Due to the fact this story is currently being worked on, reviews my not fit the chapters Most every chapter has been beta-ed at the time of it's publishing, but because I'm rewriting and there maybe some mistakes. If you think I should leave this story as is or put it back to how it was, please review or pm me.
Disclaimer: I do not own Narnia, Peter, Edmund, Orieus or anything that's C.S. Lewis's or from the movie. This story is all my idea.
Inspired by Lickitysplit's story "Prince Cirdon" and elecktrum's "Eye of the Beholder."
Don't read this story if you don't like injury to the Pevensie kids.
I changed the time of Rabadash's attack on Anvard to the 6th years of their reign instead of the fourteenth or fifteenth. During the Golden Age, Peter is 24, Susan is 23 and has black hair, Edmund is 19 and has dark hair like Susan and Lucy is 18 and has brown hair. After Rabadash returned to Calormen, his father was so humiliated that he named Rabadash's 2nd brother Rufus, Crown Prince. Rufus is desperate for approval and Power. He is just as cruel as Rabadash but with a greater love for his father than Rabadash has.
History: Calormen invaded The Lone Islands, Terebintha, and Galma. Calormen promised The Lone Islands, Terebintha, and Galma that they could keep their rulers, laws and traditions, if they helped Calormen, and that they (the Lone Islands, Terebintha, and Galma) were to keep up pretenses that everything was fine. Terebintha and Galma refused and their country was taken over by Calormen, which left the gate, open for Calormen to sail in and take Cair Paravel without anyone knowing until it was to late.
Prolog: Susan's P.O.V.(point of view) This tale begins 4 years after my ordeal with Rabadash and is the tale of how Rabadash took his revenge. I never thought Rabadash would trouble me any more, given his condition. I never knew how one selfish act could cause so many problems and hurts long after its time. We never knew Narnia was under threat as Terebinthia and Galma never had a chance to send a warning. Sadly my little brother and Sister were the first to know.