I'm almost done with Naruto Shippuden and decided to rewrite almost the entire story because I got bored.
The rookies in the front were making too much commotion. Everybody was staring, the youngest included. She was small, smaller than everybody else. She was the youngest, perhaps nine or ten. Her blondish hair was long and messy. She wore no headband, unlike everybody else in the room, including her comrades.
The headband her comrades was black with a thinner looking metal. A symbol what looked like a mountain was carved into it.
She watched silently until one of the mysterious sound ninja attacked a man conversing with the rookies. The chain and ball weighing her down was not enough to keep her from crossing the room before her comrades could stop her. She stood in front of the man as his glasses shattered and the glass shattered on the ground.
"There's no need for this, sir. Can we not just settle down?"
She heard murmurs in the room, but she just smiled. Not an evil smile, but an innocent one. Like a child asking her mother for an ice cream cone.
With a flash, the man attacked her as well. To his surprise, she did not fall to her knees and throw up like to last person. There was a sound of splintering, cracking, and, finally, she looked down as shards of glass fell from her eye sockets. While the others stood by, gasping, murmuring, and staring, she pulled out the remainder of her glass eyes. Silently, her smile replaced by a solemn from, she walked to her comrades, pulling a headband from her black cloak and tying it around her head so nobody would see her empty sockets.
The headband was like her comrades, except the metal had a bronze tint around the outside. The symbol was also upside down, since she couldn't actually see it. One of her comrades quickly fixed it.
"Wei shen me?" the eldest, Jiejie, is a girl with bright blond hair braided down her back. The other companion, Gege, was a boy with midnight black hair that was always messy and long-ish. As the three spoke, they used a language they'd made up long ago. This question asked by Jiejie was "why?" as in "why would you do that you brat?"
But Nuli, the youngest participating in the Chunin exams, just gave a smile and rubbed the back of her neck. She felt everybody around them staring, but one person in particular caught her attention. The boy was from the sand she guessed, judging by the smell her gave off.
"Dui bu qui." She said a quick sorry then a loud band and the smell of smoke interrupted her.
The prompter began yelling at them for a moment, but Jiejie was busy fixing Nuli's hair and Gege was just reading a book on ancient temples. Nuli, who had always been a suspicious person, was facing towards the strange desert ninja dudes.
"Ibiki Morino," Nuli whispered as she listened to the sound village ninja get out of trouble through flattery.
He explained to them to turn their paperwork in and get a number.
"A written exam? Well that doesn't seem very fair…" apparently, one of the rookies up front agreed, because she could hear him complain from where she was standing.
"What do you think his name is, Jiejie."
"Don't know, but I think somebody called him 'Naruto' earlier."
Naruto. His hair was yellow and a little messy, but not as bad as Nuji's. He wore an orange and navy blue outfit. It seemed his comrades were a pink haired girl who wore red and a boy who was part of…
"Uchiha."
"What was that Nuji?"
"Nothing."
She could hear the other people in the room who were still staring at her thinking. Thinking silently, but not quiet enough.
"How does she know that? She's blind!"
"Is it some sort of jutsu she uses to see things?"
"How is this possible?"
But there was one voice that was louder than all the others. A boy whose thoughts were more loud than his words.
"I sense something powerful in her...what is she?"
Nuji faced the sand village ninja and smiled. She debated what she should do until Jiejie laid her hand over the young girl's shoulder.
"Go on, it's okay."
"Hello." The young girl waved, but the sand village ninja gave her a mere scoff then left to get their numbers.
