Hey this is my second fan fic.In my last one you guys said that you liked
KEvin better so read this one...Please R&R :)
As soon as the liquid touched her lips she relaxed and let it trickle down her throat.The music blared and vibrated the house.Teenagers everywhere were drinking and dancing.Smoke was hanging in the air.A guy approached her.He took her hand and led her up the staircase to an empty room where they made love.
Lucy Camden flashbacked to the night when she had lost her virginity.It was back in highschool when she was only 14.That was 8 years ago.About a month later she found out that she was pregnant.Her and her boyfriend Jimmy (Jimmy Moon) ran away to New York when their parents didn't agree with them having the baby.Lucy had always been a good kid until she got together with Jimmy.Once she was with Jimmy she started drinking, going to parties, and having sex.
Since then Lucy and Jimmy had had two daughters. Lorraine (who they called Ray) who was now 8 and Jamie-Lyn (who they called Jamie) who was now 4.
(If you noticed Ray and Jamie are the names that Dakota and Elle Fanning have on their movies Uptown Girls and Daddy Daycare.Lucy's kids look like and are Jamie and Ray/Dakota and Elle.So just imagine them the same way.Sorry if that was confusing.)
Lucy had worked at a local Wal-Mart for the past 8 years just to make ends-meet.Jimmy, who didn't work, was drunk and high all day.He was hardly ever home and if he was, he was getting stoned with his friends.Lucy knew that he was sleeping around on her, although she stayed with him.Until now.She had packed up as much stuff as she could and bought 3 airline tickets to Glenoak, California, her hometown.After 8 years she was hoping her parents would forgive her and they could make up.She would start a new life in Glenoak, where she could raise her kids away from their deadbeat dad.The only thing she left Jimmy was a note explaining that she had left him and he would never see her or their kids again except when she flew back to get the rest of their stuff in about a month.
It was nearing the end of July and Glenoak was blazing hot.Lucy looked out of the cab window at the familiar town that she had missed for the past 8 years.Instead of going home she had decided to go to the church and talk to her dad first.It was a Wednesday so Eric would most likely be doing church work in his office.The cab pulled into the church parking lot.The cabdriver helped them with their bags and then Lucy paid him.Walking into the main room where all the services were held, she looked at the rows of benches where she had spent most of her childhood sitting and listening to her dad speak.She set their suitcases down and faced her daughters.
Lucy :Ok girls, now I have to go talk to someone really important and I need you to sit here and wait for me.Sit here, not run around in here.Please please behave.Take something out of your bags to play with for a while.I'll try to be quick.
Jamie: Who are you going to see?
L: Umm, well, it's my...
Ray: Your dad.That you haven't talked to in years.
Lucy:Umm, well yes.
Ray:Mom, I heard you talking to your friend back in New York.Me and Jamie know that you left your house 8 years ago because you were having me and now you're coming home to say sorry to your parents.
Lucy:Ok, I didn't know you knew that but yes that's why we're here.We'll talk about it more later, right now I have to go talk to my Dad.
J:We'll be good mommy.
L:Hehe, I'd like to believe that, but try your best.
Lucy walked into her fathers office slowly.He was typing on his computer and didn't notice her.
L:Hey you. He looks up and his mouth drops.
E:Oh my god.Lucy what are you doing here? He jumps up and goes and hugs her.
E: I can't believe it's you.We haven't seen you in years.
L:8 to be exact.I know, but I thought that not talking any longer was stupid.I wanted to say I'm sorry that I left 8 years ago and how I was before I left.
E:You're forgiven for everything.Your mother and I have been trying to locate you since you left.We felt bad how we acted too.We've missed you since the day you left.We also felt really bad once Mary also turned out to be pregnant.
L:Mary was pregnant too?!
E:Yeah.She has an 8 year old daughter Cassie and a four year old daughter Lyndsey.
L:Are you serious?My girls are the same age.
E:You have kids?Well I know you had one because you were pregnant when you left, but I didn't know you had two.
L:Yeah, they're out sitting on the benches.I doubt that they're still there though, they're most likely eavesdropping from around the corner.
They hear footsteps run away.The girls run back to the benches and act like they've been there the whole time.
E:I'm guessing that was them?
L:Yup.Our plane just landed and I decided to come see you first.I wasn't sure if you guys still lived in the same place or if I should just drop in.
E:How long are you staying for?
L:I'm not just visiting, I'm moving here.I left Jimmy.
E:You're moving here!?Well then you're going to have to stay with us.Come on, you're mother is going to faint when she sees you.She misses you so much.
L:Right now?
E:Why not.I definitley won't be able to finish my work now I wouldn't be able to concentrate. And I want to meet my two grand daughters. Eric and Lucy go out to find Ray and Jamie each pretending to be reading books.
L:Girls come here please. Ray and Jamie shyly walk over Lucy, Jamie hiding behind her.
L:Girls, I want you to meet your grandpa.
There was a moment of silence which was broken when Jamie ran over to Eric and jumped onto him and hugged him.What she had always wanted was a grandma and grandpa.Eric embraced his grand daughter.
After this the 4 loaded Lucy and her kid's luggage into the van and drove home, to the familiar Camden house.
Hey how was it??Should I keep going?
As soon as the liquid touched her lips she relaxed and let it trickle down her throat.The music blared and vibrated the house.Teenagers everywhere were drinking and dancing.Smoke was hanging in the air.A guy approached her.He took her hand and led her up the staircase to an empty room where they made love.
Lucy Camden flashbacked to the night when she had lost her virginity.It was back in highschool when she was only 14.That was 8 years ago.About a month later she found out that she was pregnant.Her and her boyfriend Jimmy (Jimmy Moon) ran away to New York when their parents didn't agree with them having the baby.Lucy had always been a good kid until she got together with Jimmy.Once she was with Jimmy she started drinking, going to parties, and having sex.
Since then Lucy and Jimmy had had two daughters. Lorraine (who they called Ray) who was now 8 and Jamie-Lyn (who they called Jamie) who was now 4.
(If you noticed Ray and Jamie are the names that Dakota and Elle Fanning have on their movies Uptown Girls and Daddy Daycare.Lucy's kids look like and are Jamie and Ray/Dakota and Elle.So just imagine them the same way.Sorry if that was confusing.)
Lucy had worked at a local Wal-Mart for the past 8 years just to make ends-meet.Jimmy, who didn't work, was drunk and high all day.He was hardly ever home and if he was, he was getting stoned with his friends.Lucy knew that he was sleeping around on her, although she stayed with him.Until now.She had packed up as much stuff as she could and bought 3 airline tickets to Glenoak, California, her hometown.After 8 years she was hoping her parents would forgive her and they could make up.She would start a new life in Glenoak, where she could raise her kids away from their deadbeat dad.The only thing she left Jimmy was a note explaining that she had left him and he would never see her or their kids again except when she flew back to get the rest of their stuff in about a month.
It was nearing the end of July and Glenoak was blazing hot.Lucy looked out of the cab window at the familiar town that she had missed for the past 8 years.Instead of going home she had decided to go to the church and talk to her dad first.It was a Wednesday so Eric would most likely be doing church work in his office.The cab pulled into the church parking lot.The cabdriver helped them with their bags and then Lucy paid him.Walking into the main room where all the services were held, she looked at the rows of benches where she had spent most of her childhood sitting and listening to her dad speak.She set their suitcases down and faced her daughters.
Lucy :Ok girls, now I have to go talk to someone really important and I need you to sit here and wait for me.Sit here, not run around in here.Please please behave.Take something out of your bags to play with for a while.I'll try to be quick.
Jamie: Who are you going to see?
L: Umm, well, it's my...
Ray: Your dad.That you haven't talked to in years.
Lucy:Umm, well yes.
Ray:Mom, I heard you talking to your friend back in New York.Me and Jamie know that you left your house 8 years ago because you were having me and now you're coming home to say sorry to your parents.
Lucy:Ok, I didn't know you knew that but yes that's why we're here.We'll talk about it more later, right now I have to go talk to my Dad.
J:We'll be good mommy.
L:Hehe, I'd like to believe that, but try your best.
Lucy walked into her fathers office slowly.He was typing on his computer and didn't notice her.
L:Hey you. He looks up and his mouth drops.
E:Oh my god.Lucy what are you doing here? He jumps up and goes and hugs her.
E: I can't believe it's you.We haven't seen you in years.
L:8 to be exact.I know, but I thought that not talking any longer was stupid.I wanted to say I'm sorry that I left 8 years ago and how I was before I left.
E:You're forgiven for everything.Your mother and I have been trying to locate you since you left.We felt bad how we acted too.We've missed you since the day you left.We also felt really bad once Mary also turned out to be pregnant.
L:Mary was pregnant too?!
E:Yeah.She has an 8 year old daughter Cassie and a four year old daughter Lyndsey.
L:Are you serious?My girls are the same age.
E:You have kids?Well I know you had one because you were pregnant when you left, but I didn't know you had two.
L:Yeah, they're out sitting on the benches.I doubt that they're still there though, they're most likely eavesdropping from around the corner.
They hear footsteps run away.The girls run back to the benches and act like they've been there the whole time.
E:I'm guessing that was them?
L:Yup.Our plane just landed and I decided to come see you first.I wasn't sure if you guys still lived in the same place or if I should just drop in.
E:How long are you staying for?
L:I'm not just visiting, I'm moving here.I left Jimmy.
E:You're moving here!?Well then you're going to have to stay with us.Come on, you're mother is going to faint when she sees you.She misses you so much.
L:Right now?
E:Why not.I definitley won't be able to finish my work now I wouldn't be able to concentrate. And I want to meet my two grand daughters. Eric and Lucy go out to find Ray and Jamie each pretending to be reading books.
L:Girls come here please. Ray and Jamie shyly walk over Lucy, Jamie hiding behind her.
L:Girls, I want you to meet your grandpa.
There was a moment of silence which was broken when Jamie ran over to Eric and jumped onto him and hugged him.What she had always wanted was a grandma and grandpa.Eric embraced his grand daughter.
After this the 4 loaded Lucy and her kid's luggage into the van and drove home, to the familiar Camden house.
Hey how was it??Should I keep going?