Chapter [1]
I wanna just to say than "this" still mean when they are talking and 'this' will mean when they thinking something.
And here the "say" still is in power.
And I will change the "scream|screamed" with "yell|yelled" (not really scream|screamed still will be here but more rarely)
[Snowfire POV]
I wake up and I go to the river to catch some fish for breakfast 'well here are and other animals on my island but I don't want to kill them at once, I just regulate their population.' and I started to walk to the river, when I went I begin to catching fish, after few minutes I catch enough fishes and I eat them and I started to walking to the beach.
When I went I lay on the sand and I started to sunbathing, after a hour there come a storm and started to raining 'well, I will cant to sunbathing today.' and I returned back to my cave while the storm pass.
[Toothless POV]
I and Hiccup fly from around a hour, and he say "hey buddy, lets we test the new flight suit." I shook my head and he say "alright buddy." and he set up the tail on automatic mode and he jumped from my back, after few minutes from no where come a storm and he say "buddy, we have to land now because my suit are your tail are like magnets for the thunders!" I catch him and we enter in the storm and he say "watch out buddy." and one thunder pass on a centimeters from us, and he say "this was close call, watch out we are dead if it hit us." and one thunder hit my tail and in broke on small pieces and we started to falling and he say "oh Thor, why just today." and we hit the water surface, I lay on the water surface and I he lay on my belly, and he say "thanks buddy." and he remove the suit, 'I have bad feeling about this how it will end.' he and he say "I'll repair your tail when we found a land and he grab his monocular and he started to look for a land, and he say "I don't see any islands, we are trapped here." and one big wave hit us.
I wake up and I say "Hiccup!" and I noticed that I'm in cave and the saddle is not on me, and from the shadows someone say "who are you and from where you coming?" by the voice I understand that its a female and I say "have you seen my friend?" and she say "I asked you something." and I say "its hard for explaining, have you seen my friend?" and she say "no, you come alone." 'this is not good, if he is on the island I need to found him before she do it.' and I say "where is my saddle?" and she say "the thing what was on your back?, I will tell you only if you answer on my question." and I say "I comes from a island far away from here." and she say "good, but I too asked and who are you?" and I say "Toothless." and she say "alright, cool name, I'm Snowfire and about your saddle, wait here." and she leave from the cave, after few minutes she returned and she drop in on the ground and she say "there is it, and why you need it, I mean now you are free the human who captured you probably died or is far away." and I say "yeah sure, I hope so." 'I hope that he is still alive and he is on this island too.' and she say "but something don't match, you don't left tailfin, so how you are flying?" and I say "there are things what you wont understand." and she say "and what I wont understand, you think that I'm dumb?" I rolled my eyes and I say "I don't think that you are dumb, just, just its hard for explaining and you wont understand me." and she say "oh, okay, are you hungry, you was asleep two days?" and I say "what, two days?" 'I need to found Hiccup!' and I say "no, thanks." and I hear someone far away to yell "Toothless!" 'its Hiccup!' and I leave from the cave and she say "hey where are you going?" and I say "nowhere." and she say "it don't seems as nowhere." and I say "I just have to found my friend, right?" and she say "you need to take rest, tell me how he look and I will check on my island." and I say "I cant to tell you." and she say "but why, you don't want my help?" and I say "yes I want it but... alright we will search tomorrow." and she say "alright." 'to be honestly I don't want to search for him with her because she don't seems to like the humans.' and I say "I will go to look the island." and she say "alright, I will come with you." and I say "stay here if you want." and she say "rarely comes guests on my island so I like to spend the time with them." and I say "alright, lets we start from the forest." and she say "alright." and we leave from the cave and we started to walking.
After few minutes I found traces from Hiccup's metal leg I and she say "its getting dark, lets we go back in the cave." and I say "alright.", and we returned in the cave, and she say "good night." and she lay on the ground and she fall asleep but I cant to fall asleep without him, I lay on the ground and I started to watch the sky pointless 'I hope that I will found him.' and after few minutes I fall asleep.
I hope everyone enjoyed in this chapter please review and tell me what you think about it, the next chapter come as soon as possible. :)