Hello everyone! So if you haven't noticed the chapter title, I have finally rewritten the first chapter, YAY! I was thinking to myself, "I wonder how many people don't read through my whole story because of this horrible chapter" So I'm finally doing it XD So let's get into it. (I have kept all the bold writing the same, did not change it, I repeat did not change it)

Starting redone version from here on

Hello everyone! This is my first fanfic ever! So I have a feeling it's not going to be very good, but what do I know. I have been wanting to write this for a long time (Sorry if all the characters are OOC but I need to get used to this). Also, I will only be continuing the stories of most people enjoy them.

Anyways, I don't know if it should be an AU because I'm adding two characters that change the whole entire story… So ya. And this story will be following Ruby and my new Characters.

The story of RWBY stays the same until the cliff scene in episode 5, when they meet the new characters! By the way, one of the new characters is completely over powered and awesome, so if you don't like that then I'm really sorry… Well I have talked for long enough.

Oh ya please leave reviews good, bad, I don't care :D

Disclaimer: MY characters are mine RWBY is not... done.

ON WITH THE STORY!

The cliffs

Ruby was happily bouncing beside her sister on their way down to the cliffs edge. "I'm so excited! We're doing are first mission!" She kept repeating. Yang was also smiling, but she wasn't smiling on the inside. She was actually very worried for Ruby's safety. Yang wanted to tell Ruby to be careful, to not do anything rash, but she could never bring herself to say it. If Ruby found out Yang worried about her she would do something stupid to try and prove herself. What Yang didn't realise was Ruby was very nervous, this was her first ever mission, she was afraid she was going to mess up, but like Yang she hid it with her happy bounces.

As they got closer to the cliff the nervousness in Ruby was building to the point where she could hardly contain it. So as an attempt to distract herself, Ruby started to play with her hair and look around. These where very obvious signs that she was nervous and Yang picked up on them in a flash. She felt bad for Ruby, knowing fully that this was her first mission, so she tried to calm her down, "Hey Ruby, after we get back, want to go get ice-cream? I hear there's a great spot nearby" She said. Ruby, who was twirling her hair, looked over at Yang with an exited look, "Really?" She asked. When Yang nodded, Ruby smiled and started to bounce again, ice-cream always cheered her up, but Yang wasn't done, "Plus, that place I just mentioned, I hear they put cookies on top of the ice-cream". Ruby's eyes widened, "We have to go there!" she exclaimed, her bouncing returning to its original height. Watching Ruby bouncing happily pushed the worry out of Yang. Ruby will be fine, I don't even know why I was worrying, she's a great fighter. Now that Yang had reassured herself, she was back to walking happily alongside her sister.

When they finally reached the cliffs edge, the first thing that caught Ruby's eye was a small cabin, practically hanging off the drop. She looked at it and a few questions popped into her head, but her attention was quickly diverted to her sister. "Ozpin is about to explain what we're doing, so instead of looking at that dusty old cabin, pay attention". Ruby smirked. So Yang noticed me looking at that, I wonder if she is asking the same questions as me. Her thoughts quickly drifting back to the cabin. Ruby didn't know why she found it so intriguing, but she really wanted to go inside, although she didn't have much time to think about what was through that door because Ozpin started to talk.

"For years you have trained to become warriors, and today your abilities will be evaluated in the emerald forest." Ozpin said with an extremely serious look on his face. Professor Goodwitch stepped forward, "I'm sure many of you have heard the rumor of the assignment of teams. Well, allow use to put an end to your confusion". With a face just as stern as Ozpins she continued "Each of you will be given teammates" she paused for a moment and the next word out of her mouth made Rube sigh "today". Ozpin stood forward again "these teammates will be with you for the rest of your time here at Beacon, so it is in your best interest to be pared with someone whom you work well with". This made Ruby really nervous, What if she can't find anyone who she works well with, what if she gets pared with the ice queen, this thought made her panic even more but her worries were quickly interrupted by Ozpin "That being said, the first person you make eye contact with after landing will be your partner for the next four years" Those words finally broke Ruby concentration and she yelled out "WHAT!" (Ok so this is where things start to change)

Right at that moment, the door to the cabin opened. As the creaking sound traveled to the group of students, everyone looked over, and Ruby swore she heard someone gasp, she thought the whole thing was way to overdramatic. As everyone continued to look, some guy walked out eating an apple, nothing special. But when he noticed everyone looking at him he froze mid bite, a confused look coming onto his face, "What?" he asked. Then he looked over at Ozpin, "Oh, by the way, it seems a little unfair that it's the first person you make eye contact with, I think it should be the first person you shake hands with or something" he said, taking another bite of his apple. After hearing this Ruby instantly liked the new guy. For someone so young, twenty by the looks of him, he has some guts to talk to Ozpin like that. Ruby thought to herself, looking over at Ozpin, whose face looked a little disappointed. Goodwitch on the other hand had a look of sheer annoyance. Suddenly Ozpin sighed, "Everybody, may I introduce you to a student who graduated two years early this year, Rift Esor. He decided to stay and help around" When Rift took a bow, Ozpin brought his hand to his face. I wonder how he graduated two years early. Ruby asked herself, looking at Rift.

When Ruby looked back at Ozpin, she noticed a small grin spread across his face. What is he planning. But before Ruby could continue her thought, Ozpin spoke up. "Everybody, if I may make an announcement, Rift here" He said pointing at Rift, "Will be your supervisor for this mission" Everyone who had gone to greet Rift looked at him, he had a look of disapproval on his face, "Wow wow wow, now hold on a second, I don't want to go out there to watch a bunch of kids" He said. Ozpin smiled. "I have a lot of things to do" Rift added. Ozpin raised an eyebrow, "Oh? And what may those things be?" He asked. Rift took a thoughtful position, but nothing seemed to pop into his head, "You know, stuff" He said, sounding a little defeated. "It's settled then, Rift will be the supervisor" Ozpin announced.

After a few minutes of Rift arguing with Ozpin, he just sort of gave up and walked into the crowed of students that had gathered to talk. Ozpin, who had a very large smile on his face, made an announcement, "Good, now that that's settled, would all of you come stand on these stone platforms" He said, gesturing to smallish square objects on the ground. Ruby heard a sigh from Rift, "Ugh, not these things" He said under his breath. Ruby had gotten distracted by all the things going on that she had let her guard down, which let Yang sneak up on her. When she was right behind Ruby she whispered, "Hey Rubs" Right into Ruby's ear, causing Ruby to yelp and jump forward. When Ruby landed Yang happily walked over to her, "You exited?" She asked. Ruby, pushing down her hair that had raised like a cats, and responded, "Oh ya, I can't wait! This is going to be so fun!" After Ruby had finished with her hair Ozpin spoke up, "Ok everybody, would you please get into your ready positions" He said back to his calm self, but every time his eyes landed on Rift, he smirked. Ruby had gotten a little confused, "Ready positions?" She asked no one in particular, but she got a response anyways, "Just get ready to jump" came Rift's voice. When Ruby looked over at him, he smiled.

"Is everyone ready?" Ozpin asked, completely ignoring all the questions coming from Jaune. "Ok" Goddwitch spoke up, "Three, Two, One" She said. When she reached one Ruby felt herself get launched into the air, she was now flying towards the Emerald forest. She suppressed a yell when someone tapped on her shoulder, as she turned around she saw Rift flying above her. "Don't worry, flying is the fun part, it's landing that sucks" He yelled over the wind. When he finished talking, he angled himself toward the ground and started to fall faster.

Ok so that was my first chapter ever! Really happy with how it came out! And yes I know I will explain what Rift looks like in the next chapter XD. Next chapter will follow Rift and a bit of Ruby.

Sorry for it being so short but I wanted to make the whole emerald forest thing the next chapter. I think it will be a lot longer. Any way I really hope you liked it because I want to continue writing!

Also I'm uploading part 2 no matter what but after that it's all up to you guys. Oh and Btw I have no idea when the next chapter will be here because I have school and stuff so… sorry if it takes a long time.

Ok Bye, see you whenever I upload the next chapter :D

End of Redone Chapter

So, that was the redone version of my chapter. I think it is much improved, but it is all up to you guys. Anyways, I'll see you in the next chapter, and I hope you have a great day.