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When he speaks to another person or out loud it will be narrarated otherwise he someone else thinks or speaks which likely won't happen it will be narrated.
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"Speaking"
'Thinking'
"Monsters"
To those who are reading this, my name is Hunter Shen-Long, yeah my name is rather odd and slightly unrealistic but it's because my dad's Korean and my mom's American. I am 6'0" even, short black hair, somewhat tan skin, and relatively fit and strong looking. I have brown eyes and I tend to wear black and blue. I was your average teenager; wake up, go to school, come home, do homework, play videogames, read manga and others, listen to music, watch anime, go to sleep. I had a life despite what my previous statement indicates, I did things like practice aikido and kickboxing, built stuff with my dad, join clubs like the archery club, of course study, go out on dates, and others, you know. I am
Well, all that changed on my sixteenth birthday when I wished to go to the world of Han Jee-Han and become a gamer like him but I would be a Hacksaur because I just loves me some cheats. It's fun to be a Hacksaur anyways, especially with the command systems— so much easier.
After I had thought this I could swear that everything got cold and froze in time for a second before returning to normal. Thinking it was just the effect of the punch considering that it was spiked with a multitude of alcoholic drinks before I drank some, I blew out the candles on the cake without a second thought. I didn't realize what a grievous oversight that would be.
The next morning I woke up with, surprisingly, Hwan Sung-Ah in my arms still cold as ever. What was really surprising was that I was calm about it and the fact that there was a blue screen floating in front of me.
[Congratulations!]
Hunter Shen-Long you have had your wish granted you are now in the world of [the gamer] all info of this world and your current situation will be downloaded into your memory once this closes further information on your game life is in the guidebook] to use from menu call out game guide.
Would you like to close alert?
[Yes]or [No]
Immediately after hitting yes my brain was assaulted with information and images, giving me a killer headache. Apparently Sung-Ah noticed this because she woke up and looked at me in concern.
"What's wrong Hunter, are you alright!" she asked looking me over. This confused me for a second until I remembered the situation, whatever it was, had put me in as well as all the details. Apparently they decided I need someone because they made her my fiancée of all things even gave me memories of my time with her for the last two years that I 'didn't personally get to live.
'Well whatever I always thought she was my type, beautiful and kind' I thought before wincing when the last of my headache hit.
Now we live in an apartment together even though her father is reluctant to even let me be within ten feet of her let alone in an apartment alone. Though there is the lingering threat of death should something happen the place was nice. It consisted of a master bedroom, a slightly smaller guest room, two bathrooms one attached to the master bedroom and one in the hallway down stairs. The master bedroom has a king size bed a walk in closet an armoire and dresser set and a desk by the window. The rest is pretty much the same as you would find in hotel except with an actual kitchen and living room.
"Yeah Sung-Ah, I'm fine, just a headache and adjusting to the light." I said reassuringly. This had a visible effect of calming her semi-panicking form.
She smiled, happy that I was alright and then sat up leaving the blankets to drop exposing her bra-clad breasts to me. Hwan Sung-Ah is a young, slim, pretty girl with long brown hair and purple eyes, and c-cup breasts. (Image on profile breasts are bigger here)
I blushed a little bit but hid it quickly before I got up and went to the closet to get my school uniform Thinking about going to high school with Sung-Ah and meeting Jee-Han and Sun-Ill. it's odd that Jee-Han has only had his first encounter with the supernatural. 'I guess my being here changed the timeline.'
(Time skip-at school)
"Okay class today we have two new students!" the teacher announced to the class. Immediately there was a cacophony of voices shouting things like.
"Is it a boy?!"
"Is he cute?!"
"Is it a girl?!"
"I'll be her friend!"
"I'll be her boyfriend!"
The shouts continued until the door opened and in walked sung-ah and hunter. "This is Hwan Sung-Ah!" she shouted making the boys even rowdier until she continued, "and her f-fiancée Shen-Long hunter!" she finished, making the room silent immediately. It was so quiet that you could he a pin drop.
There was a unanimous "WHAT!" from all the students. The guys began to cry anime tears at being unable to get a girlfriend and the girls immediately had clouds raining over their heads at being unable to get a boyfriend, all except Han Jee-Han and shin sun-ill who widened their eyes and dropped their jaws. Jee-Han because of her last name and sun-ill because they were engaged to each other.
(Time skip after school)
After we had left school and got to our apartment I decided to go train my ability and create some new techniques. So now we find our misplaced hero on his way to the park when he found a camping survival shop.
Looking around I saw many useful things but realized I technically didn't have money so I with a quick whisper of, [command code] a blue box with a typing screen underneath appeared.
I said, "add more moneyx100" and watched as I went from ₩ 0 to ₩ 2,000,000 won. Smirking I went over to the bowie knives and picked one. The knife was comprised of a Leather grip, straight black blade with a curved serrated back, and a small circular guard.
"Perfect." I smirked, and then frowned when I realized that I would need something bigger as well so I went and got an axe. The clerk seeing this came over to me.
"Hey kid you eighteen otherwise you can't buy those" he said to me rather skeptically. I just smirked in response.
"Of course not, why else would I be picking these up to buy. Idiot of course I'm eighteen" I said sarcastically. This Make the guy rather angry much to my amusement.
"Oh really. Then show me your ID if you old enough or do you not have one." He said smirking smugly. I just rolled my eyes and took out my ID and the money to pay for my items. When his jaw dropped I couldn't keep back the laughter so I just walked away saying "pleasure doing business, jackass" over my shoulder as I walked to the park with my stuff in hand.
Arriving at the park I found a secluded spot and began by trying to create an illusion barrier so I could do this with no risk.
"So how did they do this before?" raising my hand up I pushed some Mana out my hand only for a blue mist to flow out.
A skill has been created through a special act
A skill to detect the world around you using Mana, [Mana mist] has been created.
I lowered my hand and tapped the button the screen. Now let's see what this is.
[Mana mist] (Passive & active) lvl 1: exp: 0.0%
Diffuses Mana into the immediate area, allowing caster to sense their surroundings
Passive range: 5m
Active range: 25m
I raised an eyebrow at that since it's not what I intended, but hey? Don't look a gift horse in the mouth. Raising my hand to try again I tried a different method, this time I gathered Mana and when I raised my hand two more screens popped up. Checking the first screen it was a new skill.
[Mana punch](Active & passive&) lvl1: exp: 0.0%
Gives a bonus to all unarmed attacks using the hands.
+50% increase in attack damage
+15% increase in attack speed
+10% increase to STR
Now that one made me blink it was really useful and surprising that was what I made with that. Shaking it off I checked the other box to find that it was an alert.
Congratulations! Your level has increased by 1.
'Yes! I can level up by creating and increasing the level of my skills!' I thought, fist pumping in triumph. "Status"
The Hacksaur: Hunter Shen-Long
Level 6: EXP: 550/6,000
HP: 300/300
MP: 150/150
STR: 19.8(18+10%)
VIT: 12
DEX: 16
INT: 21
WIS: 12
LUK: 11
Points: 10
(Gets twice as many points a level)
Money:₩1,955,000
(Conversion will be every₩1,000 won is $1 U.S dollar)
Okay so I get 10 points compared to the normal 5 points per level wonder what's up with that? Oh well no use fixing what ain't broken. So since I want to be some kind of spellsword I need STR, VIT, DEX, andINT though I need to put more intoINT for my magic, my VIT for stamina and defense, and DEX for speed and finesse, because you can never go wrong with speed. If you're too fast for your enemy to hit you how are you going to lose?
So I put three in VIT, two in DEX, and the other five in int. next I'll have to make physical skills, wait I'm getting sidetracked first I need to make an illusion barrier or is it instant dungeon for me? Whatever let's get going
The Hacksaur: Hunter Shen-Long
Level 6: EXP: 550/6,000
HP: 300/300
MP: 150/150
STR: 19.8
VIT: 15
DEX: 18
INT: 26
WIS: 12
LUK: 11
Points: 0
Money:₩1,955,000
Okay this time take a deep breath, concentrate, gather energy to make an orb, now make it stretch into a large dome over the area.
[ID Create] (Active) Lvl 1: EXP: 0.0%
Used to create instant dungeons, stronger ones can be made at higher levels.
Now that I have created an illusion barrier I will have to be careful so the abyss doesn't get to me. I know they can track illusion barriers so I need to be discreet about it.
I will also need to come clean to sun-ill and Jee-Han when Jee-Han does. Now to get stronger faster I will need to use cheat codes and commands.
Let's try something new. [Menu]
"Oh? Well that's interesting it does have a menu function." Now let's see here, there is status,skills,options, and aha! Cheats. So I tap cheats and a keypad appears. Let's see why I don't try something about magic. But, I don't know how this works. Okay, so check the guidebook aha! Uses quotes, and names to activate bonus items, abilities, and cheats.
"I cast a spell on you!" I said in a fancy accent, surprisingly it worked and a window appeared with different pictures of a gauntlet and each has a name. Okay they are, spell gauntlets! Wow okay choose carefully, there is blades, fireball, shock, force push, ice storm, and vortex. "Wait these are from fable, the hell?!" I shouted in surprise. "Okay, I choose blades."
In a flash of light the gauntlets appeared on my hands.
[Magic blades] (Active) Lvl 1: EXP: 0.0%
Blades conjures magical swords which seek out and impale enemies on caster command. Can be charged up to four levels starts at 0. Can be weaved with other spells. AOE & aimed attack
AOE halves damage
Level 0: instant summons three blades- 115% dmg
Level 1: after 10 seconds summons four blades-205% dmg
Level 2: after 20 seconds summons five blades-388% dmg
Level 3: after 40 seconds summons six blades-872% dmg
Level 4: 1 min 20 seconds summons seven blades-1626% dmg
HO-LY SHIT! This is so fucking ridiculous. Damn that's strong I have to train this! [Command code] "skill XP rate times 2! XP rate times 2!"
[Command activated.]
Yosh! This is gonna be so awesome! Wooo-hoo, I'm so happy no one is here to see me jumping around like a fool. There was one problem with that someone broke me from my celebration. Wanna know how? Well it went like this.
"Unts, unts, unts yeah baby! This, is, so, bruuce! I can get free epic level items wooyeah! Boomshika, Boomshika, Bownch. I love being a Hacksaur." I said as I wiped the tear of joy from my eye. I froze as I heard a voice say from behind me
"If you're quite done, I need to have a word with you… hunter."
PING!
a skill has been created through a special act.
AN: dun, dun, dunnnnn! Well it seems our new hero may be in a bit of a pickle. Well tell me what you think good, bad, horrible tell me! And don't forget to review!
IT'S all in a day's work for your neighborhood Negro. Blackman awaaaaaay!