Look look! I'm revising it! lol I was ten when I wrote it heheh so now
I'll make it better with my fantastic writing ablilities...welll noo. But
I'll try to make it a little more enjoyable haha
It was a dark, stormy night in the land of Hyrule.One lone figure could be seen in the distance, hunched up and scrambling in the murky mud, slipping and stumbliing to get on his horse . His destination was Lon Lon Ranch, the closest place he could go to get help.
He had been in the Temple of Time earlier that night. He didn't know why, but something seemed to draw him to it. It felt so right, like he was supposed to be there, like he had been there before. He was starting to get a bad feeling in the middle of his gut. He walked dripping water and mud in a trail behind him, towards the alter at the end of the magnificant temple. He heard his foot steps and the patter off rain on the staind glass echoing from the walls of the temple.
After a while of looking around and seeing nothing, he rubbed his head and started to laugh at his stupidity. It was just a dream and he had come out to some temple he didn't even know existed, all in the middle of the night. He was cold and wet, muddy, and hungry on top of everything. The man turned around with a tired sigh and started walking away from the alter, when he heard a noise, like a chuckle.
"Huh," He pulled out his sword ready for battle. His knuckles were turning white from his strong grip on the huge sword. He slightly moved his foot to the side and braced him self as he whirled around and spun to meet whatever was lurking in the shadows behind him.
But to his suprise, there was nothing there. Thinking he had gone crazy, and that the old temple was playing tricks on his head, he mumbled to himself , sheathed his sword, and started to walk away, a little faster than last time.
Suddenly the door of time exploded, hurling rubble at the man as he fell to the floor, covering his head and eyes, as rock flew to every side of him. He quickly regained his stance. A large , ugly man in gerudo clothing stepped out. "What the...Who.." "Shut up fool and get outa my way," the Gerudo yelled, before the man could finish. The Gerudo lunged at him with a growl, and stabbed him in the stomach, with his broad double- edged sword.
He screamed as he looked at the man grinning at him, and as he saw the gigantic sword petruding through his gut. He sank to his knees as crimson blood ran everywhere in a pool around him. The gerudo painfully yanked it out, wiped it of on the back of the man's shirt, and rushed out, leaving the him to die in his very own blood. *********
So there he was struggling for every breath, in the cold rain and dark of the night. The rain was heavily pooring down now, but blood could still be seen running down the man's horse and clothes. He rode for what seemed like a million years.When he finally made it to Lon Lon Ranch, he slowly climbed down and staggered to the door. The man felt dizzy as he rapped on the door, hoping for his life someone would be there.
A tall girl with red hair, about his age came to the door." Hello? What are you-" She looked down at the scruffy man, and saw the blood seeping out of his muddy, once white shirt, and flowing down, mixing with the mud, making a putrid color around his feet. He looked at her, his beautiful azure eyes staring up at her as he started to fall, but she caught him, stumbling herself beneath his weight. "Daddy! Come quick!" she yelled. She took wat was left of his shirt off, and carried him into a room, with the help of her father, and laid him on the bed, immediatly tending to his wound.
********* After she had cleaned and bandaged his wound as best as she could , her father cleaned him up, and gave him some new clothes to wear while she washed his own. Later, when she went to go check on the man, she noticed for the first time what he looked like. She hadn't been able to make out hhis features before because of all the mud and blood that covered him. He had scruffy blonde hair, and in her opinion a well defined chest and...
No ,I am not going there she thought with a grin curled on her lips. Must be a Royal Knight, or something... . Or maybey.... No. It's not him. He's long gone. she thought with a frown. Although he does look like him..hmm.
As she was pondering, something wet came smacking into her head. She screamed and flicked the thing off of her, when she noticed... " Oh my! A fairy?!" she gasped. She immediantly ran over to the little blue thing, swooped it up and held it in her hand. " Are you alright?" she asked wide eyed. A high, squeaky voice replied ,"Who do you think you are, to just smack me like that! Why I otta- Wait a minute! Link, Oh no! Is he alright? Is he dead? " The fairy fluttered over to the young man and sat on his broad chest. "Wake up, Link! Please wake up!" The girl stared in disbelief at the fairy, "Did you say his name was-was Link?" she stuttered. "Yeah, and I'm so sorry for acting up! Thank you for saving him!" the fairy apologized as she looked at the farm girl, her eyes pleading for forgiveness.
Later that night, the girl was sitting by Link watching him and wandering why he had left her.. They had been good friends when they were little. Always playing with the horses, and running in the meadows. They went exploring and had make believe adventures, though real ones too. She smiled to herself remembering..."But that was before you left." she said softly to Link, brushing his golden bangs back with her hand, although he couldn't hear her.
Her father walked in and looked at Link. Then he gave her a mustached smiled, and in a fatherly voice said ,"C'mon , you'd better get some sleep. He'll be alright.I'm sure of it ." "I'll sleep down here on the couch, ok Dad?" Malon asked. "Alright I'll get you a blanket." He came back in with the blanket and gave it to her. "Thanks I love you, goodnight." she said as she kissed her father on the cheek. "Goodnight dear." She made her bed and thought about al the events that had happened that day.
*********
As the girl was sleeping Link was having a dream. In the dream he had a large sword. He felt the power flowing all throught his body. He was in a the temple of time. He then walked up to the alter and saw three jewels: a blue saphire, a red ruby, and a green emerald.
Link was now in a huge room. In the center there was a man playing a large pipe organ. There was a beautiful girl screaming his name . She was trapped in a jewel like prism beating on the glass. He saw images of him fighting monsters and battling demons. "A great evil threatens this beautiful land of Hyrule, Only you can stop it. You are the Hero of Time," a man with white hair and a mustache said pointing his finger at Link.
Link woke up with beads of sweat collecting on his forehead."What was that all about?" He looked around the room and saw the girl who had suposedly saved his life. She looked so familiar..." It can't be... Is it?" He shot up, but slowly with a weak "Ow" fell back down from the pain af the gash in his stomach. "The Girl" woke up with a start and saw that link was awake.
She got up and walked over to him. He tried to sit back up but she gently pushed him back. "It's ok, just rest.." she soothed . "Thanks for saving my life..um..." She started to smile," Malon," "Oh yeah Mal- Malon?! Is it really you?!" he gleamed. "Yep, in the flesh!" she giggled. "It's been so long.." Link said." I'm really sorry.." he started, but Malon interrupted him and said,"It doesn't matter now Link, you're back!" and with that she hugged him as hard as she could wthout hurting him even worse.
It was a dark, stormy night in the land of Hyrule.One lone figure could be seen in the distance, hunched up and scrambling in the murky mud, slipping and stumbliing to get on his horse . His destination was Lon Lon Ranch, the closest place he could go to get help.
He had been in the Temple of Time earlier that night. He didn't know why, but something seemed to draw him to it. It felt so right, like he was supposed to be there, like he had been there before. He was starting to get a bad feeling in the middle of his gut. He walked dripping water and mud in a trail behind him, towards the alter at the end of the magnificant temple. He heard his foot steps and the patter off rain on the staind glass echoing from the walls of the temple.
After a while of looking around and seeing nothing, he rubbed his head and started to laugh at his stupidity. It was just a dream and he had come out to some temple he didn't even know existed, all in the middle of the night. He was cold and wet, muddy, and hungry on top of everything. The man turned around with a tired sigh and started walking away from the alter, when he heard a noise, like a chuckle.
"Huh," He pulled out his sword ready for battle. His knuckles were turning white from his strong grip on the huge sword. He slightly moved his foot to the side and braced him self as he whirled around and spun to meet whatever was lurking in the shadows behind him.
But to his suprise, there was nothing there. Thinking he had gone crazy, and that the old temple was playing tricks on his head, he mumbled to himself , sheathed his sword, and started to walk away, a little faster than last time.
Suddenly the door of time exploded, hurling rubble at the man as he fell to the floor, covering his head and eyes, as rock flew to every side of him. He quickly regained his stance. A large , ugly man in gerudo clothing stepped out. "What the...Who.." "Shut up fool and get outa my way," the Gerudo yelled, before the man could finish. The Gerudo lunged at him with a growl, and stabbed him in the stomach, with his broad double- edged sword.
He screamed as he looked at the man grinning at him, and as he saw the gigantic sword petruding through his gut. He sank to his knees as crimson blood ran everywhere in a pool around him. The gerudo painfully yanked it out, wiped it of on the back of the man's shirt, and rushed out, leaving the him to die in his very own blood. *********
So there he was struggling for every breath, in the cold rain and dark of the night. The rain was heavily pooring down now, but blood could still be seen running down the man's horse and clothes. He rode for what seemed like a million years.When he finally made it to Lon Lon Ranch, he slowly climbed down and staggered to the door. The man felt dizzy as he rapped on the door, hoping for his life someone would be there.
A tall girl with red hair, about his age came to the door." Hello? What are you-" She looked down at the scruffy man, and saw the blood seeping out of his muddy, once white shirt, and flowing down, mixing with the mud, making a putrid color around his feet. He looked at her, his beautiful azure eyes staring up at her as he started to fall, but she caught him, stumbling herself beneath his weight. "Daddy! Come quick!" she yelled. She took wat was left of his shirt off, and carried him into a room, with the help of her father, and laid him on the bed, immediatly tending to his wound.
********* After she had cleaned and bandaged his wound as best as she could , her father cleaned him up, and gave him some new clothes to wear while she washed his own. Later, when she went to go check on the man, she noticed for the first time what he looked like. She hadn't been able to make out hhis features before because of all the mud and blood that covered him. He had scruffy blonde hair, and in her opinion a well defined chest and...
No ,I am not going there she thought with a grin curled on her lips. Must be a Royal Knight, or something... . Or maybey.... No. It's not him. He's long gone. she thought with a frown. Although he does look like him..hmm.
As she was pondering, something wet came smacking into her head. She screamed and flicked the thing off of her, when she noticed... " Oh my! A fairy?!" she gasped. She immediantly ran over to the little blue thing, swooped it up and held it in her hand. " Are you alright?" she asked wide eyed. A high, squeaky voice replied ,"Who do you think you are, to just smack me like that! Why I otta- Wait a minute! Link, Oh no! Is he alright? Is he dead? " The fairy fluttered over to the young man and sat on his broad chest. "Wake up, Link! Please wake up!" The girl stared in disbelief at the fairy, "Did you say his name was-was Link?" she stuttered. "Yeah, and I'm so sorry for acting up! Thank you for saving him!" the fairy apologized as she looked at the farm girl, her eyes pleading for forgiveness.
Later that night, the girl was sitting by Link watching him and wandering why he had left her.. They had been good friends when they were little. Always playing with the horses, and running in the meadows. They went exploring and had make believe adventures, though real ones too. She smiled to herself remembering..."But that was before you left." she said softly to Link, brushing his golden bangs back with her hand, although he couldn't hear her.
Her father walked in and looked at Link. Then he gave her a mustached smiled, and in a fatherly voice said ,"C'mon , you'd better get some sleep. He'll be alright.I'm sure of it ." "I'll sleep down here on the couch, ok Dad?" Malon asked. "Alright I'll get you a blanket." He came back in with the blanket and gave it to her. "Thanks I love you, goodnight." she said as she kissed her father on the cheek. "Goodnight dear." She made her bed and thought about al the events that had happened that day.
*********
As the girl was sleeping Link was having a dream. In the dream he had a large sword. He felt the power flowing all throught his body. He was in a the temple of time. He then walked up to the alter and saw three jewels: a blue saphire, a red ruby, and a green emerald.
Link was now in a huge room. In the center there was a man playing a large pipe organ. There was a beautiful girl screaming his name . She was trapped in a jewel like prism beating on the glass. He saw images of him fighting monsters and battling demons. "A great evil threatens this beautiful land of Hyrule, Only you can stop it. You are the Hero of Time," a man with white hair and a mustache said pointing his finger at Link.
Link woke up with beads of sweat collecting on his forehead."What was that all about?" He looked around the room and saw the girl who had suposedly saved his life. She looked so familiar..." It can't be... Is it?" He shot up, but slowly with a weak "Ow" fell back down from the pain af the gash in his stomach. "The Girl" woke up with a start and saw that link was awake.
She got up and walked over to him. He tried to sit back up but she gently pushed him back. "It's ok, just rest.." she soothed . "Thanks for saving my life..um..." She started to smile," Malon," "Oh yeah Mal- Malon?! Is it really you?!" he gleamed. "Yep, in the flesh!" she giggled. "It's been so long.." Link said." I'm really sorry.." he started, but Malon interrupted him and said,"It doesn't matter now Link, you're back!" and with that she hugged him as hard as she could wthout hurting him even worse.