Fanfic Title + H.O.P.E. Rewritten
Written By Termony
Disclaimer: I do NOT own any part of Gundam SEED or Gundam SEED Destiny.
Chapter 01 + Her return from Camp
A girl who was dressed in a green overall was walking into the garden of a house. The overall had the top stuck to the bottom. It was like she was wearing a jacket that was connected to her pants. The overall had an interesting pattern. It was actually green and white.
She was actually thinking about something.
The summer had just ended. She was really feeling happy. It was as if she suddenly became carefree of everything. Of course, it was not everything. She was, however, just happy.
As she walked along the path in the front yard that she called garden sometimes, she felt that a lot of the things were different. The flowers she loved were blooming, the sunflowers.
She looked at one of them. It was… just as tall as she was. It was weird. Maybe this one was special. She did not know what to think, actually.
Afterwards, she decided to think more about something else.
Mum is at work. I should stay outside for a moment, she thought.
Maybe, to her, the outside was the best, so she could stay chilled.
This is the city of H.O.P.E., where hope lies, like everyone else here, I thought so too, but there is still uncertainty. Because… that was the most we could do. Can we… do more…?
She was looking up to the sky where the sun was. She was tilting her head like that tall sunflower. She was… finding the sun in her own way. It was as if she was a sunflower.
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The people in the house was burning in ambition.
"Why isn't she coming inside. We saw her is she going to make us mad? The waiting is killing me. I kept on thinking 'she's outside she's coming in but she isn't'!" Said Yolant. "Why isn't she coming in!? I see her from the windows!"
"Phone her! Someone phone her!" Vino said. "Tell her to put stuff into her house and come to my place!"
"You phone her!" Catherine said. "You phone her!"
"Okay okay," replied Vino.
-/-
Luna's cell phone rang.
"Hello?"
(GET HER INTO THE HOUSE!) yelled Yolant.
(I KNOW I KNOW! …oh wait, the cell phone is on…) Vino said.
They hung up.
"…"
Luna was unhappy.
She opened the door to her house. Slowly, she was looking everywhere, thinking that they might be hiding.
When she walked into the living room and opened the light. Her friends jumped up and said, "SURPRISE!"
She was slightly startled, since she knew this would happen. They always did this when someone went somewhere extra far away and for extra longer time. For her, it was not that long nor that far away. However, it was because of something else that this skipped her mind.
"Erm…" Luna said. "Thanks…"
She said. "I'll… go to my room because I'm tired, okay? You guys can have the cakes like usual."
Catherine smiled. "Sure, I really liked the one I got last year!"
They waved goodbye.
Luna was going to get her stuff from the gate and Rey followed.
"Rey?" Luna looked at him. "Thanks."
He was helping her lifting the stuff upstairs, to where her bed room was, and where all bed rooms were.
Suddenly, someone dropped a dish.
She yelled. "YOU'RE PAYING FOR IT!"
Then she added. "AND CLEAN UP!"
Yolant yelled. "YOU KNOW WE ALWAYS DO."
Rey had a light smile.
They continued walking.
When they got to the bed room, she said thanks to him again.
"Rey, thanks!"
He nodded, and asked. "Have you made friends?"
"Yeah, but… I think my friendship circle gets weirder and weirder. To be honest, it was really exciting getting to know these people."
He was amused. "I thought I wasn't that weird."
"Well…" She said. "Well… Well… it's getting weirder, so you aren't there, at least not yet."
He walked away.
She was really grateful that he carried the load. She was tired and tired.
"You're a gentleman!" Luna said behind him, and he heard it. "You don't find these that much nowadays!"
He made a hand sign to let her know that he got the message.
Then, she walked into her bed room.
She put down her stuff, and went to the shower upstairs. Afterwards, she put her suitcase aside, and she thought maybe she should check her online social network account before she slept. Then she saw the journal. She opened it. It was from Rey. It had a grey surface and inside the pages felt refined.
She smiled.
Thank-you.
She decided to get some water from downstairs and heard Yolant's voice hitting rooftop.
She screamed. "STOP WRECKING MY HOUSE!"
After she got upstairs again, she slept for a while, for about an hour. She was feeling quite sleepy but she knew she was not sleepy anymore. She got up. She thought about what happened in the summer and the friends they had made.
She decided to write in the journal.
To her, this was something she wanted to remember, so she could treasure this happiness within her.
End of Chapter One
A/N:
I like the story line of H.O.P.E., but… not how I wrote it. I don't like wordiness and long descriptions. Anyway, I just didn't like how I wrote it. Because of that, I'm rewriting it again. :)
Most chapters would be around 800-1,000ish words, but some would be just about 500 words. The story would be about 20 chapters long, and so it's a big project for me, so I write some 500 words chapters.
Cheers!