fell unconscious.
When Naruto woke up, he could feel something cold and wet. He looked around and found that he was in a sewer. He had no idea why he was here so he just started to wonder around. While he was walking around he noticed that there were big pipes along the sides of the hallways. 'I wonder what those pipes are for' he thought. He eventually came to a giant room with a huge cage covering one wall. It seemed as the only thing holding the cage closed was a small slip of paper with the word "seal" on it.
As Naruto was observing the cage, a voice came from its depths. "Hey kit, come closer." Naruto did as the voice said and was astonished at what he saw. Inside the giant cage was the most beautiful woman he has ever seen. She was wearing a red silk kimono and had long fire red hair going down to her waist. Naruto would think she was just another human except for a few things. Her hands and feet looked like claws and her eyes, the one thing that was the most mysterious, her eyes. They were dark red with vertical slits like a cat.
"Kit, you are close to death right now, so I am offering you help." Naruto wasn't listening and just asked, "Where am I?" "We are currently in your mind, kit." "Then why are you here!" asked Naruto. "Now is not the time for this, you are dying and you need help, so I am offering that help, do you accept?" Naruto didn't know what to do, since he didn't know who this was, so he said the only thing that came to mind, "I accept on one condition" "Name it" "Tell me your name." The woman was expecting Naruto to say that, so she complied with his request. "My name, is Kyubbi no Kitsune, or just Kyu for short. I am also your mother."
When Naruto woke back up in the real world, an ANBU member was walking up to him with a katana. When he got about a foot away from Naruto, he said, "Today is the day you die, demon. This will do what the fourth should have done a long time ago." As the ANBU member made a move to slash off Naruto's head, a strange red mist blocked it. The mist then formed into the woman that Naruto saw in his mind. Naruto then noticed that she was grabbing the blade with her bare hands! The ANBU was shocked at this and asked, "Who are you?" The woman responded with something Naruto wouldn't forget for a long time. "I am the Kyubbi no Kitsune, this boys mother!"
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A/N: Well, first chapter is done, so tell me what you think. (By the way, this is my first fic ever, so criticism is welcome)
