Hey so this is my first story on here so don't be to harsh but constructable criticism is welcome.
disclaimer:in a perfect world i would own bleach ...but i don't ...so ya enjoy
"hah" I sighed staring up at the ceiling pondering. It had been a month since my brother ichigo had lost his shinigami powers. I could feel ichigo had no ,spiritual pressure, as I heard rukia call it once, and he couldn't be hiding it because he had no skill when it came to controlling that humongous reiatsu of his. Me on the other hand had found out that hollows were attracted to high amounts of spiritual pressure so I had taught myself to hide and sense reiatsu. I could now completely hide my reiatsu without thinking but my reiatsu sensing still needed some work but it would do. Though the final nail in the coffin was that he couldn't see or sense ghosts.
Yet he still refused to tell me anything , so here I find myself once again lying in my bed staring at the ceiling running over what I know so far. 'ghuah its not enough I want answers yet I don't know how , ichigo won't tell me and I haven't seen or sensed that one kid….what was his name ...oh ya toshiro.' He had saved me from a big hollow about a few years back but I hadn't seen him since. 'Tch I need to find answers I got to think hmm...I GOT IT!'. I quickly jumped out of bed and ran down the stairs.
What happened next was almost like clock work karin by this time had it down to a science . (Step1. A greeting) "Karin my lovely daughter you have come down to hug your loving father well come here." he said as he vaulted the table and jumped at Karin. (Step 2. a reception) Ishin (there father) was stopped short however arms outstretched as his face collided with the bottom of karins shoe. "Quite it you old goat" she replied. (Step 3. end of conversation) She then proceeded to 'gently' kick him across the room into the wall , were he stayed to cry over his poster of there mom. He was mumbling something about why was his daughter being so mean and then something about rejection. After that it became unintelligible between the wailing. Turning to her younger sister she continued talking to her "hey yuzu I'm going out for a while so don't worry if I come back late ok." "Ok bye" and with that karin was out the door. "alright time to get to work"turning towards the park she thought 'I need someplace quiet were I could sit motionless and not be disturbed and the park will be perfect for what I have in mind.'
karins pov
"aaahh" sighing I sat down under a nice tree good thing I was wearing pants and a t-shirt a skirt would've been uncomfortable and don't even get me started on a dress. It was quite a beautiful summer day 'its a good day to play soccer but I have more important matters to attend to.' my plan was simple I knew that ichigo was a shinigami that much is for certain so there had to be some place he could go as a shinigami so all I need to do is search for the remnants of ichigos reiatsu follow the path and see if I can find any place out of the ordinary. I needed to find a place that wasn't average, someplace he wouldn't normally go to. This is easier said than done of course it takes a lot of concentration so my body will be very still so the park is perfect.
'alright time to get started' relaxing my muscles I closed my eyes and I opened my mind trying to find a remnant of his reiatsu. Bingo I found a trace not far from were I was sitting ,setting my mind I followed the trace it was thin but I could follow it, the path ran all over town. There was the normal places like school, and uryu, orehime, and chads house which were to be expected. Then there were other places where I found an unusual high amount of reiatsu which is probably where he had fought some hollow or something. Our house was a given I wasn't surprised to find a lot of reiatsu there, I had almost covered half the city when the path seemed to hit a wall beyond it there was nothing and then I could sense it on the other side the path went in and out so that meant …... uhhhmmm. I didn't know what that meant but whatever it was it was blocking me from all angles it was like a dome of nothing a complete vacuum of reiatsu.
'Well that's not suspicious at all' i commented sarcasticly. Opening my eyes I stood up my cramped muscles groaning against the effort. Staring up at the sky the sun was low but still burning bright so it looked about 4-4:30 'good its not to late in the day.' Yawning I stretched my cramped muscles and dusted of my pants. "Time to get some answers!" I stated walking to my destination.
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