Hey everyone!
So, this my first story ever published, this story takes place from "A Goofy Movie". It's my favorite movie, eversince I was a kid! So, I've decided to revisit my childhood, and start writing a story about it! Of course, adding an oc into it.
Anyways, I hope you guys like it!
- Max's POV -
I was in a wheat field, so windy and relaxing. And I can smell the fresh air, and then, I heard someone, calling my name. A familiar voice too, and so I tried to look for it where it was. It keep calling my name repeatedly, I ran for it, and then I saw a girl. A girl sitting on a top a of log, it was Roxanne! The girl I love, the love of my life, and the girl of my dreams, "Roxanne?" I said, as she saw me, she blew the dandelion towards me. And I smelled it, it was... wonderful! She jumped towards me and I caught her, but we still fell to the ground, laughing together. And, we stopped, we were looking and staring at each other, and smiling. As we try to kiss, she did the first move, as she goes towards me with a kiss but then... she gasped.
"What's wrong?" I asked, and then I looked down and saw my teeth are huge! The sky turned dark, and the field turned into a horrifying trees! I was frightened of my teeth, not only that, my ears are starting to get long, my hands are getting big! As I was being horrified, Roxanne backed away and was terrified of what am I becoming to, I screamed in terror. My feet are getting huge, my height! As got taller, my mouth got long, my nose a got little big, and my head got a bump! Roxanne screamed in terror about my appearance, and my voice changed, and I tried to clear my throat, but I laughed in a goofy way "Ah-yuck!" I laughed.
I woke up panicking, and gasping for air, I touched my head, face, and teeth, if anything was real, fortunately it's not. I sighed in relief, then my phone rang. I answered it, but it was bouncing off my hand and fell to the floor, and I picked it up anyway.
"Hello-" dang my voice didn't sound right, I tried again and I cleared it "Hello?"
"Max! Where the heck are you man?!"
"PJ?"
"You should've been here an hour ago!"
"What? What are you-? Hold on-" I was confused when he said that, I looked to my alarm clock, it read 4:02am. Still confused I smacked my clock, then my clock turned to 7:50am!
"Oh no" I said, I got quickly out of my bed, got my pants on the chair.
"Look, maybe we should just call the whole thing off?" PJ suggested,
"No way, Man! It's now or never-" I was trying to wear my pants, I got myself tangled by the phone line
"W-whoa!" I yelled
"You better get the move on, I'll meet you on my locker!" PJ requested, since he's been waiting for me all this time, I think.
I got myself up, and yet my pants fell. And, my dad suddenly barged into my room, with a vacuum cleaner, while he's wearing a towel.
"Ah-yuck! Mornin' son!" he said, man I hate that laugh.
"Dad!" I shouted in annoyance and embarrassment.
"Whoops! I forgot." he said, then he left my room, closed my door... and came back in to my room, again.
"Ah-yuck! Mornin' son! Came to see if you have any... dirty... clothes?" as he said that, he scanned my room.
"Ah! Well, here there they are, help yourself! I said, getting my shirt.
"Max, I thought we talked about this?" he said, with a disappointing look,
"Yeah- look, I'm sorry, dad! I'll take care of it later-" then I bumped onto someone, we both fell to the floor.
"H-hey! That hurt!" that person shouted, I wore my shirt , so I can see who I bumped onto.
It was my little 10 year old brother, Andy.
- Andy's POV -
Ugh... I think I hit my head when I fell. It hurts!
"Ugh! Andy! Next time, watch were you're going!" really? He bumped into me, and I got hurt, and I'm the one to blame? Wow, what a nice brother I have.
'What's the big rush?" dad asked, as I got myself up and getting what I'm about to get! If Max didn't bumped into me.
"I'm running late!" he replied
"Oh! I can drive you on my way to work." dad suggested, well he is late for something. What's with him anyway?
"Ah-no no! No thanks! Uh I.. uh.. need the exercise!" Max replied, as he exits the room. Oh, please, Max. I know that you're lying, I smirked a little, Max noticed me and just rolled his eyes instead.
"Oh come one, Max!" dad pleaded, since he really wants to drive Max to school.
When my dad said that, he sucked up the Powerline cutout with his vacuum cleaner, and of course my brother saw it,
"Dad!" Max screamed, and panicked
Max rushed towards dad, to try and get the cutout out of the vacuum cleaner from sucking it.
Both dad and Max tried to get the cutout out, especially Max, he was really freaking out. As I saw them doing that, I sighed before I walked closer to them and turn the vacuum cleaner off. Seriously, instead of pulling it, why not turn it off? Is it that hard?
"Oh dad, you ruined it!" Max said with a angry and yet sad reaction, and put it back in its spot. I kinda feel sad about too, to be honest, Powerline is my idol too.
"Sorry 'bout that... who was he anyway?" wait what? He doesn't know- forget it! I rolled my eyes and saying "Wow.". Wouldn't expect more.
"It's only Powerline, dad, the biggest rockstar in the planet." Max explained,
"Oh, not bigger than Xavier Cugat the Mambo King!" what? Who the heck is Xavier Cujat? Cudat? Cupa- whatever!
"Everbody mambo!" dad exclaimed, while he's shaking his hips. Me and Max sighed with a unbelievable look, and rolled our eyes. And then, looked to each other, sudden realization, we looked away quickly. We don't see each other eye to eye... not like before. Oh hey, I just said Eye to eye, get it? By Powerline? No? I thought so, forget it!
Suddenly, dad grabbed Max's hand, and mine, and , we started dancing, I don't even know what kind of dance we're doing, while we're doing that, dad's chanting "Mambo, Mambo, Mambo!", really embarrassing.
"Dad! Come one, I don't have time for this!" Max yelled,
"What if the neighbor sees us?!" that will be humiliating, big bro, anyway Max got up and grabbed my hand and pulled me down stairs, making our way out of the house.
We made our way out of the house, surprisingly, Max is still holding my hand. Then, I heard our dad shouted our names,
"Maxie, Andy! Wait up!" he shouted,
"You two forgot your lunch!" he handed Max's and my- wait. My school year is over already, it's my summer, oh wait, I forgot to tell him. Oh well, free food anyway.
"Have a good day." he added, then he kissed Max in the chick, and me on my forehead. I didn't expected that.
Then, there some guys who were laughing at us, mostly Max. I can tell they're also from Highschool, he waved at the guys with a small smile, like he didn't mind at all.
"Max, can I come with you? Ya know, to your school?" Of course, he didn't heard me, more like he ignored me. So, he started walking with an angry expression, I sighed, and decided to follow him instead.
He then, started to sing:
"They've been laughing since I can remember,
but they're not gonna laugh anymore"
He bumped into our fence gate, he tried to open it, even tried shaking it. I was about to say something, but he backed away, and jumped over the fence. I was disbelieved, and yet, I did the same thing he did.
"No more Maxie the geek, No more Goof of the week, like before!" he then stepped on the kids' marbles, making him, losing his balance. I was about to apologize to the kids, but I changed my mind, and followed Max, finding where is he going to fall from his balance.
"No more Algebra Tests 'til September!" a random girl sang, ripping some papers, then Max fell and grabbed her waist, for support.
"No more looking at loser like him" grabbing my brother, then throwing him to the other side, I was looking vengeful, he is so gonna get it later. When Max was on the other side, cleaning his shirt, I followed.
"No more havin' to cheat,
No more 'Mystery meal!" then a guy stole Max's lunch,
"No more gym! (x4)" then 4 guys, throwing their underwears and headbands, making me dodge everything. Except for Max, an underwear landed on his face.
"Gonna move to the mall," a blond girl added
"Gonna live in the pool," a came up and added too, flirting at the girl, then my brother came in view,
"Gonna talk to Roxanne and not feel like a fool!" he sang, making the two people leave, before the blonde girl did, she punched Max's left arm first.
"Cause after today, I'm going be cruisin'," three guys on their skateboards sang, then jumped onto Max.
"After today, she'll be mine!" Max sang happily, before ducking,
"After today, my brains will be snoozin'" couple of people singing, while walking over passed the two old ladies,
Then my brother pops behind them, singing
"If I don't faint, I'll be fine!" making the old lady in front of him, faint. She got scared though.
- Third POV -
"I've got 44 minutes of home economics" two blonde twins sang on the rooftop, and then two twin guys sang from above them,
"Then down with the textbooks," grabbed their books, then throwing it, off the rooftop,
"and up with the comics!" two nerds sang, showing their comics,
"Just think of all the time, I've been losing," Max jumped to some birds, making the birds flew away from him,
"Finding the right thing to say!
But, the things will be going my way after today.." students sang while celebrating, then a girl with medium-length red hair, walked by him, making Max wave at her, nervously.
"She looked right through me,
and who could blame her?
I need a new me." he looked at the Powerline cutout in the store, then started to be happily determined,
"Plus some positive proof that I'm not just a 'Goof' and-" he was cut, by the bus passed through him.
"After today I'm going be cruisin'" cheerleaders sand in the bus,
"No more Pep Rally's to cut 'blegh!" two goth girls added, and sticking their tongue out in disgust.
"After today, my brains will be snoozin'," students sang joyful, while exiting the bus,
"I'm going sit on my but" bus driver included, before closing the door.
"I've got less then a hour, and when this is ended," Max looked at the clock on top of his school, and started to run quickly, as he wants his plans to be done, Andy still behind him.
"I'll either be famous-" he slide to through the stairs, then bumping to his principal, Principal Mazur,
"Or you'll be suspended" the principal exclaimed, then looking at the kid following Max. Andy then waved at him with a small smile, then started running to Max, making him confused, why is the kid in a highschool, following Max.
"Just think of all the time I've been losing,
waiting until I could say!" all students at the sports field sang,
"Gonna be on my own, kiss the parents 'Goodbye!',
Gonna party from now 'till the end of July!" a marching band sang,
"Things will be going on my way, After today!" every students sang in delight, together.
Then school bell rang, making all of the students look at the school,
"I wish that this was the day, After today..." Max sang the final line, as he was about to go down the stairs, he tripped over it,
"Ah! Ow! Whoa! Oof!" he fell to the ground, and the people around him, laughed at him
That's all folks! There might be some mistakes though, it's my first time afterall. And, I had a hard time writing the lyrics, and the actions, of course, adding my oc Andy, to the scenes. Anyways,
I hope you guys liked it! Chapter 2 will be out soon! (I think, I'll be working on it)