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In the world of Pok mon there are those that are considered wild, and those that are untouched by all but a few masters trainers. This is one group s journey.
Prequel:
"Sir, we found them." a sceptile called over a radio. He was standing in a tree a herd of Maganium

"Good, see if they are willing to give up one of their own for training." A voice said over the radio.
"You sure, I don't think they're too friendly toward pred..."
"Just do it." the voice interrupted. The sceptile sighed then jumped down from the tree.
"Hello," He walked out arms apart walking slowly.

A cyntaquil stood in front of his new sensei Blaziken. To left was a Squrtile and to his right a chicorita, each with their own master Pok mon, a Sceptile and a Blastois. He wondered why they were here; he thought he was here to be trained alone. In front of him was a strange cave it wasn't in a mountain side; also, it was wooden.
A piece of the cave opened up and out stepped a strange Pok mon, it had strangely colored fur on it and it seemed to only be partially covered by the fur. His feet were in the shape of an egg with knots that seemed to be holding them on. The being spoke in a language he had couldn't understand, the three masters nodded and spoke into something on their wrists. The Sceptile spoke first; battle scars from past fights seemed to shine as he spoke, "Yes sir, we were told that these were the strongest youth in their respected families."
The Blaziken spoke next, "This cyntiquil though merely a year old is able to use Flamethrower." I looked up to my sensei. The strange person seemed impressed, "Demonstrate for us would you." he asked, I looked to the person.
"Alright." I took a deep breath, I had been born with this ability, and ever since I was little I had been able to use it. I let out a deep breath and released a flamethrower that shot out past the person. "How s that?" I said cockily, receiving a knot on the head.
"Don't aim at humans." I looked up and over my shoulder to my sensei. He smiled, "They don't have abilities like you or me, and they can't defend themselves." Humans? I pondered. The being came closer; I recoiled a little when he stuck his hand out. He spoke something and struck me on the head gently, he said something to me, I didn't know what it was but I know he approved of me. I just smiled and looked up into his eyes, I don't generally like people right off the bat, but this guy seemed alright. The other two were eager to show off for him also, the chicorita knew solar beam. Which was quite impressive for her age, and the squrtile knew ice beam, also an impressive ability. The being reached into his pocket and put a charm around each of our necks, each represented the element we were born to. I looked at our masters, they also had the charms, my master had it tied to his wrist, the sceptile had it around his neck also, but the blastois had it on one of his cannons. Then the being turned and walked into his den.
"What was that all about?" the squrtile turned to his teacher. "And what are they doing here I thought this was going to be a private training?" the blastois closed his eyes; he then rested his hand on the squrtiles head.
"Patience, we were just about to tell you everything you need to know." he spoke slowly and patiently as if dealing with an eggling.
The sceptile spoke next, "You three are here to train together, we will supervise you to make sure you don't kill the other student." he looked to each of us resting his gaze on me, the look in his eye frightened me to the core, "Restraint will be used in all fights, rather they be real or training. Failure to follow these rules would be, unwise" he licked his lips. I took a step away from the sceptile, as did the squrtile.
"Don't scare them leaf-blade." my teacher spoke up, "just because you're a predator doesn t mean you have any rights to our students."
"True, but don't think I won't if I see you two not around." Leaf-blade turned and walked off.
"Don t listen to him," the blastoise spoke again. "He's mostly bark and no bite anyway." he giggled to himself. "Get it, bark? Well never mind. Burnout will you show the students to their sleeping quarters? I'll gather firewood and some food for them?" Burnout, my Sensei, nodded. "Alright, any requests?"
"Some wurmple or caterpies would be great." I spoke first,
"Some berries would be fine for me, but if not I ll find something to graze on later." the chicorita spoke shyly.
"Um, just bring me whatever you would eat." The squirtle said shortly. The Blastoise recalled everything and headed off,
"Alright you three," Burn out started, "I'm sure you have questions, so let s get on with them."
"Well," I started off, "who was that?" I pointed toward the cave. "I've never heard of a Pok mon like that before, and one that can't talk to boot? What s with that?"
Burnout smiled. "I was hoping one of you would ask that," he sat down cross legged. "For one, he's not a Pok mon. he's a human."
"You we already know that much," squirtle pointed out.
/"Yes but what you don't know is that they're the dominate species on this planet." We looked at him flabbergasted, "Their numbers equal into the millions just in one colony alone, not only that they are able to capture us and train us to be stronger."
Chicorita spoke silently. "I heard they bend you to their will and make you fight for your life." we looked to her.
"No, that s not, well, that s not how most trainers, as they call themselves, treat their Pok mon. But I won't lie to you there are cruel trainers out there who want nothing more than to use you until you lose then dump you. However, no Pok mon to my knowledge has died in one of these fights unless it was a freak accident." chicorita looked relieved, but then looked away embarrassed or something.
"So, can we be caught and trained?" Master shook his head,
"So long as you wear those charms a trainer cant capture you." we all sighed in relief. "Any other questions? no? Ok then let me show you your beds."
"Beds?" we asked in unison. Sensei brought us into the cave, on the inside it was strange, portals on the wall that showed an unknown field with ponytas in it, but the ponytas didn't move or anything.
"Don't touch anything. Come on, follow me." we went up a series of steps to a second floor, sensei pushed against the wall and it opened. We all jumped back, gaining some courage I stepped forward into the room. Three beds lined the room, one was red, one was blue, and the last was green. "Your beds are the ones colored to your element. So Fire is red, water is blue, and leaf is green. Hydro will be here shortly with food, feel free to explore the house, just be sure not to drink from the white standing water bowl ok?" he laughed, "Speaking of which, if you need to use the restroom let me know and I ll show you the quickest way out."
I looked at the other two who looked just as tired as I was, "I think we'll stay here Sir." Burnout nodded.
"Just call me Burnout, leaf-blade may want to be called Sir, but Hydra and I don't mind you using our names." he smiled. "I I ll just shut the door, yell if you need anything." I went and jumped onto my bed and laid down in a circle,
"So what s your names? I'm blaze."
"My names Tyler." the squrtile spoke first Chicorita spoke quietly, "I'm Chico." Then with a little more courage she spoke a little louder. "Where are you two from? My herd doesn t live more than a day's journey from here."
"I live near the mountains, there s a lot of streams and ice their so we like it." Tyler spoke up "I live down by the water, the bugs and other prey Pok mon like to live there, but so do bigger predators like Ursaring." The three Pok mon talked to each other and got to know one another better. Tyler, was the son of the chief his colony, which explained his I-want-it-now attitude. Chico Was shy about sharing anything at all, what she did say was that she was the daughter to one of the head members of the herd. And I, well I m no one special, I was born and raised a simple life, I was taught by our elders, like all my peers were, However I am one of the more powerful of the cyndaquills my age. Tyler and Chico said the same about themselves. As soon as I was about to fall asleep Hydro came in with our food. He tossed each of us a bag and left without word. He had brought berries for Tyler and Chico, and as requested he brought me 2 caterpies and a wurple. With glee I bit off the inedible part of the caterpie's head and enjoyed the rest of it. Chico and Tyler looked at me strangely. "What?" I said cleaning my face with my tongue. "How can you eat those things? They look so gross." Chico asked.
"Yea dude, I don't think I can eat mine if I watch you eat anymore." Tyler put his hand up against his mouth as if to hold in a barf.
"yes, well, a boy's got to eat." I said plucking off the spikes of the wurple.
"Why are you torturing it, eat it and be done." Chico asked rather rashly.
"If I ate it whole the toxin in its spikes would make me sick for weeks. Trust me, I don't want to go through that again, and the caterpies have a sticky string they produce that s held in a cavity in their head which is why I bit off that part and then ate the bug. Now stop pestering me and eat your own food." I snorted turning away from them. Why don't they mind Their own business? I can eat my food however I want. I thought grumpily. After eating we all settled down in our respected beds and fell asleep, eager to see what tomorrow brought.