I redid it I redid it!!!

I sat up in the crows nest, shuddering. There was a horrible fight going on down there with the bloody pirates, from the bloody rose. Here I was, a high lady from England, hiding from pirates.

I wasn't hiding, I just hated killing, infact these pirates deserved a good beating from killing my family.

I had grown up on this ship, which explained my men's attire, and callused hands. When the pirates got cocky, snickering while fighting, and killing, i stood up and whistled, distracting the pirates.

I swung down on a rope knocking two of them into the water. My rope was cut by a dagger, which I grabbed. I summersalted onto the deck and threw the dagger at the ships rope attaching it to the anchor which split. The boat started moving away, to my amusement.

A sworn rang out behind me, and I ducked just in time. I pulled my dagger out and fought the man. After two sword clashes I kicked him in the chest sending him over bored.

I noticed my dad, I and a few other men were the only ones alive. My heart kicked into overdrive, and I fought my heardest.

I sent man after man overbored, I really disliked killing. I reached the captain and a blonde man, the blonde took me on. Our swords clashed, and we drew back.

His sword went for my stomach and I spun out of the way, jumping on a crate and kicking his face making him stumble.

We fought like that for another few minutes, all eyes on me and blondie. He went for my stomach again, and I spun, but nicked the sword out of his hand. I smiled briefly, until I realized I was the last one left. I glanced around and I saw a shape in the distance. Either a boat or an island, I needed to get there.

"well, as much as I would love to stay and chat," I said lazily, ignoring there startled looks, when they realize I was a girl, "I really must go!" I said jumping up, and grabbing a rope. The rope swung, with me on it and I launched my self overboard, and swam towards the looming shape ignoring the boat.

!!!poor bella!!!

The swim was long and hard, but very gratifying when I crawled onto the shores of the island. It was a small island, with some vegetation, and it had a fresh water stream. Pure bliss. The water tasted amazing, and I washed the salt out of my hair.

I wandered farther into the vegetation, and found a banana tree. I ate thee bananas and hit the peels. I found a tree to lay down by and thought of ways to be found by good ships. A huge fire was top of my list.

I drifted in and out of sleep for a few minutes until I herd shouts.

"find the girl. And when you do bring her to me." A man shouted. I scampered up the nerest tree, it was much easier then the pole to the crows nest.i got to the highest thickest leaved branches and sat down pulling myself into a ball.

I herd men exploring the area around me, and I stifled a whimper. The tree started shaking and slowly a huge man came into view. I did the only thing that came into me mind. I screamed.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!"

!!!!!to short of chapter, so here is ed's pov!!!!!!!!!!!!

She just jumped off the boat?!? I herd voices of surprise, and she had the advantage. We had to finish up business here, which took another hour thanks to Emmett.

Jasper stood there and sulked, he had lost to a human girl, the crew thought it was hilarious.

Emmett helped sink the ship. He teased jazz, whi threw him threw the boat by his neck. Then I started a fire, and we went to the island,

We landed and I ordered my men to find her. I herd her heartbeat pick up then, "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" stupid Emmett.

Its not much longer persay…. But I like it. More details, and less flying through half of the story!