Hey I'm back with the edited version of Set In Smoke: Resurrection. I've already got to the penultimate chapter of this story so I will be updating regularly...if I get enough reviews *hint hint*. Let's get straight into it!
DISCLAIMER: If you recognise anything...realise I'm crying
Suddenly, the train juddered to a shrieking, shaking halt. The tense silence inside the second to last carriage of the train slipped into one of anxiety in the space of a second. All five of the faces inside the carriage already understood what was happening, and wondered if they could bring themselves to do what was required of them.
Almost imperceptibly Albus Severus Potter moved closer to his target. He had his own to play in all this. Pain would be a result but he was only an instrument. Suddenly the atmosphere was pierced by sharp, pained screaming almost immediately followed harsh panting.
"What's wrong? Hugo?" The voice came from somewhere but five of the children in the carriage were already moving past the question that had come unbidden from someone's lips. They already knew what was wrong, what Hugo was sensing that caused him such suffering. Such was the pain he felt, that he was hunched over himself and bile began to burst from his mouth. Only one thing could have caused Hugo such distress and where it was coming from was their main concern.
Hugo managed to force words from his mouth in a rasp stated, "I can't think! I can't tell where it's from. It's everywhere, smothering me."
As suddenly as the train had stopped, all the lanterns went out leaving them in the light of a night without stars. As the door to the carriage swung open and each of the five turned in horror as the silhouette figure smiled to grin smugly at them.
Short, but hopefully in your opinion sweet! It's just the prologue. The other chapter will be much longer.
The next time you hear from me will be in your review reply *wink*
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