Hi! This is my first story and I'm new to this, I would say no negative comments, but I am willing to take criticism to improve my writing abilities, as long as it isn't anything like "oh my god you suck at writing! Go at kill yourself and burn the story". Anyway, enjoy!
Disclaimer: I don't own anything. I wish I did though
I fell backward through the veil. It felt as though I had received a punch in the gut. "What the hell is this?" there were voices all around me and hands pulling me backwards. Then suddenly, it all went black. No pun intended.
" I wondered how he died?"
"wow he looks different"
"are you sure its him?"
"positive"
I woke up with those voices swimming through my head. I groaned and opened my eyes. They were unfocused at first, but my eyesight gradually came. But nothing could prepare me for the shock that came.
"Lily? James?"
James grinned
"That's me!"
I grinned
"You haven't changed a bit. Same old Prongsie"
James threw his head back and laughed before helping me up. Lily had a sort of worry in her eyes that was absent when she was alive.
"How's Harry? How's my son?"
"He's turned out great, he looks just like you James, except the eyes. He has your eyes Lily."
James hugged Lily,
"Awwwwww"
James sent me a death glare, then his expression softened
"I've really missed you in the afterlife, Padfoot,"
I nodded
"I've missed you too, Prongsie"
James laughed and threw his arm around my sholder
"while I show you around, how about you tell me about life down on earth, agreed?"
I nodded
"agreed"
I know it sucks, but I wrote this in a rush, but please click that button below this and give me feedback, it would be much appreciated.
-canaca22