Hello everyone after the disaster that was my first attempt at a story I have decided that I'll try again. I don't own Naruto, or Dungeons and Dragons. They are property of Masashi Kishimoto, and Wizards of the Coast respectfully. The Characters Draugel and Anumir are mine however.
A shadow stood over the valley of the end looking at the spiky haired blonde boy and a black haired boy whose hair looked like a duck's but. "Well he did do well for trying to capture," said the shadow with a masculine voice that commanded respect, before he started repelling down the waterfall's cliff-side. A man with silvery hair picked up the black haired boy and ran back into the forest after taking something. "Well let's get you back home kid." said the man as he walked over and picked up the blonde boy with a huge hole in his right chest area before putting the boy on a makeshift cot and dragging it behind him, making sure the young-man was ok. "Anumir if you're watching please let me help this one..."
(In Konoha two hours later {let's face it Naruto ninja can run fast and Kakashi is one of the fastest})
A group of young ladies where waiting for their hero to come back. Now to most the young girls standing there, their hero was the year's rookie of the year the last Uchiha. Now let me just say that this... young man is given whatever he wanted by the civilian council. Everyone saw the bushes moving near the main gate.
The silvery haired man stepped into view carrying the Uchiha with minimal wounds and unconscious. Now most of the young ladies that where still waiting at the gate started cheering and swarming the man with questions most of which were 'is my Sasuke-kun okay?' Now the ONLY girl standing there not asking that asked with pain filled eyes and hand over her heart "where is N-Naruto-kun?" Now this one young lady was the heiress to one of the most powerful clans in Konoha, the Hyuuga clan, she has short blue hair with two bangs framing her face, now she is not like all of her clan, her given name Hinata. But let's get back to the story but to do that we'll have to go back a little in time.
[Flash back (During the valley of the end fight in Konoha: Kage tower)]
The Kage of Konoha also called the Hokage was looking out her large window looking over the village, as a sake bottle on her desk spontaneously cracked. Sitting across from her was Hinata who had just said "One." as she felt a jolting sensation over her heart looking at a picture of Naruto in her hands. Hinata looked up at the Hokage as tears started to fall from her eyes she felt a stronger painful sensation in her neck. "Two." she was looking at the ground with tears flowing freely her bond with Naruto coming close to snapping as finally in one final and excruciating pain-filled jolt-like sensation she landed unto her hands and knees as her heart felt like it was destroyed but not totally gone like it was still able to be put back together. As she looked up into the Godaime's eye's she fell down in lump saying only "Three."
[End Flashback]
However it was not even two seconds when two med-nins took Sasuke Uchiha to the hospital on a gurney, as the med-nins took Sasuke all the girls who were asking about him, as well as the villagers left. The only ones who where there were Kakashi Hatake, Hinata Hyuga, and Tsunade Senju. Kakashi then walked up to the Hokage and held out the necklace of the first.
"I'm sorry at the speeds and with all the jumping I went through to get the Uchiha back, Hokage-sama he would have died in transit." These were the first words Kakashi spoke since rescuing the Uchiha.
"So you left him there TO DIE" screamed the Hokage as Hinata started to feel cold as tears welled once again in her eyes.
"It was a lapse in judgement Lady Hokage" said the Jounin as he looked down at the young Gennin beside the Hokage.
"See that it doesn't Hatake" said Tsunade with a tone of 'get back out there and wait for Medical Ninjas to arrive.'
"Yes Lady Hokage" said Kakashi as he made his way back to the valley of the end.
(With the shadow man and Naruto)
"Come on kid stay with me just a little bit farther than you can be healed by the best" said the man as we can clearly see his face. The man was dragging a makeshift cot with a young boy on it through the forest; the man had short brown hair held out of his eyes by a blood-stained headband with no village markings and was also wearing a black trench-coat that was missing its left forearm and right arm in place of these two were a wing-bladed bracer on the left forearm, and a full Gauntlet on the right arm, a design of a blood-red moon on his back his black pants and boots just being able to be seen as well as a scabbard. The spiky blonde boy however was dressed in a burnt orange track suit look there were two gaping holes in the jacket and a large gouge in the boy's chest that was leaking blood even through the multiple bandages on the wound his jacket was covering him. "Come on kid stay with me. Stay with me."
This is what Kakashi saw when he was running toward where he left Naruto. Landing far enough behind the man as to not startle him as he was aiding Kakashi's own student. "Stop right there sir." Said Kakashi taking out a kunai just in case this man turns out to be violent. "What business do you have with my student?!"
"Well besides saving his life not bloody munch." Said the man "so you can either help me get him to the closest hospital or just get out of my way." With the man's last statement Kakashi picked up the other end and noticed that the man's right eye was covered by an eye-patch "don't ask me I won't ask you" said the man signalling Kakashi both that he didn't want to talk about it and that they should be moving. They took off at a decent emergency jog because running would jostle their wounded charge too much.
(Two hours later front gates)
Bushes where moving off to the right of the main gate as both the man and Kakashi came out carrying a cot in a stretcher manner when they got to the hospital Kakashi shouted. "We need Medical assistance on the double" shouted Kakashi, after that the man shouted "we need a BLOODY MEDIC NOW!!" the man's yell was enough to get the attention of the attending nurse who looked at who they were carrying. "Please keep your voice down sir you're in a hospital." The man looked at the nurse, after looking at Kakashi. "If you can't heal him for some reason you aren't telling me or cannot tell me I'll just get a room for this young man myself." Said the man as he led Kakashi both of them carrying Naruto to an empty room. "Can you find a medic who will heal him while I keep him alive as that's all I can do?" asked the man as they found an empty room and put Naruto upon the bed from the cot taking his jacket as he started digging through his bag grabbing some sort of medical kit that Kakashi has never seen before. "Sure I'll get a Medical Ninja" "Good get to it and fast I can only keep him stable for so long"
As Kakashi stepped out into the hall he walked straight into Tsunade. "Kakashi you had better have Naruto in there being treated by doctors already."
"Actually Lady Hokage there was this man who was dragging Naruto on a cot through the woods I met up with them one hour into my run back to Naruto, we both have since brought Naruto into this room under the duress of who wouldn't help Naruto. He however has sent me out for a Surgeon class Medic-nin." Said Kakashi looking at her "since you are the best could you go in and help him, that guy says he has enough skill to keep him alive but not enough to save him."
Tsunade nodded before telling Kakashi to go find a team of med-nins not doing anything then walked into the room quickly to see the man's jacket flung up on top of a jacket rack, and the man rubbing some type of salve around Naruto's wound "And you are...?" asked Tsunade.
"Commander Draugel Carakanga, while I do have some skill at healing I do not have the skills for this." Said Draugel looking over his shoulder quickly then getting back to healing "and you are Ma'am?"
"Tsunade Senju the Godaime Hokage, best healer in the ninja world." Said Tsunade "What do we have?"
"Critical wounds, extensive bleeding and what looks like electrical burns around the wound" said Draugel. "I've used 6 applications on this kid which should hold him till you're finished with healing him."
"I can get him healed fully when the team of med-nins get here," said Tsunade "I'll meet with you after Commander."
"No ma'am I'll stay till your team gets here I'll lend whatever aid I can," said Draugel with a tone of finality.
"Very well but you'll only be in my way" said Tsunade as she got to work on fixing Naruto.
It was ten minutes before the team of Med-nins that Kakashi found eight minutes ago.
"Commander you are relieved" said Tsunade before the doctors started take up positions to heal Naruto.
As Draugel stepped out, after grabbing his trench coat, he walked over to the waiting area where he saw Kakashi sitting. As Draugel got closer to Kakashi, Kakashi said "You know Naruto probably would have died today at the Valley or in transit to the hospital."
"Well I'm known for coming in at the last second or undetected." Said Draugel looking at the man while playing with a gold band on his left ring finger.
(Hospital front door half an hour later)
Hinata was walking quickly up the stairs to see if her Naru-kun was in yet. As she got closer to the front desk she saw Kakashi talking with a man in all black. Remembering Tsunade's order to him knew that Naruto had to have been back and in the hospital by the way he was standing there talking. She then walked over to Kakashi.
"K-Kakashi-sensei is Naruto-kun going to be ok?" asked Hinata nervously.
"He should be thanks to this man here I never caught your name..." said Kakashi.
"Commander Draugel Carakanga, it was nothing I wouldn't do anyway." Said Draugel looking at Hinata briefly before a bell rang behind him making it known that Naruto's room was safe to enter. "Well shall we?"
All he got for an answer was a nod from Kakashi and a shy nod from Hinata. As the three of them stepped closer to the door it opened revealing the team of med-nins followed by Tsunade "So how is he doc?" asked Draugel looking at Tsunade.
"Well he's..."
Ok folks I'm going to end it here I'm already starting on my second chapter but I would like some reviews please, oh and please be intelligent about them. I would like to get some feedback from you quick poll. What do you think will happen to Sasuke?
