Disclaimer: I don't own the Bible. This was an assignment for our English class. We had to write a free verse poem.

Esther: Valor in Peril

Her heart thudded in her chest as her feet moved toward her destiny.

Her eyes lifted slowly to meet the gaze of the king, her husband, the man she loved.

The man who might soon end her life.

He watched her, questioning, wondering-

Why was she taking this risk?

The guard moved restlessly, hand clenching his sword

He waited...the room waited...the world waited.

The king gazed at his wife

His eyes softened, thinking...remembering

-Her gentle laughter, her soft voice

Her kindness and tender heart-

He saw her emotions, swirling behind her eyes

Fear, hope... and love, even now, there was love

He sighed softly, the decision made

The scepter lowered, sparing her life

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