Please tell me if this is rubbish cause this is my first story
Please tell me if this is rubbish cause this is my first story.
Chapter 1
From Bella's pov
There was one thing that I was sure of and that was that me and Edward being together was wrong. I was a werewolf and he was a vampire. Ur species had been at war for years and there we were together. If anyone found out about us we would be in serious trouble!
Meeting Edward in that field was the biggest mistake of my life. There he was surrounded by his fellow vampires and there was me their arch enemy. I was scared, I was more than scare I was petrified.
"How could you betray me like this".
"I had no choice Bella".
What was I to do now? I was surrounded by a field of vampires who wanted to suck the blood out of me. I only had one choice and that was to run. That was another mistake. I was running threw the forest with a heard of vampires on my back ducking and dodging all he branches that were in front of me. I could just about she my big red truck when I tripped and fell flat on my face.
The next thing I new I was in his arms and flying threw the air. I had no Idea what he was doing but I didn't care he was carrying me in his arms. The feel of his cold skin on my hot skin was very weird!
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That's it. I think it is crap but yanno. If you have any ideas wat I could do next please let me know!!