Ariana's Revenge: A Private Remake SPOILERS

by lexi88774

Ariana is in a blissful relationship with Thomas. Then Reed comes along and his affections turn to her. Heartbroken, Ariana desperately tries to win him back. When Thomas practically forces her to silence him forever, Ariana has to cover her tracks. When Reed finds out, she has to go too. This is Ariana's story of a perfect relationship gone bad.

1. Prologue

I'm only eleven and this is my first story , so take that into account when reviewing. I'm not asking you to be nice, I'm asking you to give honest reviews and constructive criticism.

This story is Ariana's version of Private. It basically starts where Last Christmas ended. It might be a little hard to understand if you haven't read Private. If you haven't read it, don't read this. There are spoilers (duh).

Prologue

"Thomas! You gave her your lucky charm! Our lucky charm!" I said, outraged. Thomas turned away from my bedroom window in Billings, looked at me, and sighed. "Ariana…drop it. Please. It's getting a little old, don't you think? I have half a million of those subway tokens. I give them to everyone I like." Even though the comment should have enraged me, I felt a small spark of pride and happiness. He likes me! He likes me! The words played over and over in my head. "Fine.." I said wearily. "She is just a friend…right? We are still….you know….us?" "She's just a friend, Ari. I'm playing with her. You are still the special one." replied Thomas. But as I let my door slam shut behind me, I could have sworn I'd heard him say 'for now'