father and son

by Nirua1992

What would happen if someone would want bruce wayne batman as his son. And in order to achieve develops a plan to make bruce accept him if necesarie by force. Will bruce accept a replacement for his father? And how will the justice league react?

1. Chapter 1

Hey as you already know I'm the author of this story. This is my first time writing a story and it's my first timetrying to write in
English. Please review my story beause I'd like to improve my writing . Also if you see grammar mistakes please say it in a review so I can correct my mistakes.

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Prologue

The whole world held they're breath. Before them stood batman. But batman was no longer batman. He was more like a batboy beause a strange laser weapon has hit batman and suddenly he was once again 8 years old. How did it happen? for that we could go back months or I could just tell you the short version. No I'll tell you de whole story from beginning to end but maybe not exactly in that order. this the story of one desperate man who wants to save the world in his own way and the dark knight who he thinks should have been his son. It tells the tale of Ra's Al Ghul and Bruce wayne. As Enemies. As mentor and pupil As father and son...?

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Sorry it's so short but I promise the next chapter will be a lot longer , I hope.
And if anyody feels the need to flame me.Go ahead. I know I'm not a star in writing .But the purpose for this story is to improve both my english and writing.