Ok so I had this crazy idea and just had to put it up on Fanfiction. Here's the first chapter, if I get some sweet reviews I'll see about staying with it. Ok so this story takes place in the future where chipmunks are practically wiped out, so it doesn't really have anything to do with the chipmunks today, the characters are pretty much the same but they're not related.
Forgotten
Alvin's pov.
I rummaged through the half empty boxes desperately searching for food, my hind paw shifted and I managed to knock over an empty trashcan that clanged loudly against the pavement. Oh no, I thought just as a door banged open, "Hey! Go, get you filthy rat!" a balding chubby man yelled shaking an empty beer bottle at me. I turned tail and ran but not before the bottle cracked against my shoulder drawing blood, I ignored the faint stinging and dived down a sewer drain.
"Well, well, well if it isn't mister perfect,"
" Watch where you step boys you don't wanna damage his perfect tail,"
I ignored the rats mocking and moved on through the sewer systems kicking up rocks and grumbling under my breath.
"Stupid humans, stupid rats," I growled, humans for the past 200 years have been trying to purify the world by eliminating all diseases, that also means the creatures that carry diseases such as rodents.
As you can tell by my little friends back there they didn't do a every good job, as far as I know I'm the only chipmunk left, which means saving the world is going to be a pain. Yep you heard me, saving the world, I'm supposed to save it! Well my species is anyways, here let me explain. There are six special Stones that control the unimaginable powers that can only be wielded by a rodent. Chipmunks have been protecting the Stones for thousands of years; the rats want them for themselves and to enslave the human race.
I know stupid right? I mean who would want control over humans, oh no offense to the humans reading! Any ways I don't have a Stone in case you were wondering, and I wouldn't want one, I don't wanna risk my neck for something like that anyways.
I stepped into a pool of light and looked up, a sewer grate had been removed allowing the moonlight and different scents fill the sewer. I sniffed the air eagerly as I caught the delicious salty sweet scent of pretzels, come to Alvin! I climbed swiftly up the sewer ladder trying not to put a lot of pressure on my injured right shoulder. I peeked out and saw the owner of the cart fast a sleep, I smirked and crawled all the way through before jumping up onto the cart and snatching up a pretzel. " Thanks," I chirped at the sleeping man before jumping down onto the sidewalk and taking off. I am not going back in the sewers with food; it'd be eaten alive!
I munched hungrily on the pretzel until I had finished it off, I sighed and slumped against a wall gritting my teeth as my shoulder slid down it. Another night and still alive, that's pretty good for a seventeen year old. " It's a rat! You can't keep it!" I looked up with a raised eyebrow, " No it's a chipmunk dad, we learned about them in science!" I frowned and rolled my eyes. Your dad's right kid, its probably just a filthy rat. I thought just as the door to an apartment swung open, the dad threw out a cage that hit the street hard and bounced landing a few feet from me.
The creature inside banged against the walls of the cage letting out a pained cry, I waited cautiously as the man slammed the door closed and began arguing once again with his son, I inched forward on all fours my nose twitching as I tried to find it's scent. I heard quiet sobs coming from inside, I peered into it.
A small auburn furred chipette sat hunched over in the bottom sobbing into her tiny nimble paw, " Are you ok Miss?" I asked opening the cage door slowly staring intently at the chipette. She looked up, the most stunning shocking blue eyes met mine and we both sucked in sharp gasps. " Who the heck are you?"
Sooooo how'd you all like it? To tell you the truth I wasn't so sure about when I started writing but if you like it please R&R! Thanks!
