Thanks everyone for reviewing my story, well if you count 4 people as everyone. Anyway, I've decided to put off Where's Mario for a while because it really needs to be edited (the plot), so the next chapter might take a while. Anyway, here's my first Zelda fanfic, so enjoy! Also, I don't own TLoZ, because if I did, would I really be writing this fanfic?
The sun set quietly on Hyrule. It was quiet in the quiant little village, as it rested peacefully among Farore's trees as Din's eye set slowly over them. As her eye retreated to it's resting place, darkness grew across the vast sky, making the air in the village very dim. all seemed at rest, that is, until two people had entered the Lost Woods.
The children gardened in clothes slowly crept through the night as the sky darkened, plotting the revenge they had worked on. As they passed the many passages, they reached an empty lot, filled with moss and stones. The two let out a small laugh, very sinister it was. One took out a log of wood, stolen from the Woods, as the other took two stones from the ground. The first walked up to a lonely tree, awaiting the second to do his part. He did, rubbing the stones until a spark appeared. It quickled went out though, but this was going greatly for the two juviniles.
The second walked up to the first, who had positioned the log carefully on the ground. He put the stones about 1 inch above the dried material and fastly scraped the stones against one another. Again, a spark appeared, but this time, it didn't go out. No, instead the flicker of bright flame took to the log, setting ablaze a small fire. Then suddenly, a bigger fire was among them. The two quickly took the piece of burning wood to the small tree, careful not to burn themselves.
Small flames blew up from the log, setting the tree's fresh leaves on fire. Soon, the whole organic specimen was ablaze, making a bright light and poofs of smoke coming from it. Then, the fire had reached another tree above it, then another, and another. The fire among the two children was so strong of temperature, they ran back a tad far, walking the plan they had kept only to themselves and their friends unfold.
Soon, the whole Woods were ablaze, just as the children had planned. It burned, making the fire just a bit brighter then Din's eye. As the beauty of the Kokori was being burnt, the children of it's village slept calmly, all except for one. That one was none other then Saria of the Kokori, a brave and noble little girl who was popular among the village and it's grand deity. She tossed and turned on her wooden bed, which tonight was not as comfortable as it usually was. She was having a nightmare, of her little village being burnt to the ground, which was the most terrifying thing a Kokori child could possibly think of. The only thing that would calm her is waking up.
That is what she did. She rose from her bed, rubbing her eyes, tired and worn out from the horrible dream. As she arose, she noticed a faint smell, one she had never smelled before. It was strong, tart to the nose. Her nose crinkled as she covered it, wanting to have it rid. She wanted to get to the bottom of it, so she walked out of her hut, still tired, but she could sleep later. She wouldn't.
So how was it? This suddenly came to me when I was replaying OoT with a friend, and I thought it was good enough to put out there for you to read. Reviews are always welcome, mainly because I love critism, both negative and positive. Also, can you guess who started the fire?
~Linkio
