Editor's Note- God, why am I doing this? Seriously, WHY do I think this is a good idea? I suppose I should introduce myself. I'm Light, and I'm one of the two crazy ass motherfuckers who decided that editing 'My Immortal' was a good plan. I haven't even started yet and I know this is going to end in tears, cigarettes and a whole lot of vodka.
The purpose of this is, you guessed it, to edit 'My Immortal' in attempt to discover if the quality of the story improves once you're actually able to read it. Okay, let's be honest, we all know the answer to that. Yet I'm still here, all ready to go. We're gonna do this shit.
AN: Special fangs (Get it? Because I'm gothic) to my girlfriend (Ew, not in that way!) Raven, AKA bloodytearz666 for helping me with this story and spelling. You rock! Justin, you're the love of my depressing life. You rock too! MCR ROCK!
Hi. My name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way. I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back. I have icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: If you don't know who she is, get the hell out of here!). I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie. I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). I'm a goth, in case you couldn't tell, and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example, today I;m wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them.
"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was Draco Malfoy!
"Nothing." he said shyly.
But then I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.
AN: Is it good? Please tell me! Fangs!
Editor's Note- Okay, to be fair, chapter one wasn't all that challenging. I guess we have Raven to thank for that. And I cannot believe I just said that.
I left 'limpid tears' there because I have no idea what she meant to say.
My main issue so far with editing is that I don't want to fuck with the actual story itself. I want to fix the spelling and grammar but without changing what Tara's written too much.
Christ, I'm a first year Uni student studying Chinese and this is the most difficult shit I've ever done.