Oh gosh...this will probably end my sanity and make me rip my hair off, but I'm doing a commentary of a terrible rot-your-brain trollfic. Viewers beware!
Disclaimer- I do not own Obsidianwing's Quest (thankfully) and never will.
PART 1 LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT
Obsidianpaw wook up to a lot of birds. She walked outside th e apps den and saw firestar.
0_0 I think I actually know what's going to happen, since I've read stuff like this all to many times...
She felt her hart fluter. He was old but she thot he was hot.
OH GOD NO...
"hi" she said and smiled at him.
"hey' firestar replied with a wink.
He winked! He loved her!
PLEASE NO FIRESTAR! YOU'RE BETTER THAN THIS!
"meat me in mah den" he said
"but I have training" obsidian paw said
That's right, now sashay your butt over to your mentor and start training.
"idc" firestar said
Yes because every clan leader would say that. Firestar, you are a bad influence.
obsidianpaw was excited. Why did he want to see her in his den?
(shuld i continue pls review bye)
Thanks to all I've read, I don't think I want to continue commentating this...but I'm a total idiot so stay tuned for the next chapter!
-Toaster Stroodal